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May 31, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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THat is one adorable cyclops are you referencing someone? It reminds me of a manga character.

9/10 THe outfit works like a charm, and you did well with the colors of the head and face area, I still think it might be too simple.

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Jun 2, 2015 10 years ago
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Tilly

8/10 It's kind of simple, and I like simple, but it's a bit too boring-simple. Perhaps it could use a few accessories, or more so some foreground objects, but I do like how it's clean looking.

Jun 3, 2015 10 years ago
Xenoromantic
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Classy/10, I actually don't mind the lack of a background. Just the right one might be good to the atmosphere, but I can understand if you don't want things to get too busy. Everything plays so nicely off of everything else, I can tell this was carefully constructed.

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Jun 5, 2015 10 years ago
TechnoChocolate
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6/10 Looks nice, but with the colors and the background, it all kinda gets lost. The outfit blends into the background too much, all you really see is skin at first glance.

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Jun 5, 2015 10 years ago
CaveAdsum
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Marreta

7/10 I really like the idea and style but something is kinda off, I think you should consider a different shirt.

Jun 6, 2015 10 years ago
Chocolate
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9/10

I do like your HA quite a bit. You did a good job blending the colors. My suggestions- personally, I'm not a fan of that mouth. Just one of my mouth peeves. The Classic Lip Balm is a potential alternative for something plain.

Have you tried out any other pants? I'm just brainstorming right now, but perhaps there's something closer to the color of your hair that wouldn't be too distracting. (Any of these work? )

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Jun 6, 2015 10 years ago
Frenchi
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Vivisect

7/10 i like the colors, though i'm not too sure about the top… maybe something grey to match the bows on the shoes? something like:

Jun 8, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

Overall it goes well, but I think the mustard yellow shirt doesn't quite fit with the rest. Layering is very well done. 8.5/10

Jun 8, 2015 10 years ago
Rise
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: 8/10. It's very original and unique. :) Honestly finding it hard to critique because it really does look nice! Perhaps put a bracelet or something on?

Jun 9, 2015 10 years ago
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7/10 I really like the vibe coming from yours! A few comments: -I'd try layering the red coloring on the face under the hair for a more realistic look -It looks too cold for shorts! My eyes were drawn to the bare legs and not in a good way - if there's a long coat on, why not long pants? -The shoes don't seem to fit well - color-wise they're okay but the lineart on them is much thicker and seems to stand out to me. Also, I think they'd be better layered under the coat.

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Jun 17, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

I love the hair and skin, but I'm not sold on the dress (?) it doesn't really fit with the spacy theme. The wispiness is good, but the color is off. Side note: can you comment on my profile and tell me what shining ruby you are wearing? At first I thought it was , but it's a little different.

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Jun 17, 2015 10 years ago
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Illness

I have mixed feelings. I like your foreground item (?) but i feel like its a lot for the look you have going on underneath, which is a strong look on it own. My suggestion is to either simplify your HA (less detail oriented items maybe?), remove the foreground, or maybe play w/ layering it behind your HA? Overall 8/10 just because i think your look is there but it needs a little more refining!

Jun 20, 2015 10 years ago
Screech93
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9.5/10

It looks just about perfect I really love it but if I had to give it a suggestion I think you might need a matching green earrings.

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Jun 22, 2015 10 years ago
Frenchi
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6/10 i like the top half (though i'm not a huge fan of the lips), but the bottom half could do to be more interesting - maybe consider wearing shorts or a skirt with blue tights? or, if you want to balance the colors better, you could do gold tights to pick up on the gold detail in the shirt, and then blue shoes?

Jun 23, 2015 10 years ago
Zabrie
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Denizci

Very well matched and layered. I feel like the necklace is a bit out of place though. Unless you just have it there to break up the lines I would ditch it. 9/10

Jun 23, 2015 10 years ago
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8.5/10

i absolutely adore the HA itself, particularly the hair - what is that wig it's gore. If I had to be picky however the background itself just doesn't sit right with me, i don't know i just don't think it does the HA any justice which is really strong on it's own.

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Jun 25, 2015 10 years ago
witchywoman
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Petit Coeur

8.5/10 everything fits so well together, it's classy and beautifully thought out. I just find it hard to separate the clothing/hair/wall as all the red is so closely matched

Jun 28, 2015 10 years ago
HoobFoob
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What a pretty summer scene! I love the colors - the mix of tans and cool reds/warm purples. The only nit-picky things that bother me are that her eyes feel a little too fierce for the calm scene, and that the sandals - while cute - are too dark to go with the color scheme.

Jun 30, 2015 10 years ago
The Beanbag Collector
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7/10, it's a little simple but the face is lovely. I think it'd really benefit from a nice summery background

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Jun 30, 2015 10 years ago
Morgue
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