Okay, looks like fun! Might be a week or two — I am a slow writer and life is getting busy. I'll ping you when I'm done! Thanks for ordering. C:
Here you go! Let me know if you'd like something changed — your request was very open-ended.
I'll set up a trade now!
thank you once again!! ❤ it's amazing how much of a story you were able to pack into so few words ;v;; i absolutely love it!
I'm super glad you're happy with how it turned out! I'm better with brevity than actual description, which is a problem I'm trying to fix. Until then, microfiction!
Chance! I tried to make it a bit livelier, since I felt Chance actually has emotions, and tied it into the other piece.
Apps. 180 words. Setting up trade now!
OMGGGG I LOVE YOUR STORY!! A
if you think you can still keep writing about yurei/chance, may I request a continuation of their stories in 3rd person (so that you can see both sides) I would love to hear how they meet and how they start working together, maybe with their skills combined, theyre able to see more information about someones future more clearly, I kind of imagine Chance spproaching Yurei and she thinks hes weird and doesnt really understand why he would be interested in her, and he starts following Yurei around and maybe helps her out somehow
I'm also thinking that chance could be interested in why yurei does the things she does, because not everyone is going to be thankful of being warned about their future, some people may not even believe it and fear them because theyre spirits, but Yurei is still willing to warn people regardless of what they thought about it, because she believes that saying something is better than nothing, while Chance believes that if they dont appreciate it, then why help them, just let them get hurt or die, eventually they form a partnership to help people
you can go up to 1k words max for this one, feel free to write as much as you can/want! ^_^
I also think it would be interesting to hear about a situation where someone didnt believe yurei and got killed anyway, and maybe it could be a situation that suddenly causes her to cry, which is strange for her since she doesnt normally feel any kind of emotion xD
my thoughts for yurei and chance was that theyre going to become a romantic interest in the future, but for now theyll be partners that become good friends
Sure! I'll give it my best shot! Do you have any physical descriptions, so I can include details?
physical descriptions like how they look? :o you can see the refs and description on their pages here ^_^: Chance and Yurei, I'm thinking that maybe Chance would be wearing more like a casual outfit, prob like hoodie/ripped jeans kind of clothing at first, and decided to get an outfit thats matching and more similar to Yurei's later on, you dont have to mention it though XD theyre both very pale since theyre spirits, and they both have hair that is white with purple tint