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Dec 7, 2016 9 years ago
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I'm guessing some kind of twisted/black rabbit alice in wonderland kind of deal? I give it a 7/10, because I like what I think the concept is, but I'm not 100% sure if that's what it's supposed to be. I guess my critique would be try to make the concept a little more clear?

(beware the missing nose. also, I want different boots so if whoever critiques me knows of some non-cw boots that would match better, pls let me know!)

Dec 7, 2016 9 years ago
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Cute HA! Makes me want to bundle up with some hot chocolate. 9/10 There are the Vanity Mocha Boots that might look nice!

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Dec 7, 2016 9 years ago
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SailorButtress

I like the color scheme and the patterns, although I wonder if the wax sugar lips with the fangs might give it a bit of a story with the blood on the ground? 9.5/10

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Dec 7, 2016 9 years ago
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Wow, fast response! (I should probably let someone else rate, but I want one of those giftboxes!)

8/10 I really like where you're going with this, and the HA really feels ethereal! I'm not crazy about the yellow forehead charm- it doesn't seem to match anything else you're wearing. Perhaps add a necklace?

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Dec 8, 2016 9 years ago
Tomorrow
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9/10 Nice!! I only really dislike the older art.


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Dec 8, 2016 9 years ago
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Akon

- 8/10 Simply because it creeps me out a bit. I really dislike that wig, but, overall, I can't really find anything I'd really do differently.

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Dec 8, 2016 9 years ago
Lumwinkle
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I'd say 8/10, I love everything about your outfit but it's missing a background so it feels like it's not finished. Even if you didn't want to do a background, I think there's an item that make it looks like there's a magical snow swirly around you, and I think that'd be fun and really add to it.

Dec 8, 2016 9 years ago
JayJays
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8.5/10 It's very cute and festive. But I think more subtle eyeshadow would work better as it's rather neon right now. Perhaps a ring or spot of jewellery would be nice.

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Dec 8, 2016 9 years ago
Katyanari
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Chitauri

10/10! The grease stains, the wall-e robot, the goggles, and the entire color scheme all fit perfectly! I would love to see you on my mechanic crew star-base, lol.

Dec 10, 2016 9 years ago
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Ooh, very red! 9/10 I really like this design overall. Couple critiques on the face though- have you tried a darker red lip gloss? I think it would fit well. Also potentially blush? The body blushes are my go-tos.

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Dec 10, 2016 9 years ago
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CatHolic

Oh wow I really like this. There's really subtle red highlights in the hair that tie it together really nicely. The only thing is that back side of the jacket overlapping the skirt, it seems, but there's really no solution aside from covering it up with a scarf or something and I think it looks good as is. 9/10

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Dec 10, 2016 9 years ago
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KiraKurai

10/10 This is just brilliant. For Stimulate, right? There's a touch of the blue-green beads from the hair all over as just that, a touch. The white-black takes centerstage perfectly. Really love it.

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Dec 13, 2016 9 years ago
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Morgana Uciliece

9/10 I love the dark muted tones in your HA ; I feel like to really finish it off would be to add a soft background with similiar tones but lightened up a bit to keep your HA the focal point ovo

Dec 15, 2016 9 years ago
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xAvarice Very nice. I'm not typically one for utilizing the animal bases, but I think this is quite nice. 9/10 Suggestion wise, I don't think the red bow fits in very well with the HA. You have nothing else that tone, and I think the background would balance fine without the bow. Perhaps something a bit more peach? The legs are a bit warmer in tone than the rest of your body.

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Dec 18, 2016 9 years ago
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KiraKurai

9.5/10. Its nice and has a vintage, on the way to a party feel to it. If the belt on the skirt could be changed for a closer match to the red, that'd be lovely but it does blend with the tights so it works out.

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Dec 18, 2016 9 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

9.5/10 Really great balance in the colors. Maybe make the lips black or white as well though.

Dec 18, 2016 9 years ago
Lannister
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Lady Brienne

Solid 9.5 out of 10! The color scheme really works and the makeup matches the hair super well. The bra peeking out of the shirt seems a little off to me, but I don't really know how I'd improve on it. Overall nice job!

Dec 21, 2016 9 years ago
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Midnight

8/10? The black your HA is wearing kind of blends into the bg a bit and they're hard to see (the wings especially) Maybe a different bg? Or try some varying shades of black or grey for your pants/wings? c: I really like the overall theme of yours, though, and the color scheme you're working with. It's really lovely so far!


Dec 23, 2016 9 years ago
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Vivisect

8.5/10 really cool, i love the colors and style, though i'm not crazy about the face for some reason. maybe try a red lip, like (or similar, that one is really expensive these days jeez)

also the makeup is too bright and brings in colors that don't fit with the subtlety of the rest of the outfit. i'd say scrap the makeup and use something more understated, like or

Dec 24, 2016 9 years ago
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I friggan love this! 10/10 The colors are beautiful and vibrant and mesh together really well. I'm not crazy about that particular eye pair (too little pupil for me) but you pull it off well.

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