Hmmm... the mask looks really out of place on her :c and the black of the jacket blends in with her ferret markings fffff could you lighten the jacket just a bit maybe? I'm not sure what to do about the mask though...
{ Tumblr || Flight Rising }
[tot=nicolas]Unacceptable! You must drop all your IRL obligations to make a freebie for me!! >:(
But really now, take your time. I'm in no hurry.
Yeah, Torreys have a super broad face. I could try having the bandanna around her neck or head? And I can definitely lighten the jacket!
XD Thanks for understanding. I'm about half done with your Archan, actually!
I'm honestly not sure which would look better in that case tbh :c
{ Tumblr || Flight Rising }
[tot=nicolas]
Lemme try neck first.
Quick question! Do you want white sclera like normal eyes, or the usual Archan black?
Alright ^^ hopefully it works and doesn't look too funky lol
{ Tumblr || Flight Rising }
[tot=nicolas]Black, please.
That works a lot better ^^ I still can't really tell the difference between her markings and her jacket tho xc
{ Tumblr || Flight Rising }
[tot=nicolas]Alright ^^
{ Tumblr || Flight Rising }
[tot=nicolas]It is better ^^ thank you!
{ Tumblr || Flight Rising }
[tot=nicolas]
</p>The WIP looks good so far. Only thing I'd alter is shifting her gaze from the center to the left, like in my mockup.

Yeah, that's the right direction! Can you make them a little smaller so they're less prominent?
Definitely!

How's this? I can tweak it more if you'd like!
The iris on the right side of the picture looks perfect.