Needs more shading. It looks flat, like the skirt mostly at the top parts of it and the peplum top and the sheer top looks a bit weird with the one lighter stripe/shade. I don't know exactly how much more shading or what shading but I do know it's flat-looking and would likely get denied, not sure about the other parts.

All I know is that subeta requires three to five layers of shading, and the rule is probably the more the merrier as long as it's properly shaded. There also needs to be a light source from the top left corner, and on some of the pieces it's not really clear that that is the light source.

Again, you might want the opinion of an actual CW artist as they have the artistic eye, but those are my two cents on it. I can't wait to see how they turn out, I seriously love these pieces!

Me love you long time. <3 love your HA!

There's actually 4 layers of shading. When I made it smaller it probably screwed up so I would need to make the shading darker/lighter. Still waitin on an actual cw artist to help but we shall see.

This is a very interesting set! I think the pieces will be very versatile once you're done with them C:

I think the important things to look at currently with the versions in the first post are;

1. Line thickness, especially on the sheer items.
2. The amount of area covered by the shading. While you may have 4 layers of shading, they're covering such a low portion of the item it makes them barely look shaded. (The skirt makes this really obvious as there is a huge portion that has zero shading on it what so ever.)

Ping me / ask questions if you need anymore help or anything else! I'll be more than happy to assist C:

Thanks! Do you mind if I take this to smail? :D

sMail is fine! C: Just be a little patient with my replies today I'm feeling a little under the weather!