10/10, i really love your HA! i love how the pink flowers on the HA tie in with the pink flowers in the background, and the neutral/pale colors work really well with each other.

9/10 really love the monochromatic palette you're using, and I think choosing that jumper with the vertical stripes was an excellent decision to break up the greys and add some texture. the underlying note of warmth is also working very well in your favor, love it! not sure about the overalls (just as a matter of personal taste), though I like what the gradient is doing for the bottom part of the body. I'd personally love to see a defined waist and trousers on this HA to break the body into thirds.

9/10. The chest piece is doing something odd, might be a clipping error, and I wish the hair had cream or offwhite shading to match the leg fur. That said, I love the layers and soft watercolour like effects you have the the golds and browns, as well as how well you coordinated it all.

6/10 I can kind of see what you're going for and there's some nice pieces in there, but they don't come together that well. The BG seems a bit too bright for the more muted colors of everything else.

10/10

I'm a real sucker for starry/moon themes! All your items go together wonderfully, both in color and style! I especially love the hair and crescent forehead piece!

Whoa, I'm getting some creepy vibes from your HA. Think it's because of the bizarre facial features. For that reason I'm going to go with 5/10. :/ (Sorry) Overall I'm just not sure what you're going for. The eyes do not match whatsoever, and the face paint is particularly out of place. Ignoring the face, I like where is going. Perhaps add some pink or red shoes to match the sweater and/or hair tie.

9/10 Your HA is cohesive overall, I can totally see someone pulling this outfit out of their wardrobe and going for a stroll in the summer sun. The orange of the shirt ties in nicely with the hatband and those freckles are utterly adorable (though not as adorable as the corgi). This definitely qualifies as a quintessential easy-breezy HA in my book. =0)

10/10 kick A** woo maybe a darker necklace?

6/10. I think you could find shoes that match the color scheme better as well as a jacket. I think the harsh colors from the black and brown take away from the dress and the background.

@ Zeus Very interesting HA. 8/10 I like the use of backgrounds here and think they meld well together. Overall, I think you've done a good job of unifying theme in your items. That being said, I find the first chomper thing to be out of place, as with the forehead symbol (but less so than the fire.) Also have you checked out the chapstick items? They have a few good mouths that might work with your facial hair.

[edit] Thanks for the review! The white stripes are my legacy face paint from the 2009 Islanders vs Pirates (Omen Islands) plot. :)

I think this is super cute. 9/10. The only thing I would change is the white face paint-esque feature on the nose.

8/10 I really love the background you have, I think it has kind of a fun grungy-earthy texture to it. The choice of colors is very cohesive as well. However, the lips and eyes don't match very well for me. I think it's because they're both very intense and on one face it has kind of an uncanny valley thing going on.

9/10 maybe just to dark for me but i really like your layering

8/10

I really love your color scheme - purple, blue, green, with a hint of pink. The companions work really well with this and I love how you hint at a nature theme by using the leafy tights and all the animal/insect companions.

Constructive criticism:

• The hair lacks color compared to everything else. This causes it to stand out but not in an interesting way imo. Maybe this could be helped by adding a hat or even a headband or hairpin item that matches your color scheme?

• I think your HA would benefit a lot from a thematic background. Because it already hints at a nature theme, I get the feeling like I want to be more immersed in a nature setting, so a jungle background or forest background - or any nature background - would be great! Something exotic, perhaps. My one suggestion is to keep it dark, so that it will contrast with your human character rather than feeling noisy/distracting.

• This is super tiny nitpick, but I think you could improve the depth of the dragonflies, for instance, right now I can see some are in front of the HA, but one of them seems to be behind her hair. Overall it's ambiguous to me and I think it would be helped if you moved the dragonflies to behind the HA but in front of the background, and separated it from the person with a foreground that plays with lighting - If the dragonflies are muted a bit behind different lighting it will be clearer where they are and will give a better sense of perspective to the HA.

Just my two cents, hope this helps :)

9/10 thanks for the advice i added a few things i appreciate it.. i really love the way you put together your outfit.. maybe a necklace or ring? i think its preetty thoo

7/10 The hair and headpiece is nicely layered, but it looks like it belongs to a different avatar entirely. I think overall there is too much colour and too many things happening at once. Perhaps go for more simple leggings or remove the waist item (the staff).

8/10 You match your little cake friend very nicely, but it feels a little plain to me. Maybe add a background?

8/10

I really what you've put together, the lights and the willow tree background and the plants for the foreground items make a very cosy vibe. I think I nearly see your actual HA behind the willow branch but I think it looks super cool just to have the Zentu in the foreground. I think the color scheme goes together really well and overall I love this look!

The colour matching go well with your theme. Do not need any change with your theme.

6/10

I'm a fan of the color usage. I like how you used bright popping colors. Although I'm not too sure about the orange tail. Maybe a pink one? Also, I'm not very fond of the basic avatar eyes and mouth. Some pink lips and pretty (blue?) eyes would be a big improvement. Lastly and this may just be my pickiness coming out, but it looks like the hair is stuck in the tail. Though that's nothing a adjustment to layering can't fix.

[edit] Looking back now, I see that the orange tail as well as the rest of your color scheme seems based off of your koi fish. If that's the case the tail color makes more sense, but I still seems a bit much.