I'm gonna give it until tomorrow and base my choice on majority rules. We have one that doesn't care, one that def wants to wait it out, one that is okay with waiting it out but likes the other version better, and one that wants a resubmit. I'll tally after work tomorrow unless it is accepted

Still waiting on witchy, lvlybutterfly, amethyst, Azshua, and lucaalverez.

Slot for the artic frisky fox? ^_^ (Not sure if there are any)

Oh, and I LOVE the softer version much better.

"Arctic Frisky Fox Locks was denied for the following reason(s):

ITEM: Thin or weak lineart Over-sharpened artwork Typo or grammatical error in the item name and/or description

OVERLAY: Overlay light source not from top left Ambiguous shading/light source unclear

NOTE: It is very hard to tell, but the light source does not appear to be coming from the left on the hair as it should be. Overall the shading is a bit of an over-saturated blue.

In addition to the art issues mentioned above, the item should be named "Frisky Arctic Fox Locks" to fit proper adjective order

Fixes planned: So the name is going to change even though I don't think it flows as well. Ahz well.

For light source I think the original softer version should fix most of that but I'll probably add a bit more shadow to the right side to compensate for their talks of light source.

As for the CI... I'm not sure how to make it less thin and still keep the details but I'll see what I can do. if not it (sadly) might have to lose the little fox. I'll try to get all of the edits done tomorrow after work. Have a good night guys and thanks for your patience.

I... don't know quite what to say. I didn't realize they would go so far as to make you change the wording of the name of your item. I could understand if it was offensive or something. The order of the words though?

Arctic Frisky Fox Locks

Frisky Arctic Fox Locks

This doesn't make a lot of sense.. that would be two different items

Arctic Frisky Fox Locks, Tropical Frisky Fox Locks, Creepy Frisky Fox Locks

those would be the item you intended... changing the words changes the item entirely

Frisky Tropical Fox Locks, Frisky Arctic Fox Locks, Frisky Creepy Fox Locks

It isn't the same item the item is "Frisky Fox Locks" the adjective (color usually) goes in front. I don't think they are looking at your wording correctly. Switching the word places would mean anything you wanted to use with a Y at the end or something would sound really terrible aka "Frisky Creepy" YOUR way makes much much more sense. I'm not an artist, I'm the one who came up with the idea or anything, but my .02 cents is I would fight that name change.

omg. we have to get the right "adjective" order now, when we submit a cw? geeeze.

and I agree with it's "Frisky Fox Locks" that you're selling. they come in different 'flavors' "Artic" "Minty" "Rose" etc....

and I'll accept whatever the "crowd and boss" wants to do, (heh. i'm easy) BUT I don't think the softer version, is as "white" looks like it has more of a 'bluish' cast to it. (which, considering it IS "ARTIC" makes sense) /i mean, it's Freakin COLD up there!/

and considering it was denied, any way, I guess it doesn't really matter...

:D

XP I am wondering how its going to play out when I submit Frisky Charcoal Fox Locks. I can see why they were put off since the item is based on my friend's character who happens to be an arctic fox. So they are looking as the "arctic" as part of the species rather than a color. Anyway guys MOST of the changes sound like they wont be too difficult so chin up! XP

I still struggle between the fine line of "too saturated" and "item looks gray" And shifty eyes I was sampling colors from more recent site items in hopes of avoiding them commenting on the color.

I've got to admit, that "color" has always been a big issue to me. (wait... that's what I THINK, is a big issue for ARTIST) LOL NOT ME! :D

but for an artist, trying to get the "right shade" when talking to others... I know when I was in Gemology, that was the biggest deal. heh. Right before Pantone because such a big hit. , have you been by that color place...shoot, let me look in my bookmarks, because i swear I don't remember the name of it. (heh. I do know that CHIC uses it a lot, for their color matching stuff)

GOOD LUCK sweetie. I'm patient :D /sometimes/ :D

I agree with everyone else's comments about the name. I'm confident that you will get the actual art fixes in place and yay! for this allowing you to submit the version you originally meant to :)

sorry to be buggin you guys so much.

new is on the right for this one

do you guys think that's a good fix? I'm certainly hoping so.

I think the changes are very obvious and I hope the staff does too

oh yes...I can see definite changes and the overall look is much softer and so nicely shaded now. I like it a lot!

looks like is the only one that hasn't paid. If payment hasn't been made by the end of tomorrow I'm willing to give the slot to someone else.

Are you still interested?

yes please! :)

dear sweet, , please help my brain. :) for the life of me, I can not remember the name of your little fire fellow. (since they took everything out of my wardrobe, this past summer...because of my wardrobe freezing up, i haven't put everything back into it, and i can not find everything) heh. that's what happens, when they take out over 10k items out of one place, and i'm socken it away, as fast as i can (since i can only hold 250 items at one time in my inventory)

and of course, being the disorganized space cadet witchy i am, I put everything, in 3 different places. oh joy.

so. what was the name of your little fire guy? (what with fireside coming up and all, i need him!) :D

I think the fire guy must have belonged to someone else. Sorry :(

ITEM and OVERLAY: Shaky, rough, or inconsistent lineart NOTE: While the lineart weight is now overall better, it is a bit inconsistent.It goes from good weight to shaky and thin on the overlay and good weight to a bit fat on the item.

So good news and bad news. Good news is they are only rejecting it for one reason now. Bad news, its probably the most difficult reason to fix. I will work a little more with it on both of them but I think pretty much the outer outline is the only thing I'm going to have to fight with. SAH! I'll get it this time. Will try to get it fixed as soon as I get out of work today. Thank you again for your patience... and at least the rejection went through quickly this time.

thx for the update :)

thank you for the update ^^

Thank you for keeping us updated!

Thank you for keeping us updated!

oh pooh. lol. now i have to find him, just so i can ASK who it was from. lol

thanks!!