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Jan 29, 2017 9 years ago
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Mametchi

Oo I adore the theme! Feels like it could use something to really pop, or perhaps a different neck piece(?), but overall quite lovely! :) 9/10

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Jan 30, 2017 9 years ago
Meowstic
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Chocomint

9/10 I love the theme of your HA it simple but all well made. the color theme is lovely and harmonize well with the background

Jan 31, 2017 9 years ago
Wick
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wow, I actually really love your HA! 10/10 the theme is very apparent and I love your use of those socks because I don't think I personally will ever be able to use them lol The only thing that seems off is the face for some reason, maybe a different skin tone, lighter or darker either way, the vibrant peach seems off with so much blush I think haha

Feb 2, 2017 9 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

The colors match very nicely! I love that background frame too! I feel like the flower in the hair brings balance to the HA 9/10

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Feb 3, 2017 9 years ago
JayJays
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8.5/10 Love the seagull xD Annoying little boogers they are. I think the mouth looks a little odd? Is there a default lip layered under something or is that just how the lips look? Maybe go for some nude-ish lipstick and more subtle eyes.

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Feb 4, 2017 9 years ago
Lime
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8.5/10 Lovely use of such vibrant colours, but I feel like the skin colour choice sort of looks off with it? Something paler or adding some pink blush somewhere to blend in with the other use of pinks in the avatar? Also the use of orange in the tights is not repeated anywhere else, and if she was paler you might be able to see it in the rest of the avatar better?

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Feb 4, 2017 9 years ago
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SailorButtress

Ooooh, I like it!

9.5/10 for a background person (like me), 10/10 otherwise. I add that personal caveat because I like background elements, maybe a Token of Tempest?

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Feb 6, 2017 9 years ago
Krystal
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8/10, it has a lot going on which is kinda overwhelming at first, but I like how you incorporated different foregrounds/backgrounds together.

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Feb 8, 2017 9 years ago
Daemin
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6/10 It's cute, but kind of plain for my tastes. Jewelry would look cute!

Feb 9, 2017 9 years ago
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8/10 I'm not good at critiquing, but I thought I'd give it a try. I really love the color scheme of black and red items and what you did with the background! But I think the body layering is cluttered (as you can see mine err on the simpler side, so maybe I''m just really biased). I don't see the white/pink items matching the rest of the color scheme, but I like that it is used throughout the HA so it is balanced!

Also as a side note, from your response on another thread, I can also see my HA being named Makenzie! xD

Feb 9, 2017 9 years ago
Aztec
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9/10 super cute! Can't say there's much to critique, I like the artist idea you're going for :)

Feb 9, 2017 9 years ago
Flyingkat
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Darkmontre

Love the color scheme ^^ The teals browns and white all harmonize well. I would give it a 9/10

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Feb 12, 2017 9 years ago
Chocolate
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Hi, I'll give your HA a 8/10. I like where it's going, but seems like there might be opportunity for improvement. The color scheme is great, though you could probably use some bright pink around the head. Have you looked at any jewelry or face makeup either? A body blush would do wonders.

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Feb 15, 2017 9 years ago
sweetvalentine
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LoveBirb

7/10, I like the color scheme, but while the clothing/jewelry/etc all harmonize very well, the background is too angular and makes the avatar look too simple. I'd try a more complex background or one that matches the curly, drapey lines on your clothing.

Feb 20, 2017 9 years ago
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Pepeh

9/10 love the idea, the contrast with the background. Maybe the snowball isnt helping much now hahaha Things I would comment: I would have used a colorful wig but thats just my personal taste haha, or added an animal in the background, but this are small things love the boots and the stockings!

Feb 21, 2017 9 years ago
Lumwinkle
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8/10 I like all of the things you have on your HA but they don't make a ton of sense altogether. I especially love the color of that wig.

Feb 22, 2017 9 years ago
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Rawnerka

There isn't a ton of co-ordination between your items whether by colour or scheme. You've layered everything really nicely though!

6/10

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Feb 23, 2017 9 years ago
yukiiura
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I would say a 7 or 8/10. I really like the colors, but it seems a bit messy

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Feb 24, 2017 9 years ago
Troll
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Rotworm

7/10 could use something layered around the leg area, and perhaps different nose.

Feb 24, 2017 9 years ago
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Rawnerka

Looks flippin' fantastic. If I had to critique I'd say you need a touch of the beige colour around the ankles but still 9.5/10

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