Oh perfect! I was just wanting to get 2 paired stories (so it would be 4 in total) like usual with the differing POV between the paired stories. So basically, 2 sets of paired stories, 1 set for 2 of my characters and another set for another pair of my characters. The 2 sets would not be related though. Also, concerning payment, since I don't really play subeta anymore, I can really only pay in CSC but if you only accept sP I can definitely sell some stuff lol

I do accept csc. If you want 4 complex stories, I can definitely get a start writing but I may not have the full, finished project for you until sometime in January. Feel free to send me the details whenever you're ready. :)

That's fine! I don't expect them to be done right away of course, so please take the time you need! I'll be pming you the form because I'm thinking it might go over the text limit if I do it all at once here lol

First drafts for Belial and Nedali. The overlap here is less than I've done on character pairs in the past though they do overlap on the current mission Belial has for Nedali. I wanted to give more of Nedali's background to set her up for the current story while with Belial I wanted to keep him in the present since his backstory is already so well though out and there wasn't much I felt I could add. Please let me know of any changes you would like.

I will probably be posting the second pair after Christmas. Let me know if you would prefer to pay for these two now or just do all four in one trade.

Ooh!! I really like Nedali's story! You pretty much got her background spot on! A couple of things concerning Belial's story though. I love how his story shows his manipulative personality but I think I was hoping for more of a connection to Nedali. I really like Kalette's story and how it illustrates how he targets people when they're weakest is but I'm torn between wanting to keep that part in and wanting to exchange it for some other flashback about Nedali. You might have to change a lot of the flow in that case so I'm not sure, what do you think?

Secondly, Belial doesn't actually have arms since his wings are his arms. So him carrying people wouldn't really work lol They would have to hold on to him instead. x'D

And I'm fine paying for all 4 at the same time!

Updated story for Belial. I removed or changed the "arms" references. I think I mistook the layout of his cloak for arms. xD

For the extension, I've tried to keep Nedali true to her personality while also portraying how loyal she's become to Belial. I had to take down Nedali's story in order to post the full one for Belial but I do have both saved. I can make further changes to Belial's story if necessary. Otherwise, I will hold these two and do a lot for payment when the next pair is completed.

That is perfect! Absolutely perfect! Thank you so much! It captures them beautifully! Your writing style is so addictive, I love it ❤

And ok! That sounds good to me :)

Heylo. Read the posts about forum title then first post about open slots so do not know if you're open or not or up for stuff. Seems like you got a lot of stories going on right now but I'm pretty patient. If you are open I'll edit this port to a form or if not I'll wait till next time. XD

Did have on question tho. You know in animes where they like punch a person and it shoots them into a building and the building crumbles or a punch just takes down like a hill? Do you think you could capture that in text? Story is pretty much this character just wrecking stuff in a town op.

Examples cause not everyone watches anime :p : Ooo Aaah

I'm actually going to be closing for the next couple weeks to get through the crazy holiday season. xD I will be re-opening to requests around 12/27 and I'll be open for all story types up to long complex. If you could check back the week after Xmas, I will be happy to slot you.

I haven't watched a lot of anime but I do get the concept and I don't think writing up a destructive character in detail will be too much a problem. In fact, it sounds like a story type that lends itself well to detail.

Aight yea I can do that. Thank you XD

First drafts for Larusen and Lance. Please let me know if any changes are needed. I have set up Lot . You don't have to pay until these two are as you want them. The total for all 4 stories will be 750 csc.

Hi! I'm changing Nightracer up some and need a new story, when you get the time.

[Edit] Totally forgot, but he has loved stickers since he was a kid and has a huge collection. He likes a lot of the artwork, and he has designed many through the years for special causes and just for fun.

hello! do you still have a slot? :D

I do have one slot open. I can slot you as soon as I receive your form. :)

Ooh! I really like the overall flow of the 2 stories! Just 2 things:

1. Name misspelling - Larusen should be Laursen
2. I'm sorry I didn't mention this ahead of time but I was wanting them to be described as basically humans with bunny ears since that's how the creator of the species made them instead of actual bunnies ^^;; So I guess when you mention paws, twitching noses and hindlegs could that be adapted to a human version? Also the wolves/predators should also be humanized versions if that's ok. I apologize for not being more specific ^^;;;

Sorry about the name. For some reason, the form had two spellings and I didn't catch that when I was looking over character details. Fortunately, names are one of the easiest edits. I went back and tried to "humanize" the details for Laursen and Lance. I did so with the wolves to some degree but I take it there is more of the animal in the wolves than the bunnies. I changed the "pelts" to "skins" but left the details about the teeth. I can't imagine any wolf form not having fangs of some kind. Please let me know if you'd like any further changes.

Everything looks perfect! Thank you so much! The trade has been offered on~ I'll be back once you have open slots again xD

First draft for Nightracer. Please let me know if any changes are needed. When everything looks good, I have Lot for you and this was a long story at 6 mil.

I just wanted to find out if you were still interested in a slot? I typically hold a wait list slot for 1 week. If not, please let me know and I will be opening slots to everybody. Thanks. :)

It's wonderful! Just one detail needs to be changed. Triva is Racer's secretary and assistant not Mari's. I wasn't clear, I'm sorry.

I'll send my stuff to you tonight! Thank you.