The lineart is quite thin, it almost looks dark brown. The head is also a tad too small and the neck seems rather long. Hmm a thought I had though, it would be interesting to see a different marking given to it for the accent colour rather then butt spots. They are so common.

I like it though, especially his feet and tail. The shading is nice too, although the scritchy scratchy parts of it almost look a bit pixelated but thats just your style. Haha sorry if you weren't looking for critiques! i do like it c:

These are awesome! I like the removal of the toes. I would love to see some special colors! (angelic/glade/glacier?) I agree a different marking for the accent color would be pretty cool. I'd like to see what you could come up with. :)

If you could do a pet with subeta style lineart and shading- I bet you could become an arts on the site! You're really talented.

i like the edited version a LOT more than the first one, but i am very attached to my hipposaru, and would miss his landing/flying pose. the wing detail is nice and you def kept the spirit of the pet i think, nice job! :)

Please do them all. Also would it be ok if I used one as an overlay if I credited you for it? I love them and want them to be real.

I would totally love if this were the real update. I never liked this pet before. But the way you did it looks so gorgeous!