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May 9, 2012 13 years ago
Francine
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ACME

thank you!!

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
odduckOasis
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Cute idea with the pram. GL with that! Also, not sure if the idea of the pregnant belly nightgown will get through. You're not suppose to upload anything that alters the body of the HA in any way- I think this might include the torso. You can't draw anything that moves the arms or legs, so, I'm guessing that you can't do a pregnancy either. =/ Just one of them rules that subeta doesn't follow themselves, but forces us to. GL with everything!

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May 10, 2012 13 years ago
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oh, yeah I wasn't sure on the rule with that. That sucks though, subeta really needs better maternity stuff for the avatars. Thanks though :D

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
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That tutu is cute so far. It looks a bit gray tho, in the shading. Staff is also very picky about gray shading, so try to pick a brighter color with the shadows. Though, I do gotta say, the skirt looks like it's tilting- so it's higher up on the right side than the left (facing the viewer). I would also suggest maybe putting the balloon mark on the otherside? In more light to see it better- plus atm, it's not quite looking like balloons... but it's awesome so far! Perhaps if there's suppose to be 2 balloons, make them diff colors like they are on Pinkie Pie's cutie mark. Perhaps not yellow and blue, so it's not exactly the same... but you can play with it more. The pattern on the inside, also doesn't need to have an outline, which also might help. =)

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May 10, 2012 13 years ago
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yay yay yay! I love suggestions :D tysm. [edit] it's weird that the shading looks gray, I never used any gray at all so I'm not sure how that happened?

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
odduckOasis
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If you did a dropper closer to the gray side of the spectrum rather than more saturated with color, it will look gray even if it wasn't /full/ gray. I've done it before, and when I change it and color with a higher saturated color, it looks better and more vibrant. And, considering this is Pinkie Pie we're talking about, it needs to be bright. xD;

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May 10, 2012 13 years ago
Francine
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Ohhhh awesome, thanks for the tip :D I'll do all your suggestions, thanks a lot!

May 10, 2012 13 years ago
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- oooh love the pram :P

Buying! Need them in my life Now!!!! + + + +

May 11, 2012 13 years ago
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I want the pram!! Is it gonna be grey? You could do it white with pink or blue ribbons.

May 11, 2012 13 years ago
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right now I'm taking color suggestions. I really have to finish getting the line art and proportions right. It's been really hard to do, but hopefully I'll get it fixed eventually.

May 13, 2012 13 years ago
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For the pregnancy thing. I think they mean do alter the body as in don't move the arms cause the dress wouldn't work right. Might wanna ask someone.

May 14, 2012 13 years ago
Francine
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I tried to fix everything you said (except for the one side of the skirt being higher up than the other)

May 14, 2012 13 years ago
odduckOasis
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Nice. Tho, now the lines seem to thin in spots, so the outline might be a bit too weak for subeta's tastes. They are super picky about the outline. Also, the ruffle part is suppose to be under isn't it? It kinda looks more like it's attached to the skirt part, so it's still making it look a little funky I think because you're not defining the skirt from the petticoat now so it's all looking like one peice, which could work if that's what you're going for, but if not, you want to define it more. Tutu's are all tulle after all and this skirt doesn't look like it's layered like a tutu. Example of petticoat:

otherwise, for a tutu, you'd want it to look more like this:

Also, I would suggest not shading with purple at all, because it changes the color of the skirt to a more purple hue. Stay within the red hue range to keep it more pink. =) If you want, you can match the skirt to the colors of my wig: I can give you a palette if you'd like. ^.^ I'm totally fine with that.

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May 14, 2012 13 years ago
Francine
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oh wow, that's so nice of you :D Yeah, I guess the word Tutu is misleading, because it's really a petticoated skirt.

[edit] as long as staff don't freeze me over using the same palette :) I really appreciate all your help!

May 14, 2012 13 years ago
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No, they wouldn't at all, especially if I give it to you. They don't care if things match- because it's just colors, not the style of anything you're copying directly. Here you go. I don't have the original file it appears, but I was still able to grab these off the smaller version. Feel free to alter whatever shade you need to to make it work. =)

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May 15, 2012 13 years ago
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wow, you're amazing! New version is up :D THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE COLOR PALETTE. That helped A LOT.

Okay guys, I'm thinking my Pink Party Petticoats might be done... but I need some last minute critique JUST IN CASE before I work on the item image!

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