8/10 – The colors go well together as a palette, the blue accents in the eyes, headband, and socks are a nice touch among the greens and browns, and the avatar definitely fits with the background.

My constructive feedback is that the stencil over the background feels dissonant. It's a harsh, angular shape and very dynamic, which to me doesn't super fit with the calm, warm, chill mood of everything else. A different stencil item could be a cool addition, but I think this one is clashing.

You have a great nature vibe going on, and the HA is charming! :)

9.5/10, i love the color matching and the soft, gentle vibes this gives off. the only thing off to me is that i don't feel the shoes match as well as they could, and the eyeshadow is a little flat compared to the detailed shading on everything else.

8/10 The whiteness of the shirt doesn't fit well with the rest of the avie in my opinion.

[-bat] 9/10 I dig this a lot and it had has creative layering but some of the colors seem mismatched

9.9/10, i like it a lot! the colors all match well and work together, and the puffiness of the skirt echoing the background is a nice touch! i think just a small blue/blue-green accessory (or two, if you change out the anklet) would really, fully tie things together.

9.5/10 this is beautiful. It's haunting and serene and she's the cabbage patch doll of my dreams. The halo crystal and dribbly lights frame her face beautifully and I love how the background is mirrored in her jumper (is that a Vanity item btw? it's lovely) and the cactuses of the foreground in her shorts -and is that a booty cabbage she's packing too back there? It works, whatever it is.

The only thing I would change is the shoes for sneakers as she's undead in the desert in heels and that sounds like all sorts of difficulty. The perfect sneakers are probably unavailable cash shop and $$ though and the mary-janes she's wearing suit the look and match her hair really nicely, tying the whole look together.

10/10 great angelic/monster theme going on, there's nothing i don't like about it. it really feels otherworldly and slightly disturbing, the many nice little details really kept me staring and really compliment the look.

7.5/10 the harpy look is a good idea and i like the synergy of the body with the background but the relatively bright hair and incredibly made-up eyes don't really seem to go together with it? maybe try the or something in a similar shade for the hair, and something a little less made up like or for the eyes? could also work for a more 'natural' but still made up look, if that's what you prefer. the relatively-vibrant green rock in the foreground also draws the eye to the bottom corner of the image and away from the face, so either a duller foreground or a more vibrantly colored background would keep focus on the avatar itself vs the bottom edge.

I'm going to give your HA a 10/10! It's spooky and I love the colors and how your hair matches the purple on your clothing.

7.5/10! I like the creepiness, but something's just throwing me off.

9/10 love it! Just don't see how the broken christmas decoration fits

9/10 I love the ghostly/fairy/celestial maiden vibe you've got going on but I think a different bg would work better. Or use a lighter shadow over your bg with some clouds or fog.

9/10 i love the color scheme and how well each item matches in both shading and tone! i feel like the legs look a little bare despite the stockings however. an accessory or something with a bit more visible of a pattern might help balance the more intense shading on the hair.

honestly, I'm still 10/10 on this one. I'd probably mess about with a different stencil or forego it were it my HA but then it wouldn't have the same vibe and it wouldn't be a 10/10.

I really like how with this stencil border it looks like a faded old photograph that could be in the back of an album somewhere and nobodies looked too closely at it in ages.

When someone finally does, they'll probably assume it's just the photo paper degrading or something and try to forget about it but there'll be that niggling, haunting thought pecking away at the back of their mind, slowly growing with urgency- ''who is that purple lady with the dead face and flower crown?'' it will start and she becomes your enigma.

You deep dive the internet and dig up nothing.

''When did I start thinking about her so often?'' it will continue as you take time off work to browse occult bookshops and dank libraries in college basements, hoping for anything, a footnote or reference to your purple lady.

''Why is she now living in the pond at the bottom of the garden?'' it becomes at some point during your second year of madness.

You now realise you have no recollection of the past 18 months. You're dishevelled, skinny, lost amongst stacks of books and newspaper clippings, are you any closer to finding out who purple lady-

-You look down and notice a ring on your ink stained finger, then look around at the house you're standing in and your gaze falls out of the bay windows onto the lawn.''When did I move to a house with a garden?!''

Wait... wat

Purple lady drifts up the lawn. She's smiling.

And you may tell yourself, ''this is not my beautiful house'' And you may tell yourself ''this is not my beautiful wife'' but we know better. Purple lady knows better.

I can't sleep. Sorry for the weird story. Second wind insomnia is a bitch and I'm restless and tired and increasingly verbose for some reason.

i love when an avatar feels like a cohesive, well-defined character. like, there's a story behind the character, maybe; they're a person with a past, and it shows through what they wear, where they are, and what they're doing.

anyway. that's the feeling i get with this avatar.

i was also surprised to find, when i looked up your profile--thank you for having the items used visible, by the way--that you used a whopping 44 items to make this HA. holy moly! but amazingly, even with that much going on, the avatar doesn't feel at all cluttered. the shadow items you used probably helped with that lol.

if i had my druthers, though--if i were the one making this HA--i wouldn't've used the gummy fan. imho, it doesn't add too much to the "story" of the HA that i wouldn't've already been able to surmise from the rest of the avatar. i mean, sure, it's spoopy, it's cute. but i feel like it takes away from the power of the bubbly cauldron (and the choice to pair it colorwise with that fabulous wig).

9/10.

i loved the face piece, it connects to the sunflower and makes you look very ethereal. the long hair and catsuit are absolutely glamorous, these shoes are so exquisite! ;^] i'm really into monochromatic and mysterious looking HAs (currently working on a black & white avatar for myself)

Ooh cool HA! Reminds me of a rainforest greenhouse. With a dark secret--a plant that comes alive and eats people! And great backdrop layering c:

I can really see a story being told through your avatar. It sorta feels like a samurai character from an anime. What's the story behind the character and them being blinded? What are they fighting with their axe? I am very curious now about the narrative behind the outfit.

I also like how you blended different items to get the effect you wanted.

I love how light and airy this is! It feels very elf-like, not sure if that's what you were going for. I think the headpiece feels a bit out of place for me - it doesn't seem to have the same dark outline as the rest of the items though color-wise it fits well.

8.5/10

Thank you for the feedback Maggie! Yeah, the headpiece was the piece I had most trouble and tbh I am still searching for the right one. :S

Your avatar really reminds me of Glinda the Good Witch and I like how you blended the sleeve with the dress. It matches very well. I think the shoes are the only think that stand out because the drawing style is not quite the same as the dress/wig/background. I'd say 9/10 <3