One more tense shift that somehow I didn't notice until just now! At the very end you have "chuckles" and "pats" when everything was written in past tense (I think!). I think it should read:

“Surely no more disgusting than those hairy feet,” Terry said coldly and the poor girl blushed. “Now watch the hair dry and fall off.” Magically, the hair turned to ashes leaving her feet perfectly beautiful. “Now look at that, you actually have toes!” She chuckled and patted the girl's shoulders. “You are cured.”

I'm glad was able to give it a read-through as well - the more eyes the better!

Once again thanks for all the help- your corrections are great!

Best of lucks to as well and thanks for the help too.

Also thanks to who fixed my original mess xD

[Edit] The entry was made if anyone wants to see.

Wonderfully done Merlin! I'm off to post mine as well since I'll be gone tomorrow.

Good luck ! Wish I could've helped more tbh. I think your entry is great~

you help a lot! -hugs- really you did.

best of lucks to Hogwarts!!