Like when they're apprenticed? That would work great! (btw it's GaleClan, not Glade)

yeah, when they're apprenticed. :] i thought so too. oh! really? i shall go fix that. thank you!

Yeah I think so too. I mean, the cats that make up the Vipers have to come from somewhere. And haha okay xP You're right though, we do have a ton of plots together haha!

Cats so far (assuming I get the positions I asked for); Tawnypaw (RockClan med. apprentice) Darkshade (RockClan warrior) Morningblossom (RockClan warrior) Ravensong (RockClan warrior) Goldenflower (RockClan queen) Waspkit (RockClan kit) Flickerflame (GaleClan warrior) Crowpaw (GaleClan apprentice) Pinepaw (GaleClan apprentice) Kestrel (Viper Healer) Bone (Viper Commander) Midnight (Viper Novice) Twinkle (Kittypet)

silverwar I've updated the first post with all of your kitties! We still need some leaders though...I'll probably take one, but I certainly don't want to play all of them. And yes, kittypets, loners, and the like are allowed, I just forgot to put them up before. They're there now.

@ archaic @ Dolphi About Boneface, Wintersong, and Ashfall - I don't think the Vipers would use that naming style for their cats, since it's a Clan tradition. Unless you have a particular reason in mind for them to be named that way?

I can play a leader if no one else wants to, it doesn't matter either way to me. My reason was that Boneface came from GaleClan. He was born a clan cat so I thought it made sense that he had a clan name. I can change it though if you want.

I just think they would try to change their names in order to further separate them from StarClan, if that makes sense.

no, i didn't have an specific reason for naming them that way. i just liked the names, but i can change them. that's not a problem. :]

Yeah that makes sense to me. Well he can just be called Bone then. Kestrel is my healer btw. Forgot him in the list, my bad!

Pretty please somebody play the King! : <

I think I'll bring in a novice too, one who wants to become heir to the commander's position.

i can bring in Owlfang to play the King's part, if no one else wants to take up the position? :] except he'd probably go by Fang instead, but you know who i'm talking about.

i edited my post for the changes in my cats names as well as added a couple of cats. i'm not sure i'm going to stick with them right now though, so you don't have to add them in until i'm perfectly sure i want them. :] thank you!

I'd be happy if you did, I know you're willing to have him go along with her fucked up version of love :p

he's always willing to go along with her crazy ass version of love. haha! xD i'll go ahead and add him to the list then. should be just as fun as usual.

Badgerclaw is a warrior not an apprentice in GaleClan

Oops, that's what I get for reading too fast. XD

Yeesh! I go to sleep for the night and this is what happens! wow! OKAY, first off, I'm bringing in Blacksparrow to be she-cat's mate if you want him. He fits the description of vindictive tom. Would anyone like to be Thistlepaw’s mother and/or Chicorykit and Parsleykit’s father? The two kits are close to getting apprentice titles but its always fun having them as kits for a while. Not being totally clan born, I thought they might fit in nicely with this plot. Tanglebelly hates starclan but no one else really knows that. He is very professional about his deputies and the warrior code. It might be nice if someone would like to make a mate for him? As for Nettlepaw, some of you might remember his father was a bit of a psycho and killed rouges before being killed himself, so most cats are uncomfortable around the apprentice as he is pretty much the splitting image of his father. Also, would it be alright if Hollyfeather was good friends with the Rockclan medicine cat?

Rockclan: Deputy: Tanglebelly Warriors: Shadowlark Apprentice: Thistlepaw

Galeclan: Warriors:Hollyfeather Apprentices: Nettlepaw Kits: Chicorykit and Parsleykit

Vipers: Azalea Blacksparrow

Starclan: Hollyfrost and Heatherpelt

he sounds like the perfect choice for her vindictive mate. were you okay with the rest of the plot as well? :]

changed my mind about Pumpkin and Shakingtree, i don't think i'll be using them after all. sorry!

Just to make sure, Blacksparrow and Azalea are Fighters, right? Or did you want them to be something else? Also, Blacksparrow seems like a Clan name - unless he's undercover in one of the Clans, could you maybe change it a little? I'm so sorry, I know I seem picky, but I just want to be fair since I had other people change their cat's names too. Sorry!

Okay, I took them off. c:

Not sure if you guys noticed, but I put up a skeleton form for you guys to fill out. You can keep claiming spots and such as you already have been, just make sure you eventually fill out the skellies for your kitties.

thank you! :] i did notice the skeleton. i edited mine to incorporate those things. :]

here are my skeletons! hope they're acceptable! :]

if anything needs to be changed, let me know! :]

Yes, I'll post the full skellies. he left the clan as an apprentice and gave himself the name as a kind of 'stuff you' to his clan leader and mentor. at the time they refused to make him a warrior so he left figuring "why the hell should I wait for you to give me a title? I'll give myself a title." is this still a problem? if so could we start the plot with him just joining the Vipers just before he gets a new title?

Name: Nettlepaw Gender: Tom cat Age: 10 moons Clan: Galeclan Family: Reaper (Deceased) Unknown she-cat (Deceased)

Looks: He is a short fur black furred cat. He was the runt of the litter. Nettlepaw has bright green eyes that call attention even if he doesn’t want it. His paws are a little larger than average as well as his tail making him a great climber. He has strange and quite unique long hook like needle claws which he uses to escape in to the trees in a blink of an eye. He is the sleek splitting image of his father.

Personality: He is always acting bigger and stronger then he really is. He’s vicious and hates others telling him what to do but actually Nettlepaw has a deep gaping hole inside of him. Though born into the clan, many cats treat him cruelly due to his father’s history for blood lust. Being out on his own he had to adapt, the only way he knew how is to become selfish and hard heartened. There are only a few moments were he occasionally drops his guard.

History: Nettlepaw does not believe in Starclan. How could he? His mother passed away from black cough, he has no litter mates and his father was a blood thirsty murderer. He often wonders why, if there truly is a starclan, why they punish him so? What had Nettlepaw done to be this way? Unknowingly, slowing, the ill treatment was turning the handsome young tom into the one cat he has learnt to hate. His father, Reaper.

Name: Shadowlark Gender: She-cat Age: 26 moons Clan: Rockclan

Appearance: Shadowlark is a short furred she-cat with a strangely coloured pelt. Her fur is black except for small spots of random colors, dotting her back and legs. She inherited her dark coat from her father and her spots from her mother. Even her eyes are slightly mismatched. Whilst both are green, her left eye has glimmers of gold. It’s as though her body could decide which genes to take up so she took both. She is a lean cat with hooked claws and an elegant muzzle. The tip of her tail is a soft oaky brown.

Personality: Shadowlark is a loyal cat and a mean fighter. She is not afraid of physical pain and will happily fight for her clan. Shadowlark doesn’t mind putting in a hard day’s work. She is fairly easy going but doesn’t like a lot of restriction. She is the kind of she-cat who may wonder off in search of fun in the middle of the night.

History: Born in the off season, Shadowlark was a rebellious little kit. She put her parents through hell and back, acting up, playing rough with the other kits and running away from the nursery to go exploring. She is quite wild and loves the thrill of the chase. Some might go so far to say she is a bit of a thrill seeker. Deep down she means well, she may not act very respectful but she loves her parents and her clan. She would never for a moment consider becoming a kittypet and has a serious dislike for their lazy lifestyles.

Name: Thistlepaw Gender: Tom-cat Age: 10 moons Clan: Rockclan Rank: Apprentice

Looks: Thistlepaw has a tatty orange pelt. His mother is convinced that he is forming a bit of a mane as his neck is surrounded by long fur that always sticks up despite his best efforts to make it stay down. He has a long tail with black pads on his paws rather than pink. Thistlepaw has a long thin scar on his right flank. He is very sensitive about other cats asking him about it.

Personality: He is bold and very brave for his age but he is reckless and full of pride. He has a charming personality and can sooth talk his way out of small problems. He has respect for his leader but not the elders. He would rather jump in a river then look after an elder which is something huge for him because he can’t swim and is terrified of deep water. He can lightened stormy moods but can take his pranks too far and end up way over his head.

History: Thistlepaw was the only surviving member of his litter. His brothers and sister all passed away from starvation but he tried not to morn them because he imagines them playing happily in Starclan, laughing at his mistake and crying when he is hurt. The scar on his flank came from when he climbed a tree to escape a dog. No one else knew what happened. He came back to camp and refused to tell anyone. He felt like a coward from hiding in a tree when attacked by the rottweiler.

Name: Tanglebelly Gender: Tom-cat Age: 40 moons Clan: Rockclan Rank: Warrior/Deputy Family: Sister Heatherpelt (Deceased)

Looks: Tanglebelly is a long haired cat with a dark ginger striped pelt. Like most ginger cats, his pads are pink not black. His has fewer whiskers on one side of his face then the other. Tanglebelly has mass size on his side. He towers over most cats. He is well muscled with large shoulders making it very difficult to knock him off his feet. Who needs complex battle strategies when one hit can crack a cat’s skull open?

Personality: He acts a lot older than he is. He does not tolerate nonsense and will quickly put a cat in their place with a fast swipe of his claws. He has patience but hates to be nagged. The ginger cat also hates getting wet but will perform tasks without complaining. He has a habit of being rather blunt. He is not the cat to come to for reassurance. Some make the mistake of thinking he is all brawn but Tanglebelly is far from stupid.

History: Tanglebelly was never very good at catching birds. His well-built frame made him very heavy. He had a sister, Heatherpelt, a lovely little she-cat who managed to wiggle her way into his stone like heart. On the first moon of receiving her warrior title, she was swept away in a flood. Tanglebelly blamed starclan. He is certain it was Starclan’s fault and refused to be told otherwise.

Heatherpelt: Gender: She-cat Age: 30 moons upon death Clan: Starclan (Rockclan) Rank: Deceased/ warrior Family: Brother - Tanglebelly

Looks: She is a softer, leaner version of her dark ginger brother, Tanglebelly. She has a soft round face and small white ears. Long whiskers and long legs, her build is quite different to her bulky brother but they share the same vibrant gold eyes.

Personality: Heatherpelt was a young cat when she passed. She always learnt quickly and tried to do the best she could for her clan. She often pushed too hard just like the morning of her death when she had forced herself to hunt through the night so her clan could eat.

History: Heatherpelt grew up in Rockclan alongside her brother. She looked up to her brother for everything. Nothing made her prouder than the day he received his warrior title even though he receives his before she got her own. He towered over her and was her role model. Then, one leaf bare, a strange warm rain came early to the forest. It melted the snow much faster than years before. She had been trapped on a small island and was sadly swept to her death by morning. She now watches over her brother and her clan from the stars.

Name: Chicorykit Gender: She-cat Age: 6 moons Clan: Galeclan Rank: Kit Family: Brother - Parsleykit

Looks: She is an average sized kit with light brown eyes. She is a tabby brown short fur with a white belly and light faint stripe all over her body. She has a very cute face that could melt almost any heart.

Personality: Chicorykit is sadly a very naïve and innocent kit. She does not know even the stories of war and can’t possibly conceive of the idea of killing another cat. She is bright and full of energy, rarely willing to sit down for more than a minute. She is a little mischievous as she can act tearfully innocent to get her way but she doesn’t do it very often.

History: Chicorykit had a rouge mother which is why her name does not quite sound likes a proper clan name. Her father took pity on her and brought her back to the clan where another queen took her in as her own. She and her brother, Parsleykit are now happy and fast growing cats in their new clan.

Name: Parsleykit Gender: Tom Age: 6 moons Clan:Galeclan Rank: kit Family: Sister- Chicorykit

Appearance: Parsleykit is a brown striped tabby with black paws. He has soft brown eyes and an average build. He blends in to a group of cats easily without a scar to his name. Though still young, with powerful leg muscles, he is perfect from tree climbing and rock running.

Personality: Like his sister, Chicorykit, he also was not fully clan born which means his name is not quite right. Parsleykit is embarrassed by his bizarre and kittypet sounding name so often he will introduce himself to new cats under a completely different title. He has dreams of having a name like Hawkstone, Webclaw or Bonefang, strong powerful sounding names. Instead, he is stuck with Parsleykit. He is very sensitive on the topic. Other than his name, Parsleykit is a loyal and persevering young tom. He is always eager to learn. He believes in one day becoming the best warrior the clan has ever seen.

History: Unlike his sister, Parsleykit is embarrassed and hateful of his rouge mother. He denies knowing anything about her and announces he is a clan cat through and through. He and his sister were born to a rouge. When the rouge became too sick to look after them, their father took them to the clan and gave them to a nursing queen.

Name: Hollyfrost Gender: She-cat Age: 75 Clan: Starclan (Rockclan) Rank: Deputy – Deceased Family: Daughter - Hollyfeather Mate - Bluestorm (Deceased)

Appearance: Hollyfrost is a calico she-cat with most of her bold colors along her back. She has deep brown eyes and strong legs for jumping. She has firm muscles and a long stride. Average in height, she may have blended in if not for her firm characteristic voice.

Personality: Hollyfrost is a determined and strong she-cat. Persuasive and experienced in battle Hollyfrost was an excellent choice for deputy despite her age. She stayed an apprentice for quite a while and mated after her fifth moon as a warrior. She mated with a tom cat named Bluestorm, a tall blue-eyed warrior whom she had grown up with.

History: Hollyfrost was both a strict mother and a strict mentor. She was an example of a deputy that was chosen for her hard won experience. She died in battle before becoming the new leader for her clan. It was a loss to the clan but many could see it coming, she was getting quite old and refused to retire to the elders den. She lived a long life and passed on many teachings. Hollyfrost was firm about her belief of Starclan, so much so that she encouraged her daughter, Hollyfeather, to become a medicine cat.

Name: Azalea Gender: She-cat Age: 22 Clan: The Vipers Rank: Fighter

Looks: Azalea is a lean elegant she-cat with a black pelt. Her pelt has unusual brown smudges mixed into her belly and forepaws. Azalea has a long dark tail and long ears with tuffs giving her an Egyptian look. Her legs are long and sturdy for long distance running. She is the classic example of a beautiful female who is happy breaking hearts. She is good at hunting rabbit due to her streamline body and good balance.

Personality: Azalea can only be described as a spoilt brat. She has no idea what subtlety is making her crude and oblivious to other cat’s feelings. She is rude and light hearted about her duties as well as the importance of the duties of others. Azalea doesn’t get in trouble for things she has done, rather for the things she doesn’t. She is incredibly lazy and passes of her jobs onto younger cats by blinking her eyelashes and asking in sickly sweet tone. She has a wicked tongue and never seems down. She quite likes the idea of becoming a clan cat or a kittypet. It means safety and food with less work. Azalea hates water with a passion and when it rains, she sulks.

History: Azalea’s mother was just as arrogant and pretty as her daughter. She got her way no matter what. Her mother was a rouge who lived for a while as a kittypet until Azalea was born. She never knew who her father was and decidedly doesn’t care. Her mother was attacked by wild dogs and literally ripped to pierces. Azalea was taken in by the rouges though at times, they wish they hadn’t.

Name: Hollyfeather Gender: She-cat Age: 47 moons Clan: Rockclan Rank: Warrior Family: Mother - Hollyfrost (deceased) Father - Bluestorm (Deceased)

Looks: She has a creamy white pelt with faint brown smudges on her back. She is shorthaired cat with deep brown eyes with the slightest hints of blue. She has delicate paws and an abnormally strong sense of smell, more so than a regular cat. She is not small or large and blends in with other cats. Hollyfeather is a naturally beautiful cat; even in the worst she seems to have a glossy pelt and kind eyes.

Personality: Hollyfeather is loving in nature. She wished deeply to become a medicine cat and live up to her mother’s wishes but she also could not bear the thought of never having kits. She still enjoys collecting herbs and playing in the nursery with the kits.

History: It was her mother that pushed her so hard to become a medicine cat. She harbors perhaps a small grudge against her mother but also feels that she let her down by choosing to be a warrior instead. Hollyfeather’s sleek form makes her an excellent fisher and her bright personality and caring nature means that she has little trouble making friends amongst the clan.

Name: Blacksparrow Gender: Tom Age: 40 Clan: The Vipers Rank: Fighter

Looks: Blacksparrow is a cat of average size. He has a black pelt with a slightly red tint to it. He has a medium sized path on his forehead that stretches back between his ears. The patch is a dark red colour, earning him his warrior name, sparrow. With a slim body and not a whole lot of muscle build, he is best at catching rabbits, birds and snakes but not so good at any really small prey. He has bright brown eyes and dark black pads.

Personality: Blacksparrow has never believed in spirits, ghosts or otherwise. He believes in the strength of his own claws and the ability to live each day. He left his clan as an apprentice after his old mentor refused to pass him for his stubborn spirit and lack of willingness to follow clan rule. So he left and gave himself a warrior title. Why should he wait for some star crazed cat to give him the name he rightly deserved? On his own, he developed a cruel persona.

History: Blacksparrow had no siblings of his own but was lucky as other queens had kits around the same time. After leaving his clan he joined the Vipers, a clan of sorts that followed similar ideals. He never gave up his clan title, wanting his old clan to know exactly who he was. (Previously Galeclan)

Of course Hollyfeather and Halfwind can be friends, though you must understand he'll never feel like he deserves her friendship. Would you like be to bring in Cherryflower for Shadowlark? By the way, a cat wouldn't still be an apprentice at 16 moons unless there were a reason for this training to be slowed/delayed.

I had a thought. Without kits, The Vipers would die off quite quickly. Perhaps they have a season where it's acceptable to have kits, say Greenleaf? Also, I think it should be acceptable for the Queen to give birth to heirs whatever time of year, given she is the Queen. What do you think?