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Sep 16, 2020 5 years ago
Cassowary
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7/10. You do a good job of matching items to create a character for your HA, and the contrast of your HA's face to the rest of the outfit really makes it pop and draw the eye towards it. However, your clothes & the BG are predominantly warm browns, which makes them blend together a lot. Adding a light source (eg. a lightbulb or one of the light beams from Esther's) to visually distinguish them could help make them more distinct.

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Sep 22, 2020 5 years ago
Kyuik
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10/10 What is there to critique :O Love everything about this. The colors, matching, theme... wouldn't change anything :)

Sep 23, 2020 5 years ago
loe_loe
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Tox

9/10. Maybe a background? Love that hair though! :)

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Nov 6, 2020 5 years ago
Derelict
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Cheater

9.5/10

not a ton to critique, seems like you’ve achieved exactly what you were going for. maybe something could be used in place of the spiderweb that looks like it fits more naturally into the scene? very well done!

Nov 6, 2020 5 years ago
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Naiki

9/10 it's really cool! i really like the theme, it all fits really well, especially the owl on the shoulder

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Nov 20, 2020 5 years ago
The Gourmand
Trendy
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9.5/10 I love the ethereal elf princess look, especially with the background. Not much to critique, so just nitpicking here, but the headpiece seems to stick out a tiny bit to me.

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Nov 23, 2020 5 years ago
BeBe
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9/10 Loving the warm color theme! Especially with winter coming around it makes me appreciate and love warmer colors all the more.

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Nov 24, 2020 5 years ago
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Rhea Gemini

10/10 Giving me anime character realness. LOVE IT!!!

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Feb 10, 2021 5 years ago
Katyanari
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Chitauri

5/10 Silly, but kind of all over the place. xD The fire ears? I don't even know. xD The holiday background gives me a christmas feel, but does not match anything else so feels out of place. The collar layer should be above the heart, imo. The mix of art between a realistic cat and a fake cat bothers me, I would have stuck with two realistic or two fake. Perhaps a more cluttered/junk filled background would help tie all of the random pieces together? But points for randomness xD

Feb 22, 2021 5 years ago
Cassowary
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7/10 The hair goes great with the glasses and outfit and gives the HA a "too cool for school" look that I enjoy. The outfit gives me a real cyberpunk feel, but the cat feels out of place with that and the background environment is unclear. Also, the rainbow colors on the cat seem somewhat out of place - maybe try adding rainbow earrings to match?

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Feb 23, 2021 5 years ago
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Wolver

10/10, looks very clean and hyper-modern, like something you'd see in an ad. Or in "Fifth Element". This av has major Protagonist vibes lol. Normally I'd say that the background is over simplistic, but I think the argument could be made that that's integral here.

Mar 10, 2021 5 years ago
Tiffanythethingthing
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Marjo

looks downright beautiful but tbh i'm a noob at critiques

i also made another OC out of my HA i made him a blonde haired and blue jacket and glasses clad hacker guy, too bad i don't have a proper backdrop for him though :(

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Mar 19, 2021 5 years ago
Cassowary
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7/10 The outfit goes together and gives an idea of the OC's personality, but a background would really take it to another level. Though the LOSER did make me lol.

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Mar 19, 2021 5 years ago
Tiffanythethingthing
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Marjo

alright indeed i'm still searching for a proper background for him and actually he spraypainted the word "LOSER" he's such a stinker for a blonde haired blue jacket and glasses wearing hacker guy :3

i also named him Clyde

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Apr 1, 2021 4 years ago
Nomi_Barei
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Jaal Tsonpa

10/10 I have no criticisms. Your HA is hella beautiful in a drowned demon/floating hairball of eyes kinda way. The effect with the broken frame is very fitting to thee aesthetic too.

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Apr 2, 2021 4 years ago
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Pachimama

I really love the composition. I wouldn't add or take anything away. 10/10


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Apr 9, 2021 4 years ago
Hamda
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Pisa

8/10

I like the overall spring scheme but the face looks like she's about to cry :(

May 4, 2021 4 years ago
bugthebard
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10/10

I honestly don't know what to critique because I feel like you completed exactly what you were probably going for. It looks like Sailor Moon in a magical girl transformation and I don't think there is anything you could add or take away to make it look more like that lol!

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May 5, 2021 4 years ago
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Northeastern

- 10/10, you look adorable! Can't think of anything to change or add.

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May 5, 2021 4 years ago
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Hecate

8/10 - I love this! I feel like this reminds me of a new horror game coming out, but I also feel like I'm totally off base lol. I love the contrast between the HA's skin and dress tones against the black and dark crimson elements. Very striking color combinations and I get the spooky vibes. If I get super picky I think if there was an item breaking some of the background space (especially the top right) that would help with distribution, and something red near the bottom would help balance it out. :)

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