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Apr 29, 2015 10 years ago
JayJays
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8.5/10 This is strangely cool. I feel like it shouldn't work but it somehow does. Personally I think the ring stands out a bit so maybe replace that.

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Apr 30, 2015 10 years ago
Grishiu
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Picturs

8/10 Love the colours~ There seems to be a little too much jewelry on the waist. Consider removing the netting or balancing it throughout the HA :)

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Apr 30, 2015 10 years ago
Aiyame
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9/10

It looks very cool and mysterious -- I like it, but I think it needs a little bit more... Something. It's nice at first glance, but after looking a while, it feels somewhat empty.

Apr 30, 2015 10 years ago
CaveAdsum
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Marreta

7/10 I really like the avatar and I would give it a 10 if not for those animals! They just don't fit! Also the flower is weird. But the Background, face and dressing is great! I'd just add a nice lipstick.

May 1, 2015 10 years ago
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Babs
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Tilly

8/10! I really like the actual avatar, and I like how the donkey matches your outfit c: That's cute. But I think a different backdrop would go much better with it. Maybe something with blues rather than pinks? I also have a thing against the umbrellas this year, but that's just me. I didn't count it against you or anything haha ouo;;

May 3, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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10/10 I found that back ground to be one of the hardest to work with out of the new Vesnai line. I like what you did it is simple, elegant, and the colors work fantastically. I think I would have gone with maybe the plum body blush instead.

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May 3, 2015 10 years ago
brooke15
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torqourse

7/10 I like the color palette, just looks bunched up. I get that it's the belts that makes it look that way, but less is more :)

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May 3, 2015 10 years ago
LinKai
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Anna

6/10 I'd change the shoes for sure, the yellow doesn't quite match the gold nor the hanging lights. Idk quite how to feel about the teal/peach matching, but it works

May 8, 2015 10 years ago
Radish
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I loooove the shade of pink you've chosen, but I feel like the black accents on the dress are very bold and dark compared to the lighter shadows of the hair and background. I think you should also consider utilizing the whole background instead of just the cutout you're using right now, but that's just a random thought. Overall quite beautiful! I like the foreground effect, it adds a lot! 8/10

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May 9, 2015 10 years ago
Snowy_637
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9/10 The colours match so well everything really goes great together, i love it! The only thing i would possibly change would be the background, i think it makes the outfit look a little dull so maybe try something a bit brighter?

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May 9, 2015 10 years ago
Evalynn
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Moxxie

8/10 I get a cruella devil feel from this and I love it! I'm not a fan of the sunglasses... and I think it would be super cute if you could add a dalmatian (i think there are some on the site)

May 9, 2015 10 years ago
JayJays
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6.5/10 You have a lot of statement items on and it becomes a bit much. Perhaps go with the underwater theme and nix the belt, icicles and flower then go for something more aquatic.

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May 11, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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9/10 I love the outfit and the colors work very nicely. I'd like to say maybe try to find a background to give this dancer a story.

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May 12, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

The eyes kind of freak me out, they are disproportionately big. And the bandeau doesn't quite match. Overall I really like the feel of it though. 8.5/10

May 13, 2015 10 years ago
Radish
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I really like the overall muted colour/green scheme, but all the vibrant colours are concentrated around the head. And I'm not just talking about the hair, which actually works really well; the bright green eye makeup is what stands out a bit too much. Also, I appreciate the simplicity, but it's simple to the point of making me feel like something critical is missing. 7/10

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May 13, 2015 10 years ago
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Lady Brienne

9/10! I really like the overall theme here. However, since the background is pretty plain, you might benefit from something in the foreground to break it up. Also, the lipstick seems a little pink for the rest of the orange/red scheme. But otherwise it's very well put-together! I love those boots, might have to buy some myself :)

May 17, 2015 10 years ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

10/10 don't really have much to say… it's very nice and cohesive, everything goes together super well.

May 29, 2015 10 years ago
Aurelie
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9/10 Your HA is really cute, but the hair covers a bit too much of the outfit for my taste.

May 30, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

I like the simplicity, but not a huge fan of how you are naked under the sheer dress.

8/10

May 31, 2015 10 years ago
Yer a wizard
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8/10

I like the colours and the lights are very interesting, they complement the background and the hair; however, the top and bottom don't look harmonious; better coloured bottoms would suit the overall theme more. The shoes aren't the best fit either, but as previously stated the colors are beautiful. :)

[edit] Mine is referencing Turanga Leela from Futurama from the episode (S07E08) "Fun on a Bun."

I think the look is too simple as well. I wanted to use the Light-Up Flying Car (it's expensive), but I just realized that there's a Flying Car and it is not that expensive. Time to upgrade! Here's the day and night version of what she'll look like:

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