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Jun 30, 2017 8 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

Very whimsical and beautiful. I don't really have anything bad to say. Love how you got the flowers through out!! 10/10

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Jul 2, 2017 8 years ago
Tennyo
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7/10

I think your avatar is very cute! :)

However, some of the pieces don't feel like they match. The trees in the foreground seem too pastel for your background. I think maybe remove the background and stick to a pastel color palette. And maybe add some shoes and something around your waste.

Jul 3, 2017 8 years ago
Millie
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Nii

8/10! I love the avatar esp. the face but it feels like it's still lacking a few things or just somewhat empty? Overall, I like it anyways!

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Jul 4, 2017 8 years ago
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Gerommey
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9/10. the colours and shading involved in your items fit so well with together! the background next to it also gives off a welcoming and somewhat cute vibe, which i like. good good you did well.

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Jul 4, 2017 8 years ago
EmbarrassedGhost
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9.5/10 - ahhh it's so cute! the only thing I could say is maybe add a bit of a background, like [item2=Soothing Green Tea Bath Bomb]

Jul 6, 2017 8 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

I like it looks like you were just at the lake with your dog. Looks a little off center to me for some reason though, maybe the mouth and hair are throwing me off. ^^; 9/10

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Jul 6, 2017 8 years ago
stjarne
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Gotchie

- when I first saw your HA I almost thought it had two sets of arms, haha. xD the small capelet and the arms covering its mouth just look a bit odd, especially since I don't see hands or even a mouth at all. i understand the capelet is there to cover its original set of arms but it still takes the shape of them. the hair choice is nice and it fits, but the color doesn't seem to match to me. maybe a white-ish or blue color would balance it all out? i don't know. it might also look better if you added a lowerback item. that is optional though. the only real problem to me is the hair color.

the color combo is used a lot but you used it very well here, and it's very cute. the makeup is simple but it fits well. i also admire the foreground you used. 8/10 :)


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Jul 9, 2017 8 years ago
Fuel
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Viable

- I LOVE the color you've used, in fact I think I want to switch my HA up soon with something iridescent looking because I feel like it's the way to go right now. Love the entire face combination- I can definitely see how you're tying in the glasses with the shoes and other small pops of oranges/yellow-ish colors.

The only thing that bugs me the tiniest bit, is that it seems super busy in the center of her chest. I can't really tell what she's wearing or what's going on right there. I'm guessing it's the knot of the shaw, but it detracts away a little bit. Absolutely love the style of the whole thing though! 8.5/10

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Jul 10, 2017 8 years ago
jumpingbean1838
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Praelia

I really like the hair/headpiece combo, the only thing thats sightly 'off' for me is the hair, eyeshadow, and bracelet all have this darker red tone going on but your pants, sleeves and the things by your shoes are are a much brighter orange. I think if you stick with either all orange or all red it might be more cohesive, and still make the aqua color pop!

Overall though I think this is a great HA and I love the layering and facial expression

7.5/10

Jul 11, 2017 8 years ago
Silvermoon
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Eternal Eclipse

I like your theme. It's like a dancer/shepherd/guardian combination XD The background is a bit dull though? Seems like you're standing on a dirt clump in the middle of nowhere (unless that's your intention). Perhaps a more deserty background? Something like (costume trunk item) or could work. Overall,I really like the choice of hair, outfit, and veil. 7/10

Jul 12, 2017 8 years ago
JayJays
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8/10 Colours look nice, and I like how everything blends in with the mist and background. Not a huge fan of those lips, they're a bit old. Also think the face in general is a little plain.

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Jul 18, 2017 8 years ago
Grishiu
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Picturs

10/10

I really like your whispy and firey HA c: Also, the playful smirks on both you and your companion tie it really well together~

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Jul 18, 2017 8 years ago
Ari_403
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10/10 Your HA looks so cool! I really love the color palette you used and the idea.

Jul 23, 2017 8 years ago
Chocolate
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Wow! Absolutely stunning! 10/10! The colors go together absolutely beautifully. Great choice of items! If the hair is customly colored via salon, if day to make the top be more of a peach fine, but otherwise, stupendous!

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Aug 7, 2017 8 years ago
Martel
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8/10 The colors all compliment each other without any one overwhelming the other. It looks like an actual thing I could wear out in the summer and be super comfortable and stylish in. The only thing I might add is a very light simple background to add just a little more color variety without unbalancing the outfit itself.

Aug 9, 2017 8 years ago
Kiasrai
birch please
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9.5/10! I LOVE the pastels! So cute! I only mention this because it's one of my favorite items, but I think the would suit your HA nicely!

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Aug 11, 2017 8 years ago
Siebren
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Aspity

9.5/10! I really, really love this avatar! You did a fantastic job keeping the colours so consistent and kept a good theme. Makes me think of some kind of water nymph! However, I think the eyes being a golden colour would lend itself to another pop of gold. Maybe a necklace or a splash of body gold like . Just something small to bring it fully together.

Aug 12, 2017 8 years ago
Lifeislife
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Pepeh

9/10 love the colors and the dress! maybe use so as to make the background darker (its too bright)

Aug 13, 2017 8 years ago
Objections
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Carmine

I adore it. The face is gorgeous, the colors are beautiful together, and I love the grungy look to it. 9/10, not sure what to recommend honestly!

Aug 14, 2017 8 years ago
JayJays
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8/10 It's currently very, very busy. I think perhaps it needs a bit of simplification. Colours look really nice and soft though and well put together.

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