7/10. i've personally never liked monochrome ha's - especially monochrome black - too much; they feel a little lazy since you can get away with a lot without it looking too messy, but also look kind of boring if not executed well. in your case, your ha impressively doesn't look too messy despite having a number of different shades of black thrown together - i think the lighter, blue-tinted black in the cape matches with the black of the corset and your hair, so the colors still coordinate.

not sure how i feel about the legs, though. they almost look unfinished, but i can't place what seems off to me. maybe it's because i'm just not a fan of tights/leggings as pants under a short top in real life, haha. same thing with the jewelry - i like it as accents, but it doesn't seem cohesive, maybe because of the different art styles.

theme-wise, you've definitely got something going on. i'm not sure exactly what it is besides 'spooky skeleton lady' but your ha does look like it has a story to tell - always a plus! i tend to nitpick on technicalities so if your focus is more on telling a general idea than details (color-matching, texture-matching, etc) i think you're doing pretty well.

for anyone below - if you could tell me if these shoes look awful or not i would appreciate it. ;w; need a sanity check, i haven't made an ha in a year.

Your colors go together perfectly! ;A; It's super cute and your makeup is on point. But you're right...the boots look weird. A warm brown is a good choice but it's too much of just a block of color. Maybe something that will match the frilly things or beads in the hair, or with flowers/foliage on it. Or something simple that won't distract from the texture you did include.

I do love your HA and the lips work super well (I have those lips and have NEVER been able to use them!!) I would just suggest maybe a pearl bracelet to match the pearl necklace such as or something with smaller pearls!

Hmmm I think some more accessories that either contrast or complement the flare on the shirt would be cool though. However, the orange in the hat and the red in the pants don't really match at all, and I don't know if the background adds anything to the theme. I do like how face/shirt/hair combo, and I think the boots could go well with the rest. Maybe add some gold higher up on the HA - earrings or a hair accessory for example.

I completely agreed with your comments and went to add gold then got a ping about a wig being sold so yeah I bought it and changed my HA completely :')!! I really liked the top I had bought but had NO idea how to use it haha

anyway

9/10

I like the colour matching throughout and use of items, good layering! I would suggest a different mouth to maybe add some expression to your HA! Im also a fan of backgrounds so I think a night sky or starry back ground would be beautiful :)

6/10. It's a little too simple, I can't get the theme and I think without the nose, the face looks flat.

10/10 i really really love this avatar, and usually i like more simple ones. but they way you put these items together look great.

9/10 - Your HA is simple but perfectly corresponds with it's theme. It looks beautiful. I take 1 point off because of lips - they are pretty and the color fits but the whole HA gives some kind of ancient priestess vibe, and those lips look too coquettish.

6.5/10 simple but pretty. I like the avatar, I think the dress goes very well with all the pearl accessories and I love the contrast between the gold of the mask and the baby blue. However, I'd suggest using a different wig, maybe something brighter and maybe add some more gold accents to the outfit to match the mask. I also think the eyeshadow doesn't match up 100%, maybe something with a blue or golden undertone would fit better.

10/10 Wow, I really love your HA! Beautiful combination of colors and stylistic choices. If I must find a critique, then it's that I'm not sure that mask fits the best. I can see the you added white to your outfit to match. But what about using one of the new masks (teal Lacy stick mask)?

9/10 I love your color scheme. I would consider a different mask, but overall I like the effect!

8/10 I really like the outfit, background and color palette! However, I'm not a huge fan of the face items you used.

7/10 I like it, it's well done but I have seen these theme before many times and feel like it's lacking of something

again 7/10 but its not really original as I said in a previous post, I like the boots and facial expression but without a nose the face does like kinda peculiar - reminds me of the game Dead Rising

8/10 love your minions and jeans,but i'm not fans with haircut like that hehe

Can't really critique the ha because there's really not much of it visible I like the glowing lights with the background but I'd say maybe try creating an avatar with a fitting color sheme, or just the outline, maybe using the glitter gel

9/10 Really interesting and balanced look! You've color coordinated really well overall, but I would love to see more of the grey/green/black in your head/hair area. Right now the grey of the skirt isn't too represented.

9/10 Love it! Very well coordinated, but I also kind of feel like she's floating in space.

I don't have a number rating, personally the tribal/cave type theme/look isn't for me but I think that you've done a lot of work on your HA! If I had one critique it would be that the skull makeup and the eyes you have don't 100% match up to me, like, they're too close together but that's not something you can really fix.

5/10, there's a lot going on there :o There's some springy-ness in there but not much of it goes together, maybe work a little more towards an overall theme?