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Apr 27, 2021 4 years ago
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Yeah I think you guys are right, after seeing the examples.

While we all are here tho I wanna point out to:

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I think this item counts. Zapper Version 2 no longer exists. It&;s called "Ultimate Pet Zapper" instead.

Edit 02/05/2021

Punctuation mistake. It has two periods!

May 2, 2021 4 years ago
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Dexter

This is fixed

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May 2, 2021 4 years ago
Sopheroo
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Hyacinthe

The new Skelly Jelly Chews have names that match the Belly Jelly Shots, but the old ones do not. They should be renamed ;)

Red Skelly Jelly Chew -> Cherry Skelly Jelly Chew Blue Skelly Jelly Chew - Raspberry Skelly Jelly Chew Green Skelly Jelly Chew - Lime Skelly Jelly Chew Purple Skelly Jelly Chew - Grape Skelly Jelly Chew Yellow Skelly Jelly Chew - Lemon Skelly Jelly Chew

May 3, 2021 4 years ago
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@ Sopheroo I agree, but just adding on one that got left out

Red Skelly Jelly Chew -> Cherry Skelly Jelly Chew

[edit]Came across another case of a plushie not having the word "plushie" at the end of the item name

should probably be changed to "Vintage Donadak Fair Prize Plushie"

May 16, 2021 4 years ago
Anoniemmus
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Burningwaves

Bubble Tea vs. Bubbletea VS.

Bubble Tea is correct Names to be changed Descriptions to be changed

May 22, 2021 4 years ago
jensen
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RM

blub minion (newest set)

vs

just blub (everyone else)

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May 22, 2021 4 years ago
Amber
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Taco

pinging myself to this thread so I actually go through things this weekend!!!

May 22, 2021 4 years ago
Thia
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is in the head layer for some reason, but the other items in that line (or at least the ones I have) are in the hair layer.

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May 22, 2021 4 years ago
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Florestina

should be "Gray" as all other color descriptors are spelled that way.

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May 22, 2021 4 years ago
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Bella

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pinging myself to this thread so I actually go through things this weekend!!!

In that case, I've updated the OP again after over a year. [sub]Go, me! [sub]Just kidding, that's terrible attentiveness[/sub][/sub]

that kind of report goes here instead: Items in Wrong Wardrobe Layer MEGATHREAD although it seems to be already reported.

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May 22, 2021 4 years ago
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Oh, well, good to know for the future, thanks.

[edit] I thought maybe I should clarify why I think is inconsistent (it occurred to me it might not be obvious to everyone). This is what the graveyard irion looks like If the item had a different design, the name would be fine. But, although there are some small differences, it's very close--close enough that I'm pretty sure it is in fact meant to be a graveyard irion. That's why I think the name should be changed, and maybe the description as well.

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May 27, 2021 4 years ago
Anoniemmus
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Burningwaves

And a new one This would be a space VS. no space thing if there were any that were spelled correcty but there are none so here we are (it is probably a spelling error then but I am not going to make seperate reports for each item). witchdoctor vs. Witch Doctor/Witch-doctor Witch Doctor or Witch-doctor is correct there's only this set to correct and also only the names

Also not shure why there's "-" In "New-Era", maybe someone with more English grammar knowledge than I knows if this is correct or not. If it is incorrect the "omen New-Era High Priest" set might need a name edit too

A second thing Geographical locations in descriptions that are not capitalized Used this grammar guide if anyone wanted to check, the rules are around this are a bit complicated

Uncapitalized lands and mentions of the planet/world Subeta (not when the website is meant)

Because Delphi Beach is (likely) the name of the beach, the beach part has to be capitalised. Same goes for the Shadowglen Graveyard, Veta Lake [item=][item=][item=]

It has been mentioned before so listing it seperately, The Underground is a proper geographical location so should be capitalized. It is also possible to argue that the location of The Underground can not be refered by just "Underground" and therefore "The" is a inseparable part of the name (like in "The Hague") and therefore the "The" in "The Underground" should also be capitalized. Just listing the subetalodge list since there's so many

I als noticed that the maps of most lands have a excerpt from the subetapedia at the top, all except Shengui Guo and The Omen Islands (also Atebus/Ziara City, Port Plunder and Delphi Carnival but those have no subetapedia entry).

Also most descriptions that say "in Subeta" might be wrong. We do not say in Earth or In Venus, neither is "in" a good descriptor for stuff on a website, you would not say in facebook or in tumblr. On Subeta is the correct form for most. A good way to check is to in your head replace “Subeta” with “Earth” and see if it still sounds correct. So most of these are wrong Except: And this one needs to be “of Subeta”

Is plucked from Ikumoradeekanox on Atebus yet description says “- this fruit is actually one of the most nutritious you'll find in Subeta”. It finding its way to the main planet is not impossible but it might be slightly misleading as where to get it. I propose changing it to “ on Atebus”. [Item= Maniacal Skull Fruit]

And last but not least Subeta Pet vs. Subetapet It is only a thing in descriptions and since it is not a real word I can't just google it. Subeta Pet Subetapet

May 28, 2021 4 years ago
Solsticesprite
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Marvelous post! I like almost all of the proposed changes.

Do we know by lore that the beach in Delphi is Delphi Beach, instead of the beach in Delphi whose name we don't know? Do we know by lore that the lake in Veta is Veta Lake? Just like Arctic Frost is composed Tormirgaard and Ytiva, and Sacred Lands is Saherimos maybe these features have local names. Fixing the grammar here locks them in.

It is certainly true that even though there is one long long long continuous beach in Los Angeles County, different segments are named by the locals and the administrating city(ies) or California.

There is another Underground, beneath Ziara City. At the time those determiner-less items were created there was only one Underground in the game; that one is in Shadowglen. It didn't need a the. Now that there are two, I don't think that that is the one of them gets to use a The.

If anything the Underground in Ziara, while it is 'new to' the toffs that run the Masquerade and therefore to us clueless users who live on the planet of Subeta most of the time and only visit to party and dance our feet off for a few weeks, isn't new. It is older and has precedence. Atebus became independent of Subeta and was socially stratified by NPC Calvin Blackmoon long before any users suffered the experience the Great Pandemic.

It was a thing years ago to talk about subetapets as if they were like neopets. It is a relic of how old those items are. We don't do that anymore. They are our pets, and not Subeta pets or subetapets. I think the word 'subeta' should be removed whether there is a space or not.

Jun 6, 2021 4 years ago Official
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Taco

Slowly but surely working on this! Going from the top to bottom from the original post and so far:

⁃	Blub minions that had ‘minion’ at the end have had that bit removed
⁃	Skelly Jelly Chews have been updated
⁃	 Zapper Version 2 Liability Waiver is now Ultimate Pet Zapper Liability Waiver
⁃	Undead Irion Figurine is now Graveyard Irion Figurine, description is updated as well
⁃	Sewing Hoop is now Embroidery Hoop
Jun 6, 2021 4 years ago
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"Skelly Jelly Chews have been updated"

lol! I made a "wearable skins" thread yesterday and was matching those up by color. Funny timing, also thanks for the updates!

Jun 6, 2021 4 years ago Official
Amber
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Taco

Updated ⁃ Updated descriptions that had “Bloodred” to “bloodred" ⁃ Fixed Whitewashed Papasan Chairs ⁃ Spectrum Fruit Plushie is now Spectral Fruit Plushie to match the fruit. ⁃ Raffle Ticket is now Forum Ticket ⁃ Scribble stickers follow the pattern of COLOR Scribble PET sticker now! ⁃ Plant Plushie Pots are now Plant Pot Plushies ⁃ Celinox Plushie Prototype is now Celinox Prototype Plushie ⁃ Angelic should now be what is shown in the subetapedia and profiles! ⁃ Added common prefix to items to match other items named after pet color ⁃ Morticlaw naming follows pet colors (Common, Arid, Bloodred) vs (Nothing, White, Bloody)

Some notesAngel vs Angelic is a nightmare. I’ll work on getting everything to be one (most likely Angelic) everywhere! ⁃ The Delicate Vintage Perfume Bottle and Vintage Cologne Bottle will be updated later to make it easier to find in the wardrobe when unlocking the hair styles. and have updated the system for redeemable wigs so I just need to sit down with them to see exactly where I need to change those things and not break everything haha ⁃ The item art vs names for the coupons: this happens sometimes when the artist that does hair coupons doesn’t realize there is already an unlockable hair with that name and I catch it way too late! I’ll bring those up with the artist <3 ⁃ Left vs right on items: I agree that it makes more sense to follow the example of Black Small Leathery Wing (Left). I will make sure to go through all the items like this but it’ll take a while since we have a lot of items like this!

Jun 6, 2021 4 years ago
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Bella

Updated OP and changelog.

It's likely not at all feasible, but I wish there was some kind of system in place that could be fed certain words to detect and flag them when they try to slip through so they can be held and manually changed.

For example, staff had decided that it was meant to be "Bubble Gum" with a space but since then, new "Bubblegum" items have slipped through. And I say "be manually changed" because there are still certain instances where automation could screw up, such as the color being strictly referred to as Gray except in the case where it's attached to Earl Grey because it's a name.

Otherwise some issues are likely going to go round and round due to plain old forgetting (which is understandably human).

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Jun 9, 2021 4 years ago
Thia
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Here's something that I thought about years ago, but forgot about it, and then seeing a in the DC reminded me of it.

There are a few items with "capsicum" in the name which I find a little odd. The first time I saw it, I had to look it up. Seems in some countries, bell peppers are called capsicums, but none of the items with "capsicum" in the name resemble bell peppers, and as far as I know it's not used in the United States (unless it's a regional thing). Alternatively, Capsicum is the genus which peppers fall into, so any pepper could technically be called a capsicum, but doing so is a bit like calling a cat a feline. Here is the Wikipedia article.

Furthermore, there are items that appear to be the same kind of thing as the "capsicum" items, but are called peppers.

These are the items with "capsicum" in the name

In comparison, these items are referred to as peppers or chili peppers

And since capsicum can refer to bell peppers in some countries, these are bell peppers.

Conclusion: the "capsicum" items should probably be called "pepper" or "chili pepper" (and the description for the beanbag would also have to be changed)

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Jun 9, 2021 4 years ago
Anoniemmus
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Burningwaves

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Seems in some countries, bell peppers are called capsicums, but none of the items with &quot;capsicum&quot; in the name resemble bell peppers
Pointy bell peppers are a thing, and the chocolate covered capsicum actually does look like one. But since the description mentions it is spicy, renaming it chocolate covered pepper probably still is the better option.

Jun 14, 2021 4 years ago Official
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Taco

I've been carving out 20-30 minutes here and there throughout the week to do housekeeping things like this thread, here are the latest updates:

SPELLING • Grey Bunny Flower Plushie is now Gray Bunny Flower Plushie • Pretty Ballerina Sticker is now Pretty Ballerino Sticker • Dessicated Wing Arm is now Desiccated Wing Arm • Fairy Tail vs tale has been changed! • Warador Plushie Ornament is now Warador Plush Ornament • Items with “vermillion” have been updated to “vermilion”

SPACE VS NO SPACE • Omen New Era sets: made it new era vs new-era, added space for witchdoctor • Bubblegum has been changed to bubble gum in name/descs!

Will edit this post if I get more done tonight <3

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