Sonatine had a redline with that idea, and I just sent her a sketch with a similar suggestion. I'd really rather not shorten them, as one of my dreams is to have really long/flowy beautiful things on here, but that perspective change will hopefully do it.

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@Cresenta

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New art for the wings, please see first post for preview and let me know if you want to reslot. Thank you so much for your patience!

ahh ty for the update! still definitely interested in a slot n_n thank you!!

Definitely would still love my slot please :3

I am still interested

I would like to keep my slot, please. Thank you. :D

Keeping my slot!

Oooooo, they look awesome! :D

Edit: Also confirming a reslot for them, please! (Sorry for the double-ping.)

yes i would! ty :D

Hello! ^^

I want to be pre-slotted for all colors of the White-Pearled Wings of Serenity. Can you ping me when the first color is available on shop? I'm following your group from now on. Thanks again! ^^

I hate to do this but I'm going to have to drop my slot on the White-Pearled Wings of Serenity. :( I've been staring at it and I never realized that it's kind of "blue-ish" originally I was hoping to match it with my white SM gowns. I'm so sorry about this. ;_; Any chance you'll be doing a pure white version as a recolor? Thanks so much for your time!

@Cresenta

It's fine, I appreciate you sticking with me so far.

I probably will, once we can actually get it on-site (latest issue is that staff doesn't feel like it's 3/4s enough); I intend to do a bunch of recolors with it, and that can definitely be in the cards as it would be popular to go with other items.

OMG I'm so happy to hear that! :D I'm def going to need a pure white because there is a ridiculous number of white SM gowns on here! -___-

And aww ofc, I'm still here for you! If I can help you out in any way with your SM tributes just comment me. I'd be happy to help. ^_^ And ugh so it's a perspective issue still? :( I wonder why they are being so hard on this, it looks proportional to me compared to other back items/similar wings onsite already.

@Cresenta

I wonder what I'd call that one. White Pearled Wings of Purity, maybe?

Now it's a different perspective issue; first the tails draped too far forward, and now it's not 3/4s enough. I wonder if I wasn't supposed to post the first feedback publicly or something.

I really should commission a different CI, too, to try and get the moon symbol out there (at least most of the work is already done!). I have an idea on how to make it work, I just need to add a stand and probably the overlay itself to the CI. It's so frustrating having these undone projects.

I confirm my slot. :)

That's a pretty name! _

Omg what? I thought they stated all the reasons for denying a CW in the first denial... I'm so confused.

I'm gonna need to pick up a copy of the moon symbol when it's onsite too. Just need to check my CSC stash first. It's super pretty! That CI idea sounds really awesome and I bet it'd work with the symbol nicely!

Aww I can imagine. It can be overwhelming especially when things keep getting denied but once you get a few CWs onsite and get the hang of it, denials tend to go down because you know what to avoid and what might be an issue with a new item you're hoping to submit. Stick with it and don't give up, you can do this! ^_^

@Cresenta

My current idea is to add the overlay of the moon to the CI, and use three pearls as the base; like 'feet' on the moon being the stand. I also hope that will let the glow effect through.

Wow that sounds SUPER creative and pretty! Can't wait to see it! _

@Cresenta

Ack, double-post. ;_; Sorry.

No need to apologize. I've been getting the same thing on my end with my posts. -__- Silly Subeta errors!

I can order another ten of the Wings of Serenity at 650 each; the updated/on-site art is in the spoiler for the item on the first post.

I am also doing a white recolor rather than the faint blue, with very slightly different line-art at the end of the tails, if that's something you want to keep in mind for CSC counting; let me know your thoughts. Thanks!