The biggest problem I see is her neck and shoulder area, her neck is way to long for where her shoulders are. Other then that I love the new revamp, especially because it gives her an ethnic look :)
Thank you so much for fixing the little bit off stuff but keeping her facial features and face shape intact. Seriously. I'm so glad you guys stuck to your guns.
Comparison for those interested

A fun game of spot-the-difference, but she does look a lot better! Her face looks a lot more natural.
I think she looks much better now. I know it wasn't much of a change, but it was enough to get rid of whatever the weirdness was.
looks back and forth 100 times
I think the left cheek needed to be altered as well.
Oh this is an improvement from the version before this C: Thank you for listening to the feedback as always! <3
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OHHHHHHHH!!! I see it now! looks fantastic:D thanks for posting both of you :)
Looks much better! Just being able to see her face makes quite the difference. And seriously, she's not fat. She's burly. Shinwa looks like she could haul bear. I love it! :D
Thank you for the side by side, I was having trouble spotting the differences without it oddly haha.
I liked the update to begin with but these little edits improved it a lot (especially the neck situation). So far I've been enjoying the NPC and pet updates you've all worked on :)
Meh. I actually liked the previous revamp than the revamped revamp...
Looks like you posted the old one twice?
[edit] I can see the difference in yours. She doesn't look manly anymore. :)
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It looks better, but I would have lowered the eyes just a bit. They still look like they are too high.

uh, I notice no difference...? I must be blind EDIT: never mind, seeing it now
I appreciate the effort, there's definetely been an improvement, but I have to be honest and confess I like Deyra's edit on the news a bit more, lol , sorry xD
Just the markings on the face bug me for some reason but I can live with it.
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