Pure's Pet Story Shop v2.0 (temp closed)
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No problem at all, no rush. Just didn't know and didn't want you to forget me. :) OMG I don't envy you at all! I remember when a bank I worked for updated from paper and a very basic computer system to full on anything but basic mainframe. We had five banks of info and it was horrible! Not only converting all the files, but learning it at the same time. I'm sure that's what you're doing too. We were working 16 to 20 hours a day for several weeks. So happy when that was over! And it was so much easier and better afterwards, too.
Yeah, there's a whole conversion to an e-filing system on top of what I'm doing so I basically get to deal with a lot of crabby assistants every day but it will be worth it once everything is converted over and everyone has the basics down. Our attorneys certainly love being able to access everything remotely.
I think I forgot to mention in my original post that Freeze's draft is posted. Here's the Link again. Let me know if you want anything changed. If not, I have Trade Lot and this was a standard story for 10 mil (with the group discount applied :)).
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Oh, no you didn't tell me! I love it, Thank you so much! I have another when you get to it. Please put me on the wait list. Thanks!
Majesty
Pet Name: [pet not found]
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Setting: Veta Lake
Personality: He is reclusive, and leery of everyone except those he knows well and also likes. He has been taken advantage of many times and swears he won't ever be again. He makes very few personal appearances and does no interviews or business at his treehouse, except over the computer and then the background is disguised. His personal life is completely off limits and he is quite adept at changing the subject or distracting to something else. If the other person does not get the hint, he graciously but firmly ends the interview and will never do another with them. With his few but very good and lifelong friends, he is relaxed, fun, witty, and laughs a lot.
PoV: Whatever you wish.
Physical Traits: He is a custom Lilac Noktoa, that looks like this. Incredibly beautiful, and in body shape looks a lot like the Chirrup with a fluffy tail.
Likes/Dislikes: He loves writing science fiction based spy novels and thrillers. He has been quite successful, esp with a series with the same character, some of which have been made into movies. His books are clever with twists and turns that leave the reader breathless and very satisfied at the end. He and his girlfriend love to play cards, charades, and board games with their friends. He is competitive but good natured and a good sport.
Other Characters: His minion Magic the Arctic Chirrup and his girlfriend, a lovely gold Noktoa with white highlights, whom he has known a long time and now they have been living together for years.
Preferred Length: Standard
Anything Else?: He is good friends with fellow authors Shooting Star and her husband Talmere. He lives in the same forest and in a similar tree house not far away from them. He has the same publisher.
Shepards draft is amazing, good punch in the feels ahh! Also replied to you regarding Eva's story and there is no rush on it, so don't worry! Im aware it's a large project xD
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Yes pls!
"We're reaching levels of stupidity that shouldn't be possible."
Sounds good! I have Trade Lot for Shepard and this one was a character sketch for 7.5 mil or 75 csc.
Great! Post the form whenever you get the chance.
Will do. :)
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Sorry about that! I wasn't home when I answered lol.
Required Pet Name: Milano Setting: A bakery (she specilizes in cookies) Personality: Silly and sweet. Goofy but not clumsy. LOVES baking puns.
Optional PoV: Up to you! Physical Traits: She has an overlay! She's based on the RL milano cookie lol. Feel free to put her in a standard kitchen work uniform! (I couldn't draw it on the overlay) Likes/Dislikes: Likes Cookies, baking, puns, cold weather, hot cocoa. Dislikes sour stuff, cooking (if it's not baking she's gonna burn it), squirrels, and hot weather. Other Characters: Shortcake/Shortie! Milano works in her bakery, and really looks up to her since Shortie has more than one specialty. This is Shortie if you need to see her! Preferred Length: Standard please! Anything Else?: Have fun with it! It doesn't have to be super accurate or serious. I mostly just want something that makes people smile when they read it. :)
"We're reaching levels of stupidity that shouldn't be possible."
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I love it, Thank you so much! Please set up the trade. Can you please add me back into the queue? I have another when you get to it. Thanks!
Puddles
Pet Name: [pet not found]
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Setting: Your Choice
Personality: He is fun, and cheerful and loves to play. He laughs a lot. That is, when it isn't supposed to storm, actively storming, or just passed. He is terrified of them.
PoV: Whatever you wish.
Physical Traits: He is a Storm Ruffie, very young, still considered a puppy, tho on the far end.
Likes/Dislikes: He loves rainbows because they signify the end of the storm and because they are bright and beautiful. He loves sunlight, moonlight, starlight. Any kind of light. He hates rain because it might become a storm.
Other Characters: His minion Huggy the I-Love-You Rainbow and Tempest.
Preferred Length: Standard
Anything Else?: I would like this to be a story of him searching for Tempest, and finally meeting her, becoming friends. Slowly getting better. His mother said she was known to be a lovely generous soul and could help him overcome his fear of storms. She bought him books about Tempest and would find others to tell him stories. Eventually he finds or trades for a to get him noticed by her.
Ah! It's perfect! It's so cute! <3 (The squirrel bit made me giggle, I'm still laughing ngl)
Trade? :D
"We're reaching levels of stupidity that shouldn't be possible."
I have Trade Lot for you and this was a standard story (group discount applied) for 10 mil.
I have Trade Lot for you and this was a standard story for 15 mil or 150 csc.
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You're all paid up, no worries. (I also have you slotted for the next story.) :)
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@ Pureflower
Hi! Can I get a sP slot please? :)
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Pet Name: [user not found]
Notes: I'm after a story that can be written in a similar way internet creepypastas are. If you're not familiar with them, they usually are cheesy and super straight-foward, a bit lacking in plot cohesiveness and use internet slangs and language. I know your writing is very well polished, would you feel comfortable with this one? The "Setting" turned out SO long because I had a lot of details for this in mind already, I'm just not good in putting everything into a narrative. I'd really like to have all that in the story, so I have no idea how long the final piece should be. Would it be ok to just let you work on it and then pay whatever you decide?
Physical Traits: [xxx]
PoV: I would love a 1st pov but it's up to you.
Personality: Reclusive, coward, anxious, low self-esteem, way too intelligent+captivating+pretty for anyone's good.
Setting: Sean is a 23 years old man who just dropped out of college and is living with his parents. He has always been reclusive but now he's pretty much isolating himself in his room with his new computer. No job, no girlfriend, nothing. It's 1998, he's just discovering the world wide web, but he's more interested in the not-so-good side of it: forums and chat rooms about true crimes, conspiracy, and bigotry groups. As time passes he only becomes more and more alone - he's ignoring all his former friends and dedicating his time to his new internet pals. One year passes and one of this chan guys grows closer to him, they exchange PMs and talk about their life to each other. They get quite close and exchange personal info. Then the friend just disappear, he's never seen online again - Sean assumes it's just another thing that was taken away from him, but in that same week a package arrives at his parent's door, from this now gone friend. The package contains a floppy disk, that when played showed a short video with images from the future: death, disease, toxic waste and blood covers the streets of his city. It's a first-person video of a camera walking down a street, recording all the destruction, until it reaches his parent's house. It slows points to the window of his room, showing it covered in blood. Right after the text "9 lives, 9 holes, 9/9/1999". Sean gets extremely shocked by the images and specially by the fact that his house is in there, he has never seen anything like that before, that technology just didn't exist in 1999. He heard of legends of an apocalypse coming with the year 2000, but those were just creepy ghost stories. Right? He spends many nights locked in his room without eating, drinking or doing anything but panicking. His brain reaches an stage of pure flight/fight response. What if those stories were real? A prophecy? What is he is now part of it? He just couldn't let that happen. He decided to take action. By September 9th, 1999, Sean had gathered 7 individuals in his basement, women and young child. All tied up. He would do what the prophecy instructed him to. In the end of that day, he confessed what he had done to his parents, who rushed to the basement to free the victims. Sean stabbed them 9 times in the back. Then he did the same to the others. Before midnight they were all dead, Sean was just lying in the blood, feeling the greatest rush of relief he had ever felt. It was done, his part in the prophecy was done. He hears the front door opening, his older sister came by to pay visit. The second he hears she calling his name the rush is over, Sean starts crying manically, unable to stop himself. His sister hears him and rushes to the basement, fearing he got hurt down there. She opens the door and sees that scene... Sean looks her directly in the eyes and makes a "shhh" sign with his finger. "Please, don't scream".
so sorry to ping you again, but if there's still time could you keep this one either a Standard or a Long story please? I imagine you already assumed that since I didn't offer a bribe but I just wanted to be sure ;u; thank you
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I've got all 10 parts of Evalys' story posted. They're kind of interchangeable except the Scarlet Skeleton sections since they have a clear Part 1/Part 2. This is the longest single request I've done in 7 years of taking requests. =D Total word count is at 7.2k as the story stands now. Price on this one as is will be 300 mil or 3k csc (split payment is totally fine).
I proofed each section after drafting and did a master copy proof but with a story this large...it's a lot of ground to cover. If you do find any typos, please let me know and I'll gladly make corrections. Also, if you want further sections, I can certainly do more but wanted to get you drafts based on the original outline.
I wasn't specifically familiar with creepypastas going into the draft but I do read a lot of alternative fiction. I'm fascinated by it. In fact, one of the books I read earlier this year (House of Leaves) started out as drafts on an internet blog, I believe, and was later turned into a novel. Not sure if that was like an early version of the creepypastas but I was able to draw inspiration from it. This story is meant to be disjointed yet readable. It's got different formats like email messages/instant messages that were all the rage in the late '90s. (Writing that makes me feel old, lol.) Please let me know any changes you'd like.
I made Puddles' story the sort of feel-good piece that seemed to fit someone on a journey to find Tempest and get one of her bear hugs. :) Please let me know if you'd like any changes. If not, I have Trade Lot and this was a standard story with group discount for 10 mil.
I just wanted to give a quick update. My husband is still working through the game. Between weird work hours and a brief hospital stay, he hasn't had much free time for gaming but I certainly haven't forgotten about Tiny Tina. =)
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Thanks for the update! :) I appreciate it!!
Can I go ahead and request another story in the meantime?
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can I be slotted into the waiting list? Thanks.
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art shop: Maximoff&;s (Kush’s) Art Shop
pet story booth: Pet Story Booth by Maximoff ✨ [EMPTY SLOT]
Absolutely! I should have slots opening in the next day or so.
I have you on the wait list. Feel free to post the form whenever you get the chance.
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I really have no words!! I was expecting some deep detail since I gave you a lot of info + I know you have the talent to depict scenes and characters perfectly, but this... It's really much more than I could have ever expected, it's truly perfect :' )
All I have left to ask is: how aren't you a famous published writer yet