I'm really not seeing demand for the complex stories so I went ahead and turned that 5th slot into a normal one. I do have quite a list built so it may be a few days to a week before I'll have your draft but I will be able to start organizing ideas as soon as I get the form for your pet(s). :)
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Ah I forgot to mention, it would be great if you could turn my slot into complex? ^_^
No problem. :) I'll need a few extra days for this draft but with all the detail you've provided I can easily do a complex story for Cygne.
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Here is the first draft for Sandro. I decided to keep him as a turtle and set the story in NYC. I really tried to reference TMNT while giving Sandro a unique voice of his own. Please let me know any details you would like changed or anything you want added to the story.
Here is the first draft for Talyn. I tried to give him a fairly spontaneous personality since he is such a restless type and I also worked to show how he readily speaks his mind. Let me know any changes you'd like made.
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Awesome. :) That will be 1.5 mil on Lot and I will send you the full code for his profile. I'll also let you know when I have a draft for Sentella.
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Wow, it's super good! I'm very much happy with the output! If there was one thing I would change, it would be to add a word so as to make the word count 1337 because leet B-)
I'm blown away with how you wrote his origin, something I thought would be too difficult.
Here is the first draft for Zina. I'm at 1,478 words so I can keep you at a standard slot unless you would like me to add any more to the story. I will also be glad to make any changes you would like.
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Wow, thats lovely and you were fast :D! I really enjoyed it, but one thing maybe? At the last part, were you speak of the graves of the siblings - as Zina has some magical powers, could you add a part where she captures and saves a soul of a raven, who died, in a stone which will glow light blue after (as she has one on her necklace as well, the soul of the first raven who took care of her?) (uh, sorry for my bad english xD you know what I mean?) maybe connected with the part as she felt the pain of one of her ravens, feeling that he would die, so she would spread her wings into the night, so that his soul wouldn'tbe lost? I would also change the name of the birds as well, but I would do it afterwards as I love names with meanings (Zina means spiritual (and physical) beauty)
And don't be afraid, I am willing to pay any of your prices :) So if you are going to write more words, I will pay it ^^!
And may I have one question? If I would add/change things later one, still keeping your credits, would you mind that? And as I would do a profile with different div sections (and one just for credits) can I put your name up there or do you insist to keep your credit right after your story?
Thanks so much for the draft!
Here is an updated draft for Zina. I didn't know there was a raven present at the time she changed so I tried to add this by expanding the scene of her rebirth. I also changed the ending a bit to include the light blue stone and her reaction to one of the ravens dying.
Feel free to use whatever names feel right to you. I usually just put in generic names to keep the story going unless I'm given specific names to use. I am totally fine with a separate credits div.
I have no problem with additions and if you want to credit those to yourself I don't mind at all. If you want to change the structure you can even do something like Base Story by Pureflower though if the changes are mainly detail (making the trees oak instead of birch, that sort of thing) then the credit in place should work.
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is awesome :)!nHow much do I owe you and how many words do you wrote if I may ask?
Here is the first draft for Sentella. As always, let me know if you would like anything added or changed. :)
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Great! That will be 1.5 mil on Lot .
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May I have another slot? ^^
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Pet Name: Katos
Setting: Underwater, Omen Islands?
Personality: A trickster, mischievous, naughty, childish, but not mean spirited. He's kind when he needs to be.
Physical traits: Katos, Hydrus Ghostly
Likes/Dislikes: He likes to play pranks on people, especially tourists. Doesn't like leaving water and doesn't like fish.
Preferred Length: Standard story
Anything else?: He's also blind, but can sense things around him. He lives in an underwater cave.
Sure thing. :) I'll try to have a draft for you by midweek.
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If one of those open slots is still available can I claim one?
Pet Name:Aridine Setting: The story would take place in a butterfly house. I kind of envision it as large but old. Perhaps some beautiful lead or stained glass detailing, but it's inhabited by lots of butterflies and small creatures. Personality: Aridine is the soft spoken and elegant guardian of the butterfly house, the protector of all the creatures who live there. PoV: Either first or third person, I'm not picky. Physical Traits: She's just a standard glade Kerubi. Based on her setting she would probably be growing butterfly friendly flowers or plants on her if that helps. Other characters to include: I'd really like to include her minion. It doesn't really have a name yet but it's a small little field mouse that ends up seeking shelter in the house. Aridine would find him and help him out. I don't have much development for the plot, which is why I'm coming to you!
I'd like it to be between a standard or long story, wherever the writing takes you. I'll be happy to pay for however many words it takes.
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Hello, I have a question, would you also "proof-read" (correct) already written stories? I write all the stories of my pets (or better characters) myself but I am not a native English speaker and I am sure there are a lot of mistakes (like sentence construction and grammar mistakes) in them which I'd love to get corrected^^