how do you feel about this for the position/sketch?

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Looks good to me. Will it be stylised like your examples?

Also the yaherra has a beak with the face plates coming down to just above the beak. It is more obvious on the bloodred one/the recoloured overlay on my pet Mngwa.

yes, is the tail all right like this or would you prefer it more wavy / curvy? let me know if the head looks all right too.

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I think wavy/curvy style. Rest looks good!

Let me know if you'd like anything changed like the colors or sparkles, etc. If it's good, please send payment over through trade / gc. Trade Lot

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edit; fixed something in the image.

Excellent, I love it~! Thank you so much. :)