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Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
Surraya
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I love the new ontra, no need to change it in my opinion _

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Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
Mayano
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The revamp is adorable!!! ^.^

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Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
Don't toy with
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Love, love, love the new design! The addition of the ears, the head shape, and the "liveliness" of the eyes really make it. The additional fins on the tail and "less fluff" make it seem more aquatic too~

Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
Junior Archaeologist
Phayom
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The revamp is adorable. I actually like the Ontra a bit more after seeing the revamp..the ears are probably my favourite part.

Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
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Speiro
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I keep playing with this in photoshop. I need a real hobby. D:

Original ---> Edit

I tried getting rid of the forehead "seam" everyone's been talking about, and also decided to play with the shoulder a little because some people have mentioned a lack of neck definition.


Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
Alliesaur
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I love the new head shape, and the shading on the tail is brilliant, but something is super off-putting about the ears... I'm not sure if they need to stand out more, but at the moment it just doesn't look right. Everything else is great though!

Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
IronicScorpio
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Xefesir

At first, I didn't like the Ontra, but with this revamp I would definitely get one :3

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Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
IronicScorpio
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Xefesir

At first, I didn't like the Ontra, but with this revamp I would definitely get one :3

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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
Kel
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Kel

If this revamp is approved, I'm considering get one ontra, it's just so freaking cute! ❤️ The only thing I miss are the eyes corner with that little black bits (no idea how to call that part xD). Also, the right eye fells more triangular then the left, so it would be a good idea to round the outside part a little.

Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
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I love everything about this. I'd totally get an ontra in this style. My only issue is the forehead seam ^^;

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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
Karu
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Quote by Speiro
I keep playing with this in photoshop. I need a real hobby. D:</p>
<p>
Original ---&gt; Edit</p>
<p>I tried getting rid of the forehead &quot;seam&quot; everyone&;s been talking about, and also decided to play with the shoulder a little because some people have mentioned a lack of neck definition.

Whoa! Your edit is perfect!

|:3|

Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
Saiava
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Shereia

Not sure if it was mentioned, but perhaps the head should be positioned in a similar fashion as the old Ontra.

Otherwise, I believe the revamp is very nice, and contrary to a seemingly popular critique, I love the extra fins :)

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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
Lantern
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Ito

Smaller eyes would look a bit nicer. I mean the eyes are cute as heck, but yeah I'd like it more if they were smaller. BUT THOSE EARS ARE STILL PERFECT.

Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
SolusAurora
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Moons Doom

Immediate impression is that I love the new version, but I see now what people were talking about with the forehead seam. I love the more defined head and realistic approach though. Makes me want to think twice about changing one of my pets back to an Ontra.


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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
Milo
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Plutonium

I don't like how meek the new design looks. The raised eyebrows and laid back ears make it look scared. I would really love a more neutral, or even confident expression! Aside from the expression, beautiful work.

Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
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Quote by Speiro
I keep playing with this in photoshop. I need a real hobby. D:</p>
<p>
Original ---&gt; Edit</p>
<p>I tried getting rid of the forehead &quot;seam&quot; everyone&;s been talking about, and also decided to play with the shoulder a little because some people have mentioned a lack of neck definition.

LOVE THE CHANGES YOU MADE. Maybe the changed one is better x)

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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
meowth
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Munchies

oh my god the revamp is so cute

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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
Zay
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Riza

As the owner of an Ontra, I really really do love the new version. I love the ears, the extra tail fins, the extra spotting all of it.

However, there are two edits I like as well those would be Lea's:

Quote by Lea
Decided to try a quick edit to show what changes I&;d personally make c:</p>
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<p>Made the eyes a little smaller since it really did look sort of chibi to me beforehand, tried to make the expression a little less timid. I think that adding more &;alert&;-looking ears really helps make the ontra look less shy, though obviously the actual artist would do MUCH better than I did. :P I added a little bit of lighter color to the area of the tail I was complaining about earlier hahaha, feel free to ignore that though. I also widened the muzzle a bit, because personally I think the ontra would look fantastic with a slightly wider one! It makes the face less similar to the feli without being too much wider, and helps make it a little more otter-ish to me, rather than having such a cat-like face. (Which I don&;t mind too terribly, but I just think it&;d be cuter and a little less &quot;merkitty&quot;-ish and more otter-kitty this way.)

and Speiro's:

Quote by Speiro
I keep playing with this in photoshop. I need a real hobby. D:</p>
<p>
Original ---&gt; Edit</p>
<p>I tried getting rid of the forehead &quot;seam&quot; everyone&;s been talking about, and also decided to play with the shoulder a little because some people have mentioned a lack of neck definition.

The slightly wider muzzle looks even better and fixing the shoulder, smaller eyes, and taking out the forehead "seam" looks great too! Even if these changes don't get made I love the new Ontra so much.


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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
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Trystan Alexander

I adore it! I wasn't as much of a fan of Ontras but the new design is simply delightful! I love the cheeky looking face and the limbs seem much more 'realistic' in the sense that they remind me much more of that of a cat or (obviously ^^') an otter

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Jun 4, 2015 10 years ago
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Samus

LOVE the revamped Ontra, and if it is released as-is I'll be morphing Snickerdoodles into one! I always thought the species was cute but not enough to want one. Now I'm in love!

Idk how long it's been... but I'd love a Celinox revamp..

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