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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Spite

Got the message with the star, too and it was cute - I cannot wait to hear what happens next. =o

Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Dear daiary.

I have wanna go to old ladys. I have wanna ask why they is cry. But mama find me out of room. She look at me bad. She pull my ear painfull. She take me to room. I no like big white place. I no like white room. I no like here.

Mama say no go out of room. Mama say she go away. Mama say she go back on Luminairie. I like Luminairie! There is fairys. I like fairys.

Mama say to be good girl. I am good girl. Mama say she give me fairy when she go back. Mama kiss my head and go away of room. I go away of room with Mama. Mama go to shiny steel door.

I have gonna miss Mama. I miss Mari.

Old lady stand up and go to me. Old lady look at me mean. Old lady say go home. Old lady say this is no place for me. I say to old lady i no like here. Old lady shout at me. Old lady say no look at her and go to room.

I cry. I wanna go away. I no wanna go to room.

Pretty girl in white see me. Pretty girl run to me.

Pretty girl give me tissue. Pretty girl say are you ok? I say no.

Pretty girl say she is nurse. Nurse is pretty! I say i is May.

Nurse say i no say i is May. I say i am May. Nurse smile lots. I like smily people.

Nurse take me to room. I no want. Nurse say is ok.

I wanna write in daiary. Nurse say she wanna see. I say no. Nurse look sad and say please. I show her daiary.

Miss nurse read daiary. Nurse look sad. Nurse look at me and say she help me write. She say do i like to write. I say yes. She say i am cute. She give me cute star. She say it is cute like me. She say she go away now. She go away of room and close door. I am happy. I like miss nurse. Do you like miss nurse?

I put cute sticker in page. So pretty like me. Love,

May

❤ I'm glad May has found a friend.

Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Ahh..I'm lucky. I was able to read the next message. I hope the nurse won't turn out evil. May needs a friend. v_v She is cute. ❤ Can't wait to read the next one.

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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Dear daiary.

I have wanna go to old ladys. I have wanna ask why they is cry. But mama find me out of room. She look at me bad. She pull my ear painfull. She take me to room. I no like big white place. I no like white room. I no like here.

Mama say no go out of room. Mama say she go away. Mama say she go back on Luminairie. I like Luminairie! There is fairys. I like fairys.

Mama say to be good girl. I am good girl. Mama say she give me fairy when she go back. Mama kiss my head and go away of room. I go away of room with Mama. Mama go to shiny steel door.

I have gonna miss Mama. I miss Mari.

Old lady stand up and go to me. Old lady look at me mean. Old lady say go home. Old lady say this is no place for me. I say to old lady i no like here. Old lady shout at me. Old lady say no look at her and go to room.

I cry. I wanna go away. I no wanna go to room.

Pretty girl in white see me. Pretty girl run to me.

Pretty girl give me tissue. Pretty girl say are you ok? I say no.

Pretty girl say she is nurse. Nurse is pretty! I say i is May.

Nurse say i no say i is May. I say i am May. Nurse smile lots. I like smily people.

Nurse take me to room. I no want. Nurse say is ok.

I wanna write in daiary. Nurse say she wanna see. I say no. Nurse look sad and say please. I show her daiary.

Miss nurse read daiary. Nurse look sad. Nurse look at me and say she help me write. She say do i like to write. I say yes. She say i am cute. She give me cute star. She say it is cute like me. She say she go away now. She go away of room and close door. I am happy. I like miss nurse. Do you like miss nurse?

I put cute sticker in page. So pretty like me. Love,

May

Wow it's developing into a whole story :O <3

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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Got the third message as well. I just want to say to the person doing this, that this has seriously become my favorite part of the day. I can't wait to come to Subeta the next day to see what sweet May has to say to her diary! It's like reading a great book, when you're only allowed to see one chapter per day, and you can hardly wait to read the next part.

Thank you for doing this, it's really a pleasure to read! ❤

Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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I'm excited about this new development! Hope things get better for May soon. ^^

Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Oh my god I LIKE THE NURSE! SHE BETTER BE NICE THE WHOLE TIME OH GOD ;m;

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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Dear daiary.

I have wanna go to old ladys. I have wanna ask why they is cry. But mama find me out of room. She look at me bad. She pull my ear painfull. She take me to room. I no like big white place. I no like white room. I no like here.

Mama say no go out of room. Mama say she go away. Mama say she go back on Luminairie. I like Luminairie! There is fairys. I like fairys.

Mama say to be good girl. I am good girl. Mama say she give me fairy when she go back. Mama kiss my head and go away of room. I go away of room with Mama. Mama go to shiny steel door.

I have gonna miss Mama. I miss Mari.

Old lady stand up and go to me. Old lady look at me mean. Old lady say go home. Old lady say this is no place for me. I say to old lady i no like here. Old lady shout at me. Old lady say no look at her and go to room.

I cry. I wanna go away. I no wanna go to room.

Pretty girl in white see me. Pretty girl run to me.

Pretty girl give me tissue. Pretty girl say are you ok? I say no.

Pretty girl say she is nurse. Nurse is pretty! I say i is May.

Nurse say i no say i is May. I say i am May. Nurse smile lots. I like smily people.

Nurse take me to room. I no want. Nurse say is ok.

I wanna write in daiary. Nurse say she wanna see. I say no. Nurse look sad and say please. I show her daiary.

Miss nurse read daiary. Nurse look sad. Nurse look at me and say she help me write. She say do i like to write. I say yes. She say i am cute. She give me cute star. She say it is cute like me. She say she go away now. She go away of room and close door. I am happy. I like miss nurse. Do you like miss nurse?

I put cute sticker in page. So pretty like me. Love,

May

Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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I hope the nurse will be a good friend to May. She sounds like she needs someone badly. Thank you anon for including me in this. I'm really enjoying the story. :D


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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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I hope the Nurse takes her out of that place and the two of them become a Mother Daughter thing a la Matilda and Miss Honey. 8I Don't make me sad, story. This development was kind of nice.

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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
Cadavre
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;^; These are so sad! What a creative anon!

Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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</p>
<p></p>
<p>Dear daiary.</p>
<p>I have wanna go to old ladys. I have wanna ask why they is cry. But mama find me out of room. She look at me bad. She pull my ear painfull. She take me to room. I no like big white place. I no like white room. I no like here.</p>
<p>Mama say no go out of room. Mama say she go away. Mama say she go back on Luminairie. I like Luminairie! There is fairys. I like fairys.</p>
<p>Mama say to be good girl. I am good girl. Mama say she give me fairy when she go back. Mama kiss my head and go away of room. I go away of room with Mama. Mama go to shiny steel door.</p>
<p>I have gonna miss Mama. I miss Mari.</p>
<p>Old lady stand up and go to me. Old lady look at me mean. Old lady say go home. Old lady say this is no place for me. I say to old lady i no like here. Old lady shout at me. Old lady say no look at her and go to room.</p>
<p>I cry. I wanna go away. I no wanna go to room.</p>
<p>Pretty girl in white see me. Pretty girl run to me.</p>
<p>Pretty girl give me tissue. Pretty girl say are you ok? I say no.</p>
<p>Pretty girl say she is nurse. Nurse is pretty! I say i is May.</p>
<p>Nurse say i no say i is May. I say i am May. Nurse smile lots. I like smily people.</p>
<p>Nurse take me to room. I no want. Nurse say is ok.</p>
<p>I wanna write in daiary. Nurse say she wanna see. I say no. Nurse look sad and say please. I show her daiary.</p>
<p>Miss nurse read daiary. Nurse look sad. Nurse look at me and say she help me write. She say do i like to write. I say yes. She say i am cute. She give me cute star. She say it is cute like me. She say she go away now. She go away of room and close door. I am happy. I like miss nurse. Do you like miss nurse?</p>
<p>I put cute sticker in page. So pretty like me. Love,</p>
<p>May</p>
<p>

Omg. More questions (as always) but I like having to think about what the story means! Now I'm pretty sure it's a hospital -- but why is May isolated? And what happened to her arm? And who is the old lady? o.o;; Lots to think about.

I think my heart kind of broke at the sentence "I like smily people." It seemed like exactly something that a kid would say. May, bb, hang in there!

I predict that nurse is going to help her improve her writing, and it'll show in the next letter. (I hope there is a next letter!)

As always, thank you, anon! ❤

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Dec 20, 2013 12 years ago
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Got the second and third ones too! :D Gosh this story is so interesting, thanks for doing this anon!

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Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
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Dear daiary. I have wanna go to old ladys. I have wanna ask why they is cry. But mama find me out of room. She look at me bad. She pull my ear painfull. She take me to room. I no like big white place. I no like white room. I no like here.

Mama say no go out of room. Mama say she go away. Mama say she go back on Luminairie. I like Luminairie! There is fairys. I like fairys.

Mama say to be good girl. I am good girl. Mama say she give me fairy when she go back. Mama kiss my head and go away of room. I go away of room with Mama. Mama go to shiny steel door.

I have gonna miss Mama. I miss Mari.

Old lady stand up and go to me. Old lady look at me mean. Old lady say go home. Old lady say this is no place for me. I say to old lady i no like here. Old lady shout at me. Old lady say no look at her and go to room.

I cry. I wanna go away. I no wanna go to room.

Pretty girl in white see me. Pretty girl run to me.

Pretty girl give me tissue. Pretty girl say are you ok? I say no.

Pretty girl say she is nurse. Nurse is pretty! I say i is May.

Nurse say i no say i is May. I say i am May. Nurse smile lots. I like smily people.

Nurse take me to room. I no want. Nurse say is ok.

I wanna write in daiary. Nurse say she wanna see. I say no. Nurse look sad and say please. I show her daiary.

Miss nurse read daiary. Nurse look sad. Nurse look at me and say she help me write. She say do i like to write. I say yes. She say i am cute. She give me cute star. She say it is cute like me. She say she go away now. She go away of room and close door. I am happy. I like miss nurse. Do you like miss nurse?

I put cute sticker in page. So pretty like me. Love,

May

I love you anon. ❤️

Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
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Dear daiary.</p>
<p>I have wanna go to old ladys. I have wanna ask why they is cry. But mama find me out of room. She look at me bad. She pull my ear painfull. She take me to room. I no like big white place. I no like white room. I no like here.</p>
<p>Mama say no go out of room. Mama say she go away. Mama say she go back on Luminairie. I like Luminairie! There is fairys. I like fairys.</p>
<p>Mama say to be good girl. I am good girl. Mama say she give me fairy when she go back. Mama kiss my head and go away of room. I go away of room with Mama. Mama go to shiny steel door.</p>
<p>I have gonna miss Mama. I miss Mari.</p>
<p>Old lady stand up and go to me. Old lady look at me mean. Old lady say go home. Old lady say this is no place for me. I say to old lady i no like here. Old lady shout at me. Old lady say no look at her and go to room.</p>
<p>I cry. I wanna go away. I no wanna go to room.</p>
<p>Pretty girl in white see me. Pretty girl run to me.</p>
<p>Pretty girl give me tissue. Pretty girl say are you ok? I say no.</p>
<p>Pretty girl say she is nurse. Nurse is pretty! I say i is May.</p>
<p>Nurse say i no say i is May. I say i am May. Nurse smile lots. I like smily people.</p>
<p>Nurse take me to room. I no want. Nurse say is ok.</p>
<p>I wanna write in daiary. Nurse say she wanna see. I say no. Nurse look sad and say please. I show her daiary.</p>
<p>Miss nurse read daiary. Nurse look sad. Nurse look at me and say she help me write. She say do i like to write. I say yes. She say i am cute. She give me cute star. She say it is cute like me. She say she go away now. She go away of room and close door. I am happy. I like miss nurse. Do you like miss nurse?</p>
<p>I put cute sticker in page. So pretty like me. Love,</p>
<p>May
I'm so excited I got this installment! I've been following along with my sister and I'm completely intrigued. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. ^_^

Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
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Dear daiary.</p>
<p>Nurse go away. Then there is loud sound. I am scared.</p>
<p>It go again and again. Small window have lightening.</p>
<p>I hide in blanky. In lightening i hold Mari. I no like lightening.</p>
<p>There is loud sound again. Sound is laughing. Mama say to me there is monster in bed. I no like monster.</p>
<p>Door open. There is noone in door. It is dark. Dark scare me.</p>
<p>I wanna miss nurse go here to white room. I say loud miss nurse miss nurse.</p>
<p>I see dark thing in door. It go to me. The eye is red. Teeth is scary. Is this monster? It take my neck. Head is heart. Neck is heart. I no can breathe. Monster make noise and bite my lazy arm. It is happy.</p>
<p>I run away. I no like white room. I no like monster. I no like hopital. Monster run to me.</p>
<p>He take me with sharp shiny thing. He throw me and laugh bad.</p>
<p>I cry and shout... Help... please help...</p>
<p>I wake up. It is bright in white room. I see big man doctor. He have shiny and pretty metal thing. They look like letter L. He no look mad.</p>
<p>He say are you ok May. I say i am scared. He say am I heart. I say monster throw me and bite my arm. He laugh bad and have red eyes. I run and i have sick.</p>
<p>Doctor laugh. He no laugh bad. He hug me and say it is ok. Monster no hurt me. Monster no real. He is my Papa now. He no let monster heart me. I push. I cry.</p>
<p>You no my Papa. Papa is my one Papa. Papa go away.</p>
<p>Doctor say i no under stand. He love me and Mama. He wipe my face. Its ok May no cry.</p>
<p>I look at lazy arm. I have arm no more. I say to doctor where is my arm.</p>
<p>He pull thing in pocket. It have pretty yellow ribbon. I like ribbons.</p>
<p>I ask what is that. He say remember i want to keep arm. I say yes. He say my arm no more good but thumb is ok. He give me thumb in ribbon. It is cute.</p>
<p>I ask am i ok now. He say i have gonna stay in white room more. I no like white room. He say i am no ok. I have sick. He say to me later.</p>
<p>Thank you big doctor man. Doctor go away of room.</p>
<p>Love,</p>
<p>May

DX Oh goooossssh. Poor May! I just want to bust her out of that place.

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Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
Oh My Shinwa, we thought
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Just got the message as well.

I hope you feel better soon, May! I hope the monster wasn't too scary. D; This story is so intriguing. I just want to know more and more!

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Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
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Erasure

He gave you a... severed thumb? Your own severed thumb? What a... nice guy. But at least he's not being mean now... I hope you get out soon, May.

Man, I am so honored to be a part of this anon gifter.

Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
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SPOILER (click to toggle) Dear daiary.

Nurse go away. Then there is loud sound. I am scared.

It go again and again. Small window have lightening.

I hide in blanky. In lightening i hold Mari. I no like lightening.

There is loud sound again. Sound is laughing. Mama say to me there is monster in bed. I no like monster.

Door open. There is noone in door. It is dark. Dark scare me.

I wanna miss nurse go here to white room. I say loud miss nurse miss nurse.

I see dark thing in door. It go to me. The eye is red. Teeth is scary. Is this monster? It take my neck. Head is heart. Neck is heart. I no can breathe. Monster make noise and bite my lazy arm. It is happy.

I run away. I no like white room. I no like monster. I no like hopital. Monster run to me.

He take me with sharp shiny thing. He throw me and laugh bad.

I cry and shout... Help... please help...

I wake up. It is bright in white room. I see big man doctor. He have shiny and pretty metal thing. They look like letter L. He no look mad.

He say are you ok May. I say i am scared. He say am I heart. I say monster throw me and bite my arm. He laugh bad and have red eyes. I run and i have sick.

Doctor laugh. He no laugh bad. He hug me and say it is ok. Monster no hurt me. Monster no real. He is my Papa now. He no let monster heart me. I push. I cry.

You no my Papa. Papa is my one Papa. Papa go away.

Doctor say i no under stand. He love me and Mama. He wipe my face. Its ok May no cry.

I look at lazy arm. I have arm no more. I say to doctor where is my arm.

He pull thing in pocket. It have pretty yellow ribbon. I like ribbons.

I ask what is that. He say remember i want to keep arm. I say yes. He say my arm no more good but thumb is ok. He give me thumb in ribbon. It is cute.

I ask am i ok now. He say i have gonna stay in white room more. I no like white room. He say i am no ok. I have sick. He say to me later.

Thank you big doctor man. Doctor go away of room.

Love,

May

Wow, it's getting scarier and sadder with each step but I'm looking forward to hear what happens next - thank you, anon! <3

Dec 21, 2013 12 years ago
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Way to go doctor. Tie a bow around the severed finger. That'll make it less scary.

Poor May though. Just seems like no one wants to explain to her what exactly is going on. D: Everything might be a lot less scary if they did. Or maybe it's just scary for real. D:

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