Definitely an improvement. Its so cute! It could be my monitor so you're going to want a second opinion because I could be way off but some of the shading especially around where his legs attach to his body looks a little gray, which I know is a big pet peeve of the staff. :P Like I said though it could just be my monitor.

A lot less blurry now! :D (Talk to me on msn ❤)

The eyes look definitely better, but the fur.. Reminds me of a chicken's feathers. D: Maybe changing the color of the lines would help. C:

Oh ohh, it is possible actually! x3 I'll have to double check that, and you're sure right, the staff hates gray artwork, they nitpick a lot on that one xD

Good luck getting it completed, I'd love to see the finished product when you do. :)

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Chicken feathers? ;_____; Wowow, I definitely need to check that lol I'll try to make the fur more defined, maybe that'll help x3

IThis is a commission for someone actually, but I'll ping you once it's done for sure x3

Thanks hun!

LOL Fineeee, tonight then. :K

I dont really see the point of giving you a silent treatment IF YOU ARE STALKING ON SUBETA, you know ;________;

Like on 's signature, the 's fur might be a useful reference or guide on fur texture. C:

Ahaha so you might as well just chat with me on msn. 0=)

And then you'll come back from your exam and tell me that it was super hard, and I'll feel bad because I will have distracted you all week? Uhmm. No :(

Ohhhh thank you! That certainly does help for the texture!

:( Fine I'll try to study. Dx boop

old > new > >

I am stillll... not convinced lol I tried to have a close up of the racoon companion for the shading texture, and I'm not sure I got anything right, quite frankly.

The texture right now is kind of pretty! But, it changed the color, and pretty much made the shading fade away. Also, the line art of the cat's eye lightened. I love the shading, but I can't really say I'm a fan of the color/shading right now~

Oh, I added a screen layer to the cat xD I was wondering if it was too dark actually, so I added a layer.

Does that look better ?D|

Yes, yes it does! ❤️ Although not to sound a bit choosy or picky (haha), but maybe you could make the color look a little less duller? If you stare at it long enough, you can say that the color fades out a bit (what am I thinking haha!). Oh, and I'd love to see a white/grey recolor of this! ❤️

More vibrant? ;D

Better! C': ❤️

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Thank you! ❤️

Puuuuuuurrrfect! (cheesey, I know, I couldn't stop myself) XD