Subeta -

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Oh yeah, the color of the wings should be the color of the eyes, I think green of yellow would work.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The left ear is off a bit off, and there's a lot of fluffiness in the body so you can't really see the paws or tail. Other than that, to me, its good c:

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I know it's difficult to please all but purple? er what were you thinking? I don't like the colour or the shape of the right wing. It looks undefined and messy, almost like it was hit with a purple snowball. Tragic.

The rest is okay.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Nicest revamp in a while. The muzzle could be a bit shorter to give a cuter effect, but altogether this is fantastic : D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Hmm... This one looks kinda funny to me :/ The eyes should be bigger and it should have different color wings. The pose is awesome though :'D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

HOLD THIS ONE! It's pretty awesome. o.O i feel love for the Torrey. XD I think the wings are much better than the old, i don't get that complaining though.

Kudos artists! I love this one ^^

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

OMFG! that is so cute! I love how the feet are so fluffy...kudos to the artist!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Love this one...C: My only suggestion would be a little less fluff in the tail~it's almost as big as the pet itself! A little distracting, I suppose-- The pose is fantastic.c: Possibly one of the better revamps...;D

The irony of so many Sql errors combined with this squirrel-like pet is just funny to me, too...xD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

i love the new version but mabey make the wings a dfferent color

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I LOVE this version! TOTALLY CUTE! I really like the ear fluff X3 And unlike most people here, I'm diggin on the wing color too! It looks so cuddly and sweet! And I'm crazy about that big fluffy tail! Great job!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I prefer the old wings better, but otherwise all looks pretty good. I've never been a huge fan of all of its fluff (feet, hands... everywhere). But oh well.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

great, but lose the purple on the wings.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love the new revamp, it's cute, the wing color is FINE it really bring sit all togther and makes it flow nicely. I like this one compared to the last revamp becaus now it acutally looks like it's a fluffy cuddly thing instead of something that is like bones covered in fur. The feet fit the style better, and I love the eye color. The wing shape is so cute and fluffy it looks wonderful. I really really really LOVE the paw on it's stomach because it just looks so nice and poofy it makes me want to cuddle it! Hooray for the new Torrey and thank you VERY much to the artist.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

it`s kinda cute

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Holy crap! That's so cute!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It's adorable. But I think that the wings could be changed to something different. Maybe a different color, or a different shape?

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Mesic: If we're going to use that argument, then why don't we just make the common Torrey all shades of black and white? Or just the same solid color all over? Even better, why don't we just make ALL Common pets the same color?

There IS reason to care about the colors of the common version. A pet's common version is its default look, the one that represents the whole species outside of user's accounts. It should be the one that looks the most natural. The common version doesn't need to try and be fancy when there are plenty of other pet colors on Subeta that can be used to give the pet more exotic coloration.

I would be sort of interested in seeing something like what was done with the Anyu poll a while back - polling a green-eyed, brown-winged revamp against the turquoise-eyed, purple-winged one. Just so everyone can have a chance to see the difference. Between both polls, a [i]lot[i] of people have voiced preference toward the original coloration; it doesn't make much sense for the artist to be so adamant about changing the colors, but at least a poll with the above options would give both preferences a chance.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

That is a very good revamp

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I like this one a lot better than the first revamp! The body type seems just right now - not too skinny, not too stubby. The hair coming out of the ears seems a bit long to me, but hey I'll just give my torrey a trim every now and then. Thanks, Jag, for all of your hard work!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Nestly: FINALLY. Haha. So glad to see it up again! Way to go Jag. Just update this baby already, it's freaking adorable. ;3 Somehow you managed to make it even cuter than the first try.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I don't really like the hair hanging from the ears, I think it'd be nice to do it like the style of a Papillion, with excess hair from the ear's edge, not inside the ear. And I'm not very favorable of the pointed eyes, in the original picture, I like the rounded, innocent eyes, this looks like the pet is scheming, and it takes away the cuteness it used to have.

I also kind of liked the pose of the first revamp, this one isn't very fitting.

But it's definitely an improvement!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Mesic: Some people are just trying to come up with critique to help out. You don't need to wank them for it. :/

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Wow...that is so freakin' adorable! Kudos to the artist =3!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

... its so funny how so many of you guys are complaining about the purple wings on the COMMON prototype... Subeta has 24 pet colours, I'm sure ONE of them won't be completely repulsive to you. How often does one leave a pet Common? Seriously, come up with something better to critique than the bloody COLOURS, stick to things you cannot change.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Wow. This new revamp looks awesome, but I do have to admit that the purpleness of the wings is a bit out of place and the ear fluff looks weird. I prefer the old one's wings and the way the ear fluff is compared to the new one. Over all, It's pretty lovely. ;D

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Just want to add. After comparing more. I what I liked most about the first revamp was the hair fluff. I really really liked it. I like the face on the old one o much that I got one of these guys. I didn't think there was going to be another revamp after that one. XD The hair fluff on the new one is kind of ... just a fluff. I feel like I've seen it on another creature. Maybe it just needs to be defined a bit more like the other one was. This one looks a bit on there, then the other one has more character to it. LOL I'm just being net picky. XD

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Awww I liked the other revamp better but this one is still really cute. I just REALLY don't like the hair going out of its ears. Its a bit grows to me. I like the ears best on the old one with out the fuzz coming out of its ears. I also like the tail on the second revamp better for some reason. I think its just how its colored.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I do prefer this version over the last updated version that was up, but the only problem I have with this is still the purple wings. They seem so out of place and slightly awkward. I still believe they should be a light brown. I like the eyes more grass green than teal but this eye color is okay.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

MUCH better than the other revamp, now that I've seen the comparison. But I still don't quite like the eye color, or the squareness in between the legs or the color of the wings, or just the wings....I could just be getting picky though.

Still, very cute and a definite improvement. Thank you artists!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

AWWW It's so fluffy. ;^; Hurry and revamp it!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

d'aww.

WANTS.

-grabbyhands-

I love the expression and the eyes have been drawn beautifully. Well done, artist!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I don't like how it is square between the legs. I also DOnt like the purple wings. Otherwise great job!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

yay super cute well done

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Great revamp! I really like the posture and the proportions, but the shading on the nose (below the right eye) seems to curve a bit strangely... But I can live with that

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Nnnn, dunno... cute, I suppose. A bit more shading on the head, though? And I think the eyes & wings are colored very well. Brown wings? Come ON, people! Maybe a brown tongue, too? Let's make it colourful! ;P This one's got my full support anyway. nod nod

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Love it. Very cute. I really like the new pose, it's not as static as the pervious two and actually has some emotion in it. The eye color is adorable as well, and I also love the tufty ears. And I'm really digging the purple wings, they set it off well.

The only think I can find remotely wrong with this is the wing farthest away from the viewer. It doesn't look like a wing, it just looks like a tuft of something sticking out from the back. If the gap between the last two feathers was closed, and the top feather elongated, it would look much better. Right now it just looks odd.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I think that the new version is really good, cept for the top half looks a bit too small for me.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I truly don't like the new Torrey, besides the wings. Teir

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

omg,its so adorable

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

As a torrey owner. I'm actully quiet pleased. c: My torrey is male, but I can still see him like this. Even if hes reborn. xD Lovely job.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

This is by far the most adorable and awesome of all the Torrey's!

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Aww its adorable ^^.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

That's very pretty and well-proportioned, I would not change a thing about the lineart. I do think that the new wing color is much too dark, though, and those eyes...I don't know why there is such an insistence upon blue as a new eye color. This is somewhat less blue than the first revamp was, but turquoise is still a far cry from the apple green that is such a signature feature of the original Torrey.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

heart

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

I love it wouldnt change a thing

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

it! It's way better than the other revamp. It is a bit feminine, and you could cut down the tail size, but it's so awesomely AWESOME!

Like somebody else said, maybe you could get a potion or item from the CS to turn the pet back to the old revamp...

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

It is nice. But to be honest, it doesn't look uni-sex anymore, it only looks female D;

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

wow, great job! If this revamp goes through, I might consider getting one. I was never attracted to the old version or the previously proposed revamp, but this is great.

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

Tch, oops. " it looks less Chibi-like "

December 31, 1969, 7:00 pm by

The new one is MUCH better, it looks like Chibi-like =) that always annoyed me about the Torrey xD

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