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Oops, you did have her listed as his assistant, not her assistant. I did indeed read that wrong. I edited that paragraph so Triva's relation to Racer will make more sense.
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Perfect! Thank you. Put in the offer. I have a new pet, the Angelic Neela (so beautiful just had to have one) and I will need a story for her but I haven't worked out any details yet. Don't know why I'm having such a problem with her. lol
ah pls keep the slot open for others ;u; i think i'll pass this time!
Inspiration struck. lol Have details for my new pet and need a story when you have time. Thanks!
Skyedancer
Pet Name: Skyedancer Skyedancer
Setting: The largest children's hospital in Centropolis, terminal wards.
Personality: Serene and calm, soothing, caring nature; yet has a sense of humor. Does have a competitive streak but is a very good sport.
PoV: Whatever you think best.
Physical traits: Female Angelic Neela
Likes/Dislikes: She loves her job in the Afterlife, which is to escort children's souls to Heaven. It breaks her heart that their death cuts so short their life, but knows how wonderful their Afterlife will be and so is content. She phases to the terminal wards for children in hospitals all over Subeta, but mostly the largest in Centropolis. She loves to play Chess and is quite good at it. She also has a fondness for lemon angelfood cake.
Other characters to include: Her minion Dawn the Halo, and children with terminal illnesses, mostly cancer.
Preferred Length: Long to Complex
Anything else?: Early in her Afterlife while on a mission to escort three children's souls to Heaven, a boy with cancer next door to her charges saw her and asked her to talk with him for awhile. She was surprised he was able to see her without her enabling it, but upon reflection she realized she shouldn't have been. Though the boy was not fated to die yet, the spectre of death was upon all the children here - in their hollowed cheeks, their ravaged small bodies, and their scared but knowing eyes. She told him she would return, and did so after she carried the three others to Heaven. The boy said she was so beautiful that she must be an angel and that just seeing her made him unafraid for the first time of his death he knew would eventually come. She spent some time with him, talking about Heaven, and made a point of visiting him whenever she returned to the hospital. When it was his time to go with her, he was ready and his heart was glad.
She began taking time to visit many other boys and girls in the terminal wards and easing their minds about death and Heaven. She also talked about whatever they wanted and played Chess on occasion. She passed along macabre jokes she heard in other wards to the great delight of these special children that stared death in the face everyday and could laugh about it. She cherishes the small gifts they make for her and keeps all of them in a special place in her home. When they found out she loved lemon angelfood cake, the children started asking for it in all the hospitals and would save it for her visits. Drawings and paintings of her appeared throughout the hospitals to the consternation of the adults who never saw her. But parents loved her for helping their children even though they weren't sure she even existed. Their grief was raw and heart wrenching but they believed their children knew an angel that carried them to Heaven and that was priceless.
I would love a story done! <3
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Pet Name: Ayani
Setting: Sacred Lands
Personality: Kindhearted, devoted, very protective.
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PoV: 3rd person :)
Physical Traits: Lean, his right eye is green and his left a deep Lavender. A star shaped birthmark on his left shoulder.
Likes/Dislikes: Likes- Protecting/serving Shinwa, Secretly crochets, his friend/minion, . Dislikes: Anyone who threatens Shinwa, Or makes fun of his crocheting, Snow.
Other Characters: Ayani's minon, Nyoki,
Preferred Length: Willing to spend up to 10mil :)
Anything Else?: He admires and Seeks the attention of Shinwa, knowing he can never be with her.
First draft for Skyedancer. I tried to find a balance to make the story beautiful in a tragic way without it being too overwhelming. Please let me know if there are any changes you would like.
First draft for Ayani. I focused mostly on his origin story, how he got to be such an important figure that is trusted by Shinwa and how his minion is a part of that story. Please let me know if there are any changes you would like.
Updated Part II for Bariks. I did my best to keep it consistent with what went on in Parts I and III and with the personalities of the characters. I also tried to keep the time line between Bariks Part II and Maggy's story in balance as well. Please let me know any changes you would like.
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It's amazing! I Wouldnt change a thing!! Would you be willing to set up a trade please?
I have Lot for you and this was a long story at 6 mil.
I have Lot for you and this was a long story at 6 mil.
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Made me cry knowing whats going to happen.
Change 1
Par: "What sort of incident?- Can you tweak it a bit. Cause in the first part he's avoiding working there so maybe in the same light he's a bit more reluctant cause he doesnt know the severity of it yet.
Change 2
Par: Chessius grabbed the fr- Can you add a bit more detail on the nenthions and whats happening. From Maggy's story they know but I'd like enough info that the reader knows a bit without having to read the other story. They are discussed in part one so it doesnt have to be too much
Thank you :)
Hello hello! Can I grab a slot please? :)
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I did some work on the two paras you referenced. For the first one, I seem to remember Bariks was against the nenthions from the start so it would make sense for him to suspect that is what went wrong, and for Maggy to be evasive. For the second, I gave Chessius a little more rambling dialogue. I feel like he would be in a hurry and not have time to give a long run-down of what happened at the lab, but what he is saying gives a grim picture of what is happening in Maggy's story. Please let me know if there is anything else.
I do have a slot open. :D Feel free to post anytime.
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meeee!!!! please love your stories :3 would it be ok if i smail you cause it will be long?
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Wonderful! I actually have a pair of feral characters this time for you lol I don't think there is going to be too much crossover for these 2 since they're kind of on their own most of the time. Story ideas are in the "Anything else?" section. Please feel free to let me know if anything brilliant comes into your head lol
Character Name: Lyr'al
Setting: He's a wanderer but returns to his native home every few years or so. His original home was in a dark jungle where he lived among some stone ruins, very aztec-like. Some examples can be seen in his image gallery (X)
Some background on him that isn't on his page: Lyr'al used to be worshipped by the descendants of an Aztec-like tribe (so he got bloody sacrifices etc.). But when they all died out he had no where to go and hence became a wanderer.
Personality: Click
PoV: 3rd
Physical Traits: See image gallery please
Other Characters: Airon
Preferred Length: Long
Anything else? So I was thinking the premise of the story would be that Lyr'al is just leaving his original home and starting to do his usual wanderings. Along the way he perhaps fights/kills and as he gets further north he remembers that Airon lives in the north and decides to drop by for a visit telling himself that he just wants to see if he is still alive or not but in truth, he actually wants to visit him. So you can perhaps end the story when he arrives at Airon's ice cavern.
Character Name: Airon
Setting: He lives in an icy cavern to the north.
Personality: Click
PoV: 3rd
Physical Traits: See image gallery please
Other Characters: Lyr'al
Preferred Length: Long
Anything else? Airon lives a fairly relaxed life since not many others of his kind live up as far north as he does but he does have to deal with the occasional intruder or two. For his story, I was thinking he could be lamenting to himself how bored he is and wondering if it was time for one of Lyr'al's random visits. He decides to go on a hunt to relieve his boredom somewhat and when he comes back is pleasantly surprised (though would never admit it outright) to find Lyr'al arriving to his ice cavern. Not sure if you could stick in a flashback somewhere in there to when him and Lyr'al first met.
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I traded names on two of my pets, and I need a new story when you have time.
Tardiis
Setting: In space above Atebus with view of the moon and Subeta.
Personality: Quote (Doctor Who): "In the 2011 episode "The Doctor's Wife" the "soul" of the ship is transferred into the body of a humanoid female called Idris, enabling the Doctor to have a conversation with his craft. The TARDIS says that she deliberately allowed the Doctor to "steal" her, as she wanted to see the universe itself; in a reversal of the traditional view, the TARDIS claims to have stolen the Doctor. When he accuses the TARDIS of being unreliable, she defends herself by saying that she has always taken him where he "needed to go", as opposed to where he "wanted to go". During their brief opportunity to converse, the TARDIS expresses both affection and frustration with the Doctor (including annoyance that he pushes her doors open rather than pulls them open as the instructional sign on the outside indicates). When asked by the Doctor if she actually has a name, she self-identifies with the name "Sexy", based upon what the Doctor calls her when he's alone in the ship (she later introduces herself to the Doctor's companions using this name). Eventually, the Idris "avatar" dies, and the last words uttered by the TARDIS to the Doctor using this interface are "I love you." Two additional pieces of information confirmed by the TARDIS during this incident are that TARDIS consciousnesses are female and that she and the Doctor have been travelling for approximately 700 years."
Ref: Tardis
PoV: Whatever you think best.
Physical traits: Human form, Idris Human form, Idris2 Human form, Idris3, Normal Form, Inner Console
Likes/Dislikes: She loves travelling through the universe and seeing the myriad life forms and having adventures with The Doctor.
Other characters to include: The Doctor and her minion Whovian the Time Matter.
Preferred Length: Long Anything else?: I don't really have a story in mind, so have fun. lol
Thank you for the changes. Also thank you for posting why you wrote it the way you did. It's nice to see the reasoning behind. How much do I owe you?
I've set up Lot for you and this was a long story at 6 mil.
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