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Jul 21, 2015 10 years ago
SUPER
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My avatar skills are so crap compared to everyone else, I'm so jelly.

8/10 The dress is so beautiful, the only thing I think I can say about it is I think the hair doesn't quite fit in with the rest, but other than that it's awesome. (:

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Jul 22, 2015 10 years ago
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10/10 I adore it. Another version of The Little Mermaid; with a side-dish of American Horror Story both in the lighting used (dark and smooth; comfortable or cozy, it would be, were it not for the morbid mermaid), the general atmosphere and the originality of the idea. All of the colours fit together, and respond to each other, as do the situational clues : the sunken ship in the back, the blood, the creepy fixed smile.

Oh! I just noticed the beady eyes. Marvelous! Ahem ahem, much enthusiasm... I really quite like it. I think it's well put together. Felicitations!

Jul 22, 2015 10 years ago
ZombieMonster
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6/10

There's nothing particularly wrong with it, it's just very...normal lol. There's no real color scheme, just jeans, a sweater and a pair of shoes; it looks like something you'd find the average joe wearing. Again there's nothing wrong with that, it's just not my cup of tea. :)

Jul 22, 2015 10 years ago
Osteologist
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- 8/10

I love this avatar! I love how the eyes, lips and hair help to tie in the background. Who can ever go wrong with zombies? It's a very well camouflaged zombie in the woods. The outfit itself is simple (not a bad thing!) and perhaps the HA blends a BIT too well into the bg? Still lovin it.

Jul 23, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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6/10 I think it reminds me of a nightmare before christmas serial killer, I am not liking the shadow placement but that is the only think that actually bugs me. The idea looks like fun and the outfit looks bad ass even as it is very simple. I will come to you knowing you throw a 'Bloody' good party! XD

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Jul 27, 2015 10 years ago
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Chasm

6/10 I like the overall aesthetic, but it feels a bit flat, the color scheme is muted and lacklustre and the HA's skintone is a bit washed out against it all, no real color to the face etc.

Jul 27, 2015 10 years ago
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7/10 Carnival look, great try ^_^ perhaps you can add a backdrop to enhance the theme!

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Jul 28, 2015 10 years ago
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5/10. Face is pretty, hair and hat are also attractive. Huge minus for me is that there is too much happening here. You can't see a single clear line. It should look rich, but looks like too many red rags put on a single HA. Because of it you can hardly see those beautiful wings. The belt - such a pretty, delicate and tender item - is almost unvisible because of all this fur and whatnot. The idea was good, but the execution is over the top.

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Jul 28, 2015 10 years ago
Yer a wizard
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6/10 Outfit is well-put together. Could definitely still use a background and maybe jewelry or an effect or companion.

Aug 2, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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It looks adorable and I can tell she loves creatures the only think I'd say I'd dislike is the pants. they don't fit the HA.

7/10

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Aug 4, 2015 10 years ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

6/10 it's fairly simple and doesn't seem to be following any sort of theme or color scheme; the top and shoes are athletic, the pants are casual, and the hair + accessories are slightly fancy. i'd suggest picking a theme or style and sticking to it throughout the outfit.

Aug 5, 2015 10 years ago
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i feel like you always have pretty solid HAs :|c 9/10, just because i feel like it feels too 1 dimensional without any fore/background to add depth. maybe bring some warm tones to the foot area? i really love your HAs face though!!

Aug 13, 2015 10 years ago
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CatHolic

9.5/10, even the face gives me deer/goat/hoofed animal vibes, but if you're going for goat, then I'd maybe make the mouth a little smirk. Idk goats look smug to me. good choice of head decor, matches the belt. I was going to say something about goat/deer-type animals being more common in mountains/forests than by the beach, but the shells and leaves tie it together really nicely with the background. Everything ties together and that's something I really struggle with, so kudos haha.

(note for the next person: if you see my HA with the black/white dress, i'm going for a spooky modern art gallery spectator vibe but am completely out of my HA comfort zone and would appreciate any tips to push me in the right direction)

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Aug 13, 2015 10 years ago
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Chasm

7/10 I like it but I feel like the textures are a little lacking. Since all HA's are monochrome you generally have to work harder to give the HA's depth and visual interest.

Aug 30, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

It doesn't seem like the type of outfit you would be wearing by a bonfire really. The top in particular bugs me. I like the closed eyes/serene feel though.

7/10

Aug 30, 2015 10 years ago
Radish
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I looooooove your colour combination as far as the teal and gold tones go, but the top you're wearing seems a little too pink and out of place to me. I'm also not fond of the hair you've used, it seems too chunky/brusque compared to the flow of the headscarf and cloak.

8/10

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Aug 30, 2015 10 years ago
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Chasm

9/10 Love the colors. I can't think of anything to critique. Well done. :D

I meant to write Mexy from the start haha, thanks!

Aug 31, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

you skipped

Sep 3, 2015 10 years ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

9/10 love the theme and colors, although the dress seems a little… tame by comparison to everything else.

Sep 9, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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9.7/10

I freaking love this! I think you should/could tell some story with it by giving it a background.

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