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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Hmmm... the mask looks really out of place on her :c and the black of the jacket blends in with her ferret markings fffff could you lighten the jacket just a bit maybe? I'm not sure what to do about the mask though...

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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<p>Sorry for the delay! I just started a new job and am helping plan a friend&;s wedding! I will definitely work on your overlays in between, but it might take longer.

Unacceptable! You must drop all your IRL obligations to make a freebie for me!! >:(

But really now, take your time. I'm in no hurry.

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Yeah, Torreys have a super broad face. I could try having the bandanna around her neck or head? And I can definitely lighten the jacket!

XD Thanks for understanding. I'm about half done with your Archan, actually!

Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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I'm honestly not sure which would look better in that case tbh :c

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Lemme try neck first.

Quick question! Do you want white sclera like normal eyes, or the usual Archan black?

Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Alright ^^ hopefully it works and doesn't look too funky lol

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Quick question! Do you want white sclera like normal eyes, or the usual Archan black?

Black, please.

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Here's a neck/chest bandana for you.

Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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That works a lot better ^^ I still can't really tell the difference between her markings and her jacket tho xc

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Right! Lemme fix that.

How is this?

Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Alright ^^

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Better?

Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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It is better ^^ thank you!

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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You're welcome!

Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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<p>How is this?

The WIP looks good so far. Only thing I'd alter is shifting her gaze from the center to the left, like in my mockup.

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Sep 26, 2015 10 years ago
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Sorry for the delay! Is this better?

Sep 30, 2015 10 years ago
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Yeah, that's the right direction! Can you make them a little smaller so they're less prominent?

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Sep 30, 2015 10 years ago
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Definitely!

How's this? I can tweak it more if you'd like!

Sep 30, 2015 10 years ago
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The iris on the right side of the picture looks perfect.

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Sep 30, 2015 10 years ago
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Any better?

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