I /thik/ the only issue left would be the freaking trail x( (Also, I totally didnt upload the right pic for the left side, the gap between the leg was paler and was solid grey. I fixed this with a gradient on the right pic :))

are you asking for me to redline a fold for the train?

If it's any possible, yes please? ;____; I dont even know how to do it anymore. I tried every kind of trail possible /flails

Not sure if this idea helps:

YES it really does! ❤️ I'll try that right now and and and... and hope I got that darn train thing right!

I hope you don't mind me adding a little input. I haven't started work with my tablet yet, so maybe I shouldn't be talking, but I do see some things...Most particularly with the sleeves.

The spot where it attaches at the shoulder still looks a bit odd to me, like it doesn't actually go around the arm. It looks better than it did last time I checked it, but I think maybe a little more shading might help. Even if it's attached at the chest, the fabric is going to follow the curve of the arm.

The overall sleeve looks improved too, but still not convincing. Consider gravity. The fabric is going to bunch more under those threads holding the jewels, because the weight of the jewels will pull on it. And if the thread is meant to be tightened so the weight of the jewels doesn't make it sag, than the fabric would bunch still more. It also doesn't quite look like the jewels rest against the arm, but they probably would.

The drapery in the bottom of the dress is looking really good, but the sleeves are still missing something. Overall, this is a really tough design even though it looks somewhat simple. I don't envy you at all. Just keeping toughing it out, and maybe look around for a drapery tutorial or two. I actually love to do clothing design, so I know from experience that drapery is a bitch. :( Best of luck and I hope it comes together.

(LOL dog is NOT the word I used...)

Alright, im stumped on that one, really D|

Your custom clothing Angelic Tousle was denied for the following reason : • OVERLAY: Over-sharpened artwork • NOTE: Thank you for the edit you've made; it looks much less sharp in places. Unfortunately, some of the lineart looks sharp, particularly the curve at the top left and some of the lighter, inner lineart.

I tried fixing it, but I can't for the life of me figure out what they mean by 'some of the lighter, inner lineart' being oversharpened, as in where. It's the third time I try to fix it, so I've probably become blind and cant see it myself anymore lol

Lineart looks sharp because it's too thin, inner lineart may refer to the strand around eye area, on the side of the hair =3

I'm afraid that any thicker lineart is going to look obnoxiously bold though, no? D| I know that the staff usually makes exception for paler stuff, and allow slightly thinner lines for those.

I'll definitely check for the eye area, thanks!

Actually, it's the other way around xD Lighter colors usually blend the black lineart, so it need to be thicker in order to actually appear black =/ Besides, I think you make the lineart right, only on the left-top curve it's so thin it looks pixelated.

Really? I,ve submitted so many lighter wigs, where they told me to thin out the lineart compared to my darker recolours, because it looked too contrasting. Sometimes I really dont know what their standards are ;____;

I'll go and fix all of that though, thanks hun!

My case was different =/ Both wigs I submitted, the lighter version made the lineart look too thin, specially comparing to the darker colors, so I had to enhance those =3 I think that's your case, because you picked the exact same color I used once that had the same problem. Plus, it also depends on the shape of the hair. I believe that since you used a long line (like I did again xD), it becomes very pixelated-look and lighter than it's supposed to be =/

Case-by-case are so confusing haha ;_____;

Well, that's why it's hard to juge CWs =/ Because what works with one item doesn't with the other... And I think it got better on the upper curve, now you need to fix the inner black lineart, the strand of hair coming away from the mass, still looks sharp :x

just to make sure, you're talking about the far right side, right? That black strand sticking out + the mass of darker area under it? x3

(ahaha yeah, I totally got a flashback of when you first started helping me with my first cws xD)

The left part from our point of view :D <<<--- (like that)

Hahah it fells like a long time ago already x)

I think Kelzca is right that it looks darker then the other lines the whole side but I don't know much about cws other then buying them >.>

Looking geeeewd c: Personally I think that strand on the top right can be completely removed. I don't know - I find it distracting! Also, some light strands near the crown are a bit pixelated, there's one particular strand that is a straight line where the pixels are visible.

Oh my that is older! The wig was accepted meanwhile haha but thanks x3

Oh wow, I can't believe I didn't notice the date XD. Great to see it got through :3.