Yes, please! That would be great!

The firdt batch was denied because of the following reasons • OVERLAY: Lacks lineart • ITEM: Item background is not white • NOTE: The overlay needs some type of lineart since it is meant to be glasses/goggles. • NOTE: The item is transparent and needs to be on a completely white background.

I can fix the transparent item (something I totally forgot about!) But I can't seem to figure out a way to include line art for the visor :s I'll ask around and try and figure something out Thank you for your patience

Thanks for the update! ^^

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Problem with lineart is it'd start to look like

Doesn't Satya's visor attach through like a headband?

Yea I was worried about adding black line art to it because then it'll look solid, and not... holographic? Hah..

I'm working on it still so don't worry I haven't abandoned this! :D

Thanks for the update! I hope you figure something out :o

Her Vishkar skins have a visible line denoting where the visor starts and stops so maybe that would be a way to go?

I almost said Oasis and went, "Wait a sec..."

So I think I'll just give up on this hah..

The feedback on the upgraded version wasn't too supportive of the style I'm trying to go for and there seemed to be more issues with the item than there were before even though I just added the white background.. Anyway I don't think any amount of corrections will green light the item as how I want it to look, as I don't want to give it black lineart as it'll make it look like something else entirely. As it is meant to be a light source of itself, it's hard to give light shading.. I don't think I'm skilled enough to really capture this item in it's full glory and so I'll stop here. Sorry to disappoint you all :(

Your custom clothing Aqua Holographic Visor was denied for the following reason(s): • ITEM: Shaky, rough, or inconsistent lineart • OVERLAY: Colored lineart and/or lineart so thin it appears colored • ITEM: Blotchy shading • ITEM: Ambiguous shading/light source unclear • ITEM: Not enough area shaded (too much left flat and unshaded) • ITEM and OVERLAY: Tribute reference and/or four changes from the tribute reference were not provided • NOTE: For any tribute item, a list of at least four changes must be provided. • NOTE: In order for these to be considered glasses or a visor, this would need to have black outer lineart so that it looks like a physical item. Otherwise, if it were some sort of holographic overlay, it may need to go into a different category such as partial backgrounds. • NOTE: The item is suffering from shading that doesn't really give the item a defined light source. Additionally. the shading itself is a bit sparse and blotchy, making the item look somewhat flat.

[edit] I forgot to respond to you and I didn't want to leave it as if I was ignoring you! Sorry! The vishkar visor has that little nose piece which make it look more like sun glasses, that /could/ work, but I'm feeling really unmotivated to try a 3rd attempt, especially as I'm so busy now and don't get chance to come on the PC very often these days :(

I didn't take it as such, no worries.

That's just a nitpicky list of rejection reasons, yikes. I'm sorry it's turning into such a hassle to get a Sym item through.

Thanks for the update. Maybe if it wasn't seen as a solid item, they critique will be different? At the least, the light and black line art might not be issue, I hope. Their suggestion was to submit it as a partial background, but of course, that will up the price.

Though I understand if you are no longer motivated. No worries about it! ❤️

wow that sucks. I dont blame you for wanting to give up.. because black line art kinda ruins it... would have made a cool visor for Sailor Mercury. I know we have a non cw version. but the one you made looks cool with how it glows. ;o;

Anyways. Sorry that this got denied for way too many reasons. Not mad if you decide that it isn't worth trying to fix and just not seeing it as what you originally planned.

aww im sorry to hear about all the denials :(

If you'd like to give it another shot ,let me know! I have discord also if you want, I'd be happy to try to help you get this onsite (i can stream as well if you like)