I love the story very interesting and perfectly fitting

I've set up Lot for you and this was a standard complex story at 10 mil.

Pet Name: Acrophobia Setting: Usually angels are named after their purpose, or after what they are good at, or some peculiar characteristic. That's how the little cherub called Acrophobia got his name. He is the only know angel who is afraid of heights, and spends much time on earth or resting in his cloud. Since Acrophobia can't fly (and being a cherub... they are not really important) he has few friends and much free time, which he spends collecting feathers that he keeps in glass panels. He is really proud of his collection. He probably got this strange habit of collecting feathers because he admires other angel's big and actually useful wings (he has 6 tiny wings, they aren't strong since he doesn't uses them). Personality: Sweet, funny, insecure. He likes cold days and loves Luminaire too. PoV: 3rd Preferred Length: something from Character Sketch to Standard, he is a treasure-focused pet and he doesn't really have an interesting story, I'd like to see more of a description of the character.

First draft for Acrophobia. I made the aspects of his character the focus rather than trying to lay out a story line. I did stay with a character sketch since this is more of a summary-type story. Please let me know if there are any changes you would like.

That hit me right in the feels omg I adore it, no change needed, thank you! ;u;

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :) I've set up Lot and this was a Sketch Story at 1 mil.

@ pureflower

Pet Name: Mugunghwa Setting: Joseon Dysnaty (Korea) Personality: She is shy and keeps to herself. She becomes more confident overtime and eventually is very persuasive having to learn how to speak correctly to survive through the harsh world.

She grew up in a rich family always getting whatever she wanted. Her father was a high ranked official and she also had a older brother to lean on. Her brother vanishes one day and the world changes. Her father is framed for a crime he never committed. Her brother is labeled a traitor. She is sent off away from the world. No one can help but herself. She becomes a fighter determined on finding her brother getting to the truth and putting her family or whats left of it back together. She does not know her father was already killed. Her mother is alive but with a sickness. How can one fight back with nothing? With only a bunch of bandits as friends.

(She used to be very stuck up and look down on everyone even after being sent away. She slowly realizes what everyday people have to go through and changes and eventually becomes a great warrior. putting her love for beauty and fashion second.) Optional PoV: Physical Traits: She catches the eye of every man who passes her. None compare to her natural beauty. Likes/Dislikes: She has a deep love for those around her the ones who were willing to help when she needed it. she hates the government for what they did.
Other Characters: Preferred Length: Anything Else?: Her name is from the country flower it is her nickname and always has been since she was small. This is another Korea based story I would love if you could do like before and include references to the dynasty and country. Nothing is supernatural in this story I want it to be somewhat historical based.

I think this a bit more complex than my usual requests, pls let me know if you need me to explain things better!

Pet Name: Dodrio - However the characters are named Hippolyte, Akantha and Elektra

Physical Traits: click

Setting: They are three muses that used to live in the world of Selenis (the same world where Shinwa comes from), as muses they should gift good things to the subeta world such as music, friendship etc. But they were tired of only receiving orders, so they decided to gift bad things to the humanity: Hippolyte (the first one, with the blue eyes) - Banned for bringing the gift of Rebellion to the humans, so they wouldn't obey or fear the Gods anymore. Akantha (the middle one, with red eyes) - Banned for bringing the gift of Destruction to the humans, so they would destroy each other for banal reasons. Elektra (the last one, with closed eyes) - Banned for bringing the gift of Magic to the humans, so they could use it to achieve God-like power, causing rebellion and destruction. By doing it, they were banned from Selenis, and joined together in one body so they could not do all this evil at once. Now they live among us, some say in the Sacred Lands, one taking control of their only body at time, spreading the chaos.

Personality: They have very similar personalities, only distinguished by what they came here to cause. Hippolyte is the most aggressive one, being very hyperactive too. Akantha is very quiet and smart, she likes to cause fights and discussions just to watch it. Elektra is very reserved and depressed, she addresses to people in dark alleys at night offering "great power" that ends up consuming the person's life.

Anything Else?: You don't need to describe them as individual characters, you can just tell their story, but if you see that this will turn out as something very large, feel free to charge for each separated character.

I finally did it even though it's pretty messy :P

Pet Name: Slagathor Setting: An old, dark forest and possibly my home/lair, if length allows for it. I was thinking the story would be our origin story of how we met and how we are doing today. I found Slagathor in the woods and that is how we became connected. Personality: Slagathor is my "shadow" (think "The Babadook"). That is why he is my only pet. We are not quite two separate beings but not fully bonded either. But his commanding presence grows stronger and infrequently manifests itself within me by hypnosis. He is not evil but more of a chaotic neutral. He does not love death but more the cycle of life and death, which is why he spent his days in the forest to be a part of the continuous growth and decay. We pass our days collecting resources from the swamps and forests to sell, practicing witchcraft, and sustaining ourselves on the land.

PoV: Third. Physical Traits: I just got my inspiration from the actual pet looks, so just how he is. Likes/Dislikes: He likes plant life, toxic and poisonous things, and the dark arts. I don't like the dark arts but am slowly delving into it because of him. Other Characters: Just myself and Slagathor. Preferred Length: Standard story.

First draft for Mugunghwa. I tried to focus on historical references for the dynasty requested. I did my best with choosing names that are suitable, but if you would like the brother or friends to have different names, just let me know.

First draft for Dodrio. I wanted to give the three characters of the muses a chance to show their unique personalities while finding a way to connect them (especially with the connection to Dodrio.) I will only charge you for one story since the three characters are part of the one and at this point I am at a Long Story. If you would like additions or changes, please let me know.

First draft for Slagathor. Please let me know if there are any changes you would like.

I looove it! 😍 If you can make Slagathor sound a bit more sinister, then I think it would be perfect.

@ Pureflower

Just a few things I noticed but I love the story! Its very good.

The country would of been called Joseon since Korea was after the dynasty.

There was no Imperial army of Korea as like with Japan and Korea. They had the Podocheong/ Ministry of Police Bureau who went after and arrested criminals. They were similar to modern police.

I cant figure out what the King's army would of been called or the royal army

Nothing like I expected, but much more, as always. Everything looks awesome, thank you!

Hi! I have decided to change up the Shahi/Zylairia/Zyrai/Shanari project. I want to keep Zylairia intact but the other three I want to change to different pets. The storyline I want to keep, (Obviously!) but edit down for one pet. I want to keep all the four different parts, written from the four different perspectives, but delete the parts that are the same in all four stories. Then streamline it and condense it a bit to be more cohesive for one pet. Can you make it into like four different chapters but begin and end with Zylairia maybe? What do you think would be the best way to do this?

Sorry about that. My knowledge of the ancient Eastern cultures is limited, forcing me to rely on online articles for the finer details. I've replaced Imperial Army with Royal Army for now. (Feel free to change the term if you do find a more accurate one.) I've also changed Korea to Joseon. If everything else looks good, I've set up Lot for you and this was a long complex story for 20 mil.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :) I've set up Lot and this was a long story for 6 mil.

I added a paragraph that better hints at the fact that he is a dark creature...without making him sound too evil. I can make further changes if any are needed. If not, I have set up Lot for you and this was a standard story at 3 mil.

I think I understand what you're looking for. So you want the 4 stories cut down into a 4-part story to go on one pet profile? I think I would be able to do this...though the original four were a combined total of something like 12k words so it could take a while. You wouldn't be looking for any new content I'm guessing, just a reduction in story size that still includes the four characters?

Yes, exactly! Nothing new, unless an introduction to each of the three others in turn is needed since now it is one story and not four. I could have done the editing myself, but its your beautiful work and its wrong for anyone else to touch it.

Edited zentu family stories. What I decided to do, in order to cut the length but still represent each character well, was to have the three other family members telling one small portion of each of their stories, the part I felt was most central to the original.

I made the least alterations to Zya's as requested, though I did some cutting down in order to reduce the intro part as little as possible. (Without the rich descriptions of their home, I would feel something was lacking.) Word count is currently around 6.3k words but I have the story posted with 2 other story drafts and no issues with length, so I can't imagine this will be an issue on her profile. Please let me know if you'd like any changes. If not, I have Lot set up for you.

The only thing I would want changed is that some of Zyrai's part is doubled. Is there any way to edit that more? Perhaps leave it as is with Zylairia and delete it with Zyrai, just keeping her personal thoughts and impressions. Also, could you put the short section about supper and Zya's decision about the spell at the very end? It makes a nice wrap up of the story, and ends with the main character. Then I think it will be perfect! Thank you so much.

P.S. I am in COMPLETE envy of you for that skin! It's the one I want the most and just will not cooperate. lol

I've made some further alterations. There were two lines of dialogue in Zyrai's that still overlap but all other dialogue has been changed to give her impressions rather than repeating what is in Zya's story. I also moved the "supper" section to the end. I put a header for Zya so the reader will know who's talking. Let me know if there's anything else.

Perfect! Thank you! Made offer. :)