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Dec 16, 2015 10 years ago
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Percival

Dystopian stuff is great fun!

And wow, that is great! I can't think of anything at all to change; that's great!

" Okay, so you’ve made some bad decisions. You’ve hurt people. You’ve hurt yourself. You’ve stumbled through life from one self-inflicted disaster to the next without anything even approaching a plan. To which I say: welcome aboard. Maybe you’re not good... but you’re sure as hell good enough. "

Dec 16, 2015 10 years ago
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Maven

Everything looks perfect! I don't see a need for any changes.

Dec 16, 2015 10 years ago
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Skula

I have Lot set up for you and these were a pair of long stories for 6 mil.

I have Lot for you and these were two standard stories for a total of 3 mil.

I have Lot for you and this story was a standard at 1.5 mil.

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Dec 17, 2015 10 years ago
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Yay! Thank you so much. Here's the next pair.

Pet 1

Pet Name:Le Diablo

Legion

Setting: Anywhere you want to put him.

Personality: He is a hard worker that delights in his job, and he expects the same from others that work with him. He loves the anticipation of what he will find at each new site, and is excited when it ends up being something spectacular, which it often is at his level. If its just ordinary, the job is still fun and they have work to do, and still might discover something interesting or new. He is normally good natured, and has mellowed through time. But he got his nickname from when he was younger and was much more volatile. It still shows up sometimes. He will speak his mind and if he is angry at someone he will tell them and why, in no uncertain terms. But by now, he has also learned not to let his anger at one person or thing be carried over to everyone else.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult Spectrum Keeto

Likes/Dislikes: He likes to get up before dawn wherever in the world he is and watch the sunrise. His favorite mineral is sugilite/richterite. He has no use at all for people that go on digs and then don't want to work and complain constantly or cause problems. They are shipped home with no credits if they are University students and black marks in their files if it's their job. He simply will not put up with it. He will help and he will teach, but he will not coddle. He tells them exactly what he expects as soon as they arrive, and if they do not settle in they are sent packing.

Other characters to include: His minion Senkar the Kiteli and his girlfriend Charisa, a Blacklight keeto.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: He is a Geologist and Mineralogist. He loves rocks and crystals, their beauty and their history, and he has written several well received books. His main job is to travel Subeta with other scientists for the Subetan Geological Survey as the leader in charge. But he also works for the Natural Museum, collecting the best display minerals, esp geodes. His second in command is also his girlfriend, and they have been working together for years. It is comfortable and they are a good team. At the next site he plans on proposing. He has had an engagement bracelet made for her with amethyst, her favorite, for a long time. The main stone is a piece of amethyst geode that he considered one of the finest he had ever seen. He immediately knew it was for her, though the gigantic geode it came from had long since been put on display at the museum. He gathered the other pieces slowly, looking for the particular shades of purple that would show the geode in the best light. The bracelet would fit above her left paw very well and the design was strong and tough, yet still beautiful. This complemented their lifestyle and their relationship perfectly. He hoped she loved it as much as he did.

Pet 2

Pet Name:Cooch [pet not found]

Setting: A spewing volcano merging with a thunderstorm, creating incredible lightning near the sea.

Personality: Strong, decisive, opinionated, but not shallow.

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PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: A young Adult Custom Storm Archan. He has a light grey body with dark purple swirls and stripes, silver paws, and a deep purple ruff and pouf on his tail. Lightning forms around and from him, striking ceaselessly.

Likes/Dislikes: Not surprisingly, he loves storms, any storms - the bigger the better - and esp lightning, and anything to do with them. He loves the crackling energy and the force of the winds; the deep rolling thunder, crashing of waves, and rain beating down everything in sight. He absolutely hates doldrums and flat seas and waiting in boredom.

Other characters to include: His minion Spitzle the Lightning Sylph.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Have fun! lol

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Dec 17, 2015 10 years ago
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May I have a slot? :)

Form 1 Pet Name: Kellach Setting: Something winter-y? Arctic Frost? He lives in a log cabin. Personality: Grumpy

Dislikes: Snow fairies. But they really like him and follow him around, which is why his TC is snow fairies.

Likes: Sleeping in front of his fireplace.

Anything else? His name means Strife.

Form 2 Pet Name: Adron Setting: The Arctic? Personality: He's an environmentalist and very concerned with global warming and climate change.

Dislikes: Global warming, ice caps melting, polar bears starving and having to dig through human garbage for food xD

Likes: Polar Bears, other arctic animals, the stillness and quiet of the Arctic, snow, cold

Dec 19, 2015 10 years ago
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First drafts for Diablo and Cooch. I was a little unsure where to take Cooch's story since I really wanted to keep the natural theme going and that makes it hard to have him interact with others. (He seems more like the secluded type anyway, living in a seaside cliff.) I really wanted to capture the raw power of nature with his story but if you feel I've left out any important details, I'll be glad to add them.

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Dec 19, 2015 10 years ago
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Both are great as usual! I really like what you did with Cooch. Don't need to change anything. :)

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Dec 20, 2015 10 years ago
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Sounds good. :) I have Lot and these were a long and a standard for 4.5 mil.

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Dec 21, 2015 10 years ago
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Thanks! Have another two when you have the time.

Pet 1

Pet Name: Aste [pet not found]

Setting: Veta Lake Yip Colony. Her den links up to others' as well as outside, and has several comfortable rooms and one big one for crafts and playing in bad weather. Plenty of room outside for socializing with others in the colony, play, and hunting insects etc. too.

Personality: High energy, like all Jollins, but likes the calm times too.

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PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Young adult Lilac Jollin with eight puppies.

Likes/Dislikes: She loves to knit and crochet, and does some origami. She likes to color and do arts and crafts with the kids, esp on rainy or snowy days, and often Rio joins in.

Other characters to include: Her minion Minx the Myliege, her mate Rio, also a Lilac Jollin, and eight puppies - five girls and three boys. Normally only four are born in a litter, so even with her energy they are hard to keep up with and entertained. lol

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: This is her and Rio's first litter and sometimes they are a little overwhelmed but are good parents. They get a lot of helpful (but also unasked for and unwelcome) advice from the others of their Yip.

Pet 2

Pet Name: Zilvra

Zilvra

Setting: Beautiful, magical, and luxuriously appointed series of tiered caves near the sea. Her home is heavily guarded, warded, and protected by magical and physical means. The bottom level regularly floods with the tide, the middle level only sometimes with a storm, and the upper and largest level is always dry. She sells her jewelry at a close by high end market and also takes commissions. She also has a website and sells over the internet.

Personality: She is very smart, not seriously vain, but definitely not at all humble either. She knows the high quality and value of her craftsmanship and will not be cheated. If she and her minion are treated fairly and well, and her work given the acclaim it deserves, she is expansive and in a good humor. Otherwise, she has been known to put curses on items from afar (esp if they are stolen) and on Subetans themselves or that which they hold dear.

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PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult Hydrus Serpenth

Likes/Dislikes: She is a Gemologist and Jeweler. She loves crafting beautiful and fanciful jewelry of all kinds and does so for many species. She likes luxurious comfort and treats Darkmoon and herself often with small delicacies. She hates it when people try and belittle her things when haggling and will not sell to them. In fact she does not haggle at all unless it is a trade, and then she makes sure she gets the better deal or it is fair to both.

Other characters to include: Her minion Darkmoon the Halloeve. He loves her and protects her like she does him, and is far more watchful and wary than he appears when they are not at home, just like her.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Can't really think of anything.

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Dec 22, 2015 10 years ago
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First drafts for Aste and Zilvra. I wanted to get these to you tonight as I likely won't have any more drafting time before Christmas. (Though I will have vacation the week after, so if you would like to make another request, I will happy to work with more of your characters then. :D)

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Dec 22, 2015 10 years ago
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I love them! Thank you! Please set up the trade. I appreciate you getting them to me - this week is busy for all of us, and I really didn't expect it, but I'm so glad you did. You must have so many other things to do. I have three more until I get more pets, which will likely be after New Years. lol But thank you for letting me know. I will send two more when I get the details worked out sometime this week. Happy Luminaire and Merry Christmas! :)

By the way, love the blue hair. What is it called?

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Dec 22, 2015 10 years ago
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Believe it or not, I'm actually ahead on my holiday to-do list for once. xD. Other than a few events over my vacation week, though, I'm going to have a lot of open writing times so I look forward to more requests. For the current batch, I have Lot for you and these were a long and standard for a total of 4.5 mil.

The wig is called Giselle Underwater Gurl Waves. It was a Subeatique item but I think it's part of a retired set.

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Dec 22, 2015 10 years ago
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Sent offer. That's wonderful you are done and now just get to enjoy yourself. I helped clean my Mom's house today to be ready for Christmas, and have to wrap presents for my friend tonight to give out tomorrow, and then I'm done until Thursday night when I make my deviled eggs for Friday. Yay!

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Dec 23, 2015 10 years ago
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Stories sent. :) I guess I do have a few dishes to make for the meal (and pies!) but since these are a family effort, they don't seem as much like work as the shopping and decorating. It's always fun to make those holiday foods. My family has a fruit and nut fudge recipe we make every year along with the more traditional sugar cookies.

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Dec 23, 2015 10 years ago
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Hi! Hope you enjoyed your Christmas. Mine was really nice. It wouldn't let me post twice, so I edited my last post. Here are the next two pets.

Pet 1 Pet Name: Cloudflare [pet not found]

Setting: Atebus

Personality: Curious, intense, almost driven, but also charismatic and interesting. He loves to teach and makes learning fun.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult Galactic Keeto

Likes/Dislikes: Loves anything to do with Atebus and the solar system around it, loves teaching about Atebus at the University in Ziara City, and really likes the fruit from Ikumoradeekanox. He dislikes having to go to Subeta, but makes regular trips to teach one semester a year about Atebus at The University of Centropolis for the salary and to increase knowledge about the moon. His class always has a waiting list to get in and they keep trying to no avail to get him to teach more classes there. But he developed a popular student exchange program between the two Universities and a scholarship fund to enable more students to learn first hand on the moon.

Other characters to include: His minion Silazia the Sirius, who goes everywhere with him, even to his classes.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: Cloudflare has Phd's in Atebus History, Atebus Language, and Atebus Geology, and a Masters in Atebus Geography. He has written many books, some of which are used regularly as school textbooks. Most of his students are older, but every summer he volunteers for a month at a special camp on Atebus for younger kids and teaches while leading field trips.

Pet 2 Pet Name: Moreau
moreau

Setting: Sacred lands

Personality: He is open minded, but also skeptical. He does not fall for scams, but when he does find something worthwhile he will examine it closely, esp if it involves healing, and will use it. He is very smart but cunning as well. He is normally kind and gentle, but when threatened will use his innate illusion abilities to hide himself and his minion and others. If that doesn't work he will attack with horns and hooves and is ferocious.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult Blacklight Neela

Likes/Dislikes: Loves medicine. (Of course he HAD to be a doctor...lol) Loves to help others heal and works with Selina. He is an M.D. and also an Herbalist. He uses modern medicine practices as well as old proven remedies. Moreau loves the morning fog and also loves to dance and is very good at it. He hates pirates and those who enslave others and any who prey upon the weak and sick.

Other characters to include: His minion Azdyr the Epicron and Selina the Healer.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: he works closely with Selina, but also will travel about to those in need of healing that can't get in to the Souk.

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Dec 28, 2015 10 years ago
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First drafts for Cloudflare and Moreau. Christmas was lovely this year, but unfortunately once I get through the holidays, all I have to look forward to until spring is a cold Minnesota winter. D: As always, please let me know any changes you would like to your stories. :)

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Dec 28, 2015 10 years ago
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Oh, these are wonderful! Thank you! Please send trade.

I do not envy you Minnesotan winters! I am in Texas and I'm cold now. I've always hated the furnace hot summers here but the fall and winter are mostly great. My favorite temps are 60's and 40's and we get those a lot. I love snow on the rare times we get it - like today, even tho there wasn't enough to really call it snow. lol Your winters would kill me! My friend lives in Shakopee or did. Now I can't remember where they moved, but its still close by there. I saw pics of this huge wall of snow on the side of their driveway that the kids made tunnels in and was just amazed. Last winter there were several times the schools closed because it was life threatening cold outside. OMG! Nope, too cold for me. lol

I know I'm jumping the gun, but here is the last pet I need a story for at the moment, when you have time. It won't be long before I get more pets I'm sure. lol

Pet 1 Pet Name: Shooting Star
Shooting Star

Setting: A beautiful secluded treehouse at Veta Lake where she and her husband are descendants from other pets relocated there long ago, and adapted well. She spends most of her time in a lovely office/library with a glass case holding two vintage typewriters and a collection of quills. The novels she has written are in a bookcase by themselves, surrounded by others with many more books, both fiction and non-fiction. One wall has framed copies of some of her best columns, and the three awards she has won for them, as well as her journalism diploma. On her desk beside her black laptop is another award she won for 'Best New Science Fiction Writer'. Her husband's office is next door and is similar to hers, tho with a different genre of books, mostly history and non-fiction.

Personality: In spite of being reclusive, she is light, bright, and mostly cheerful, with a wicked sense of humor that she shares with her husband.

Optional:

PoV: Whatever you think best.

Physical traits: Adult Lilac Noktoa

Likes/Dislikes: She loves to write and enjoys the development of a character and a story. She likes wine but drinks it sparingly, and never touches the hard stuff. She will sometimes speak at a sci-fi con for a healthy fee, but mostly for her fans, and gets many more invitations than she accepts. Rarely she will do a public book signing event, but will gladly sign her books for fans that send them to her through her publisher. She doesn't like being around too many others, and only puts up with being the center of attention for a short time. She never does book tours or talk shows.

Other characters to include: Her minion Mirren the Mirath, which helps in her research with knowledge from her crystal ball. She also authenticates and fills out the information with other sources, but it does give her invaluable details and directions to go. Also include her husband, Talmere, a Lilac noktoa as well, and his minion Saia the Serene. Talmere is a popular writer of mostly historical fiction novels full of action, but like Star is reclusive. They delight in each other's imagination and writing, help with the occasional phrasing or idea for each other and are very supportive.

Preferred Length: Standard or Long

Anything else?: She writes a column (sent by email) regularly for the Subeta Tribune as well as eagerly anticipated mystery/thriller novels in science fiction settings. She started using her pen name Steven Skyfall because in the beginning no publisher took her seriously simply because she was female. She resented having to use it at first, but that name opened doors and as she built a reputation for excellence, she also laughed all the way to the bank. Now it doesn't matter, because her fans couldn't care less that she is female and what her name really is, and they enjoy being 'in the know' around others who don't. The couple have six grown children and two grandchildren who live not far away that they see fairly often.

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Dec 29, 2015 10 years ago
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I have Lot for you and these were a pair of longs at 6 mil.

Yeah, Minnesota winter can be pretty unfriendly in terms of cold but this has been a mild year. We didn't really drop below 30s for temp until the week before Christmas. The funny thing is, I've been living up here and putting up with winter so long I couldn't imagine moving to a warmer climate. (My mind wavers on that when we drop to 20 below zero or colder, lol.) We're actually pretty far below average for snow...I don't think we've had our first foot yet.

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Dec 30, 2015 10 years ago
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Sent offer. Thank you!

It was always my dream that if I won the lottery we would travel about and find a waterfront place that is much much cooler in the summer and has distinct seasons with beautiful mountain views and build or remodel to get my dream house. It would have to be secluded (read no neighbors lol) yet provide all the amenities with shopping close by. It would be wonderful if my property was bordered by a national park or something so that it would be guaranteed to never be developed. I would also buy a property here because I can't stand to be away from my family too long. Then we would spend summer and fall in the dream house and winter and spring here and have the best of both worlds. Sigh.

Of course I can't imagine having to move my menagerie at all, much less every six months or so...lol

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Dec 30, 2015 10 years ago
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First draft for Shooting Star. This was a character I could very much relate to. :D

It sounds like you might enjoy eastern Colorado. I've only had the chance to go there in mid-summer but even then the mountain view is quite lovely. I know it is very common for people in this area to go down to Florida or Arizona at this time of year. I couldn't imagine trying to take care of two houses.

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