Nicely done, artistic department! Still looks like a Donadak, but an improvement on the original. I love all of the colors :) <3

Looooovely update. The shading looks so much better now.

I do have one teeny tiny critique to point out as something that I hope doesn't carry on into future redraws - the outside corner of the eyes no longer curves inward. I know the cheeks are pushing up over the lip of the eye, but I think we should still see it. without that itty bitty curve, the eyes look a lot more flat. Like how donald duck and co have very flat, graphic eyes, you know?

Its such a small thing - but everything else looks so good, so the tiny bit of missing lineart was immediately apparent to me.

Aww, they are much cuter now. The eyes are big and round and happy and it looks like a sweet and friendly pet.