I love Fluido's story. I noticed a couple grammar issues that you might want to fix. I am really good at noticing these kinds of things, it's both a curse and a blessing. I am always finding mistakes in printed books and materials and it just stops me in my tracks and I have to fix it in my head. Lol

"practice to leran to control..." should be 'learn' I think.

"would be punished for taking to long to obey..." the first 'to' should be 'too'

Thanks! Me and my grammar corrector missed them ;P

You're welcome. :) It's a lovely story!

My Tili is a whale :D

thank you, added! Tili is lovely u

Sorry I never got the ping to come back here, strange. Decided to check on my own.

I understand, no problem. I hope you found what you were looking for. ^_^

You are welcome to add Waterfalls if you want.

I did, thank you!!