hee ok you took the left one off. If that's the hairline should it be more rounded next to the longer bits? clueless

I'll take the love lol. And you'll get the wig :)

I like the depth you have, but I know it will be rejected for having 'grey shading'. It's something they're pretty firm about. Like I said, I would choose a warmer color like a medium brown color to compliment the nice blonde color you have as your base color.

I'm confused to xd which longer bits.. I didn't take any off I don't think xD

Meh grey shading ;-; You mean near the bun? or the black line art I have included?

It's kind of hard to separate them out by the preview, so I'm going to say both.

xD Okayy ^^ I'll change that thanks!

maybe its my phone not loading stuff. But with the hairline coming down in two points I think it should be rounded to make it a more natural hairline.

Ahh i get you c: OK ^^ is that the one you like better?

I just noticed you updated your first post. I prefer the one on the left :)

Okayy ^^ the hairline still needs some work but I'll work from that one c:

fndslfkndsklgfdsg It keeps not sending my message. I prefer the one on the left also, the little points coming down seem like they should go over the ear if they were there, like sideburns (If this message did send and I missed it...sorry xP )

Something like this: ??

Ooo yes that does look cool c: I'll do that too c:

awesome!

Oh, also try looking at and here is a nice hairline... and see how the little pieces sort of stick out d:

I made a little example of the shading..for example use only! It's only the pieces of the ponytail wig, and your wig. That's the sort of shading I meant when I suggested darker shading (: [IMG]http://i44.tinypic.com/or7cy8.png[/IMG]

The hairline definitely looks better in the new one! And I agree that the left is the one I like more.

My only real issue right now is the shading. The black lines come off as very harsh against the blonde, so I would suggest using brown/darker blonde for the interior lines instead. Also, the lines make it look like there's a shadow over the top of the head, which doesn't fit with subeta's lighting. I kind of painted up an example of the brown lines/shading and the lighting over one of yours, always provided that's alright with you. c:

I kind of painted over the outline a bit, but it shows the general idea? I hope it helps!

that looks cool but i think the hairline is a bit high.❤

i love that shading!❤

That's so pretty >< I don't think I can replicate so well xD ... maybe you'd be interested in a collab? I line you shade ^^

i agree with the purdyness :D

I'd be fine with that! c: One of my great loves in life is coloring hair. I'd be more than happy to collab with y'all!

Awesome ^^ I'll fix the hair line a little and move the braid that's near the nee then send it to you.. need to get some homework's done first.

yay! Welcome aboard!! Thank you :)

yay!! dances