I thought my lineart might be TOO thick, haha I can definitely redraw them with thicker lineart if you think it will improve them

Really? O.O Hum maybe I'm just having eyesight issues lol.

If you want more seasoned opinions, I suggest pinging # CWcritique?

I think you were right I tried thicker lineart on my thundermouse redraw and it looks a lot better

I agree. (: You might want to thicken the lines for the robin egg too. ^^

Hi there :) Just thought I would offer a little bit of feedback for your Thundermouse Hoodie. The hood seems to conform to the shape of the head a little too much. This is a good example to look at. Even on the side closest to us, the hood opens up so that the viewer can see inside. Also this is a good view to look at as well. The hood would be a little more hidden behind the cheek on the far side. The way it appears now it almost looks like a front-view instead of a 3/4 view.

For the shading I would perhaps try a deep shade of purple instead of a darker yellow. Shading with complimentary colors can really make them pop :)

Also, Yujin is right. You should thicken the lines on all of your item images. The site artists love to deny for lack of black lines. Make sure they're very visible :) I hope this helps you! And good luck :3