
It's time for another <a href=/explore/polls.php?act=vote&poll=83>revamp poll.</a> This time the Paralix is looking forward to your constructive comments and critique.

This is the first revamp that I have ever seen with zero complaints, and exclamations of joy. Awesome job!!! Drools over pretty Paralix
HOLY CRAP! It's beautiful!
I have no problems with it. AT ALL. c:
Gorgey, if I may say so. All the little fixes it needs have already been noted in the re-line comments. Good job, and I can't wait ![]()
Its gorgeous!!!! I love it! GREAT JOB! I want one now
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and then run** excuse any other miss-spellings, miss-phrases or typos XD. I'm exhausted~
i love.the best part is is that they didnt change pose.
I'd say you did a really kickass job c:. Very detailed, I like that. I'm sorry to nit-pick on you, but I thought that if I could help with tiny flaws I found I should. The first one would be the head. It's important to remember that if the head turns, the neck should twist a little more. Like if you turn your head, and put your finger on your chin and thing run it down to the base of the neck, while keeping your finger in the very center/front of your neck, you'll see there's one fluid line head to the neck. I say that because it kind of looks like the head is on wrong; like the neck is twisted more then it should.
The left wrist (if I can call it that?) that is bent is also a little off. When a human bends their wrist pointing their hand downward, their bone kind of rounds at the wrist. but when an animal does it, it usually dents in slightly, and rounds a little higher on the arm just a little before the wrist joint. (again, sorry if I' nit-picking a little too much xD;; )
The bag legs are not even. The one closest to the camera, the paralix's right back leg, has kind of a bump in the center of the knee which is actually fine. But here's where it looks off; the other leg, the one furthest from the camera, looks straight compared to the other one. They're both bent relatively at the same angle, but one is curvier and the other is not.
I went ahead and re-lined it for you. It's a little tricky for me since my old computer's broken, and I'm on my dad's computer which doesn't have a tablet and only has paint but it should be alright.
I hope I managed to help you out in same way c: <3.
Oh Keshi! I see c: Good job Keshi! I haven't been this excited since I joined Subeta. She should know what she's doing, she's had experience with eastern dragons before. I do believe it just needs one or two things, like xxMadxHatterxx mentioned below, and it'll be perfect! ![]()
Someone mentioned that the fur should be obeying gravity? Not if it's flying~~ it already is loosely obeying physics, I see nothing wrong with it. I love the quality of the lines too. I can't wait to see what the others look like! stocked up on paralix potions
oh my god! I love this! It's perfect! I will SO be turning Risque into one if the revamp goes through!!!
It looks amazing. I love the detail. I love the shading. I love it.
I need a Paralix if this goes through. :| It's -beautiful-. ![]()
Who did this? It's beautiful.
Personally, I like how the pose is similar to the old one. I think it fits perfectly, and this revamp is BEYOND amazing, I have to say. I can't say much except that the tail shouldn't be behind the back leg farthest from us. :}
Kudos to the artist.
I have absolutely nothing to critique about this revamp. Just... wow. I love how delicate yet fierce it looks, both at the same time. The slight fur texture is great, and I love the paws.
Okay, so I have to state first that I LOVE this revamp! It's so cool!
There are only a few things that I'd want to change before this became finally. Really these are only little nit-picky things.
First of all, the back leg that is farthest from us should go behind the tail, it just looks odd when it’s in front. Also, the yellow tuft above the eye that's facing away from us should be a little smaller and moved up just a bit. It makes the face look awkward the way it is, it seems like it’s bigger that the one above the eye that’s facing us. And, last but not least, the tip of the ear that's facing us could be moved up just a smidge, so that it lines up with the one farthest from us. I made a photomanip of the revamp to demonstrate what I'm talking about.
That's about all XD I'm so excited for this revamp. It looks so cool!
This is a brilliant and beautiful revamp. The new red is more of a burnished color and less cartoon-y, and the defiant pose has been preserved perfectly. I like the touch of stylization (like the whiskers and curly hair) while the overall realism has been maintained and improved upon. Like many of the revamps, the shading is really excellent and the anatomy has been tweaked for the better. Kudos to the artist!
I LOVE this revamp. I am so excited for this to go through (looking at the poll results I'm sure it will.
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Omg i am in love!! lol
I don't really like it because it's too similiar to the old version, but the leg tassels make it look even more crowded and the tail looks flat compared to the body. A little more simplistic shading and a repose would be an improvement. Perhaps making the Paralix look like it is sitting down on air would be a welcome change.
Dang! Now I want it! XP But, if I'm going to change PyromanicAxel to an Arid Paralix (As he's a Reborn Aerie now), then I'm going to change Roxas_the_Chosen_One to a Reborn Aerie (He's the Spectrum Montre right now).
Now that is a revamp I really like. It works well with the appearance of the Galactic Paralix, which looks very much like a Chinese dragon. And now the paralix looks less like a flying weasel and more dragon like.
Now THAT is an awesome revamp.
i love everything about it! the curly whispers, underbelly, better shading, it's great. so much better than the old one.
I love it really! It just i think the whiskars are too long though and the tail should be between the legs not behind the legs. Other than that i love it.
This is the best revamp I've seen in a long time. Great job!
I looked at S-HQ, and the BR is the same...bleh way it was. All I can say is, I can't wait until you change the BR Paralix. It will look stunning in this art, with this type of revamp. It is currently... underwhelming and in need of sparkly newness.
just another reason why paralix are some of the greatest pets here
I love this Paralix! I admit, I hated them before and refused to ever get one. I didn't think that there could be a decent revamp. However I have been corrected. I think this is gorgeous. I see no personal flaw in it, and I'm too in awe to see if there are any factual flaws. I'm going to check out the RB version to see if it is still the same as it was when I first joined. I may even consider changing Ezra onto a Paralix. Love it you guys.
As long as you don't touch the chibi, angelic or reborn ones, I'm totally cool with this.
Always has been my favourite pet. Quite a brilliant revamp, actually.
I like the differences in body design, especially the underbelly, but I'd really like it if you kept the same bright red color. The current red looks - dull.
my only complaint is that i think the mustache / whisker things go too far and are kind of silly, but even that's not really a big complaint. otherwise its great.
Wow. This has to be the best revamp I have EVER seen on here!! I am scared if there will be a Montre re-vamp though.... favorite pet
are you going to change the blooderd cause i realy dont like the new one and i like my bloodred
Wow.
This is MUCH nicer than that last revamp you guys did with the Malticorn. ![]()
I LOVE this, i'll probably own one if this pulls through.
Just one problem, those elbow and leg tufts. Don't keep those, PLEASE. ;;
Oh, dear, this is the nicest revamp ever. I really want one now.
Hmm... Guess there's nothing I dislike about it...
Oh, one more little picky thing-- the tufts on the back legs would look much better if they went with gravity.
Yes! I've been waiting for this revamp while also wishing I could draw it myself, haha. This really looks great. I'm quite impressed by this... one of my favourite pets better than ever. (Although I still really love the ORIGINAL Paralix...) It looks less bulky and much more flexible, and this is appropriate for a dragon-like creature.
However... there are a few little things I see that look off. They're nothing major and could really just be left alone but I'll point them out anyway.
The ear on our right, its left, looks like it should be moved up a little. It looks a bit misaligned. Also, the visible knee looks like it could be brought up a bit. Also, the hind foot on the leg farthest from us looks like it should go behind the tail, as the tail appears to go underneath the paralix and therefor in between the legs. Nitpicking aside, it's quite good as it is.
I'd like to see the fur tuft that was underneath the ear like in the original Paralix image, but that's probably just me. I do like the addition of the tufts on the legs!
I love this revamp! I wasn't impressed with the Paralix when I first joined, but now they are a amazing!
Much much much better. c= It's just the nose seems too long. Other than that it's absolutely stunning. I love the texture and the pose.
I agree with the others about the right front leg looking a bit short and inanimate, and the tufts on the ankles looking stiff. They are also too large/imposing for my tastes; the fur seems to be tacked onto the ankles rather than being a part of the pet. I also think the pose would look cleaner if the back left paw was behind the tail.
My main criticism is that the muzzle is too long, making the former evil grin stretched out and less menacing. I think it would be great if the eyebrow was tapered like the current version to keep the aggressive look, too.
This is all the (hopefully) constructive criticism I have, but overall it's a really great revamp.
It's beautiful.
I'm not a fan of the Paralix, but good job on keeping the pose ^w^.
Oh my gods. Yes. Yes yes yes. I was SO afraid that when it was my favorite pet's turn for revamps I'd be disappointed, but this is WONDERFUL. The longer muzzle looks great, not alligator-ish as I would have feared. The paws have that same graceful foxy look, the whiskers are fantastic, the fur is GREAT, the color's the same, the eye is absolutely perfect, YES. Thank you SO MUCH. I am a bit of a Paralix nut and have been practically holding my breath waiting on this, and I can breathe now! I cannot wait for my dream pets, the Glacier and Hydrus versions, to be done, I am now sure they'll be to die for.
BRILLIANT! And trust me when I tell you that I never say that about revamps. This is fantastic. Wonderful job!
I dislike the muzzle, but otherwise I love it ![]()
curve the tail more so his foot makes more sense.
I'm going to be needing more pet slots.
It's beautiful, and graceful, and dangerous. I love it.
Please go through. puppy eyes
I love this new update! It is very well drawn and have only some minor tweaks. Others have pointed out his ind leg and his neck already. The big thing for me (and my only issue with the update) were his front paws. You should see a third digit on his right paw. This one looks like he's missing a finger. Other than that, he's wonderful!
Can this artist do the updated Harvester? (I can't wait for you all to update them!)