I really like it the way it is now^^ But otherwise I'd be interested in a (platinum) blonde or black version^^

actually it was the overskirt we were talking about releasing separately in different colors. I'd probably make a few adjustments and remove the moon if I do.

I like the dress all in one piece but I do like the idea of the overskirt being separate as well but with the moon attached.

I think if you remove the moon or maybe replace it with a star or heart or other shape that would work for the other colors. You could make a whole set, so like orangy/peach/yellow could be the sun, silvery/yellow could be a star, pink/red could be a heart or just any color other than the original twilight could be a star.

Also, I'm not sure about those loops on top of the overskirt if you release it separately, maybe they'll look better in the final product, but for now on the overskirt I don't really like how they look. If you wanted to make it a little bit higher with some peek-a-boo slits that's one thing, but the loops just don't work for some reason. Again, maybe it's just in the rough draft, maybe it'll turn out better in the final.

Also in the future if you did want to release the under-dress as a separate but layerable item I would say make it a bit more generic like remove the belt and the leafy/wrinkles pattern on the boobs and sparkles and then make there only be one line so either the one under the bust or a different one at the tiniest place on the waist, because the one on the hips like that just doesn't work with this style of a dress, it makes the HA's middle look too wide for a female, on the male HA it would look okay but you're gonna get less male interest in a dress anyway, so you probably wanna make it look more feminine. Or if you wanted it to look like a thick band make it so but not so thick. So if you wanted it to look like a thick band the lines should be one under the bust and the other at the tiniest place on the waist. I know you have it at the hip asa guide to where the slits start and you can still have them start there, but the thick line just won't be flattering there.

Sorry if this feels like I'm complaining or whatnot, I'm not. I just wanted to give out some ideas about the dress. I hope it's helpful.

@Cresenta

I still have to do the boy version and then I have to figure out a CI.

I love it! :D

will you just please auto slot me pretty pretty please? That dress is divine, it is so perfect. If I was totally incredibly rich I would heap you with CSC and ask for this dress done in deep purple, and deep green as well! maybe with stars in place of the moon for the other colors or yellow with a dangling sun I love your art.

maybe I will adjust the blue version of the tail in these colors. You could present it to the people who are already slotted and see if they like it better?

Alright guys this might be ready to go up tonight

I am personally fine with that and will gladly present it to them to choose. I need desperately to fill 3 slots, perhaps the slight color change will fill them. The current blue is gorgeous to me, but hard to work with... a blue that matches your dress would go well with lots of other clothing on the site, might be more wanted.

drools

GORGEOUS! I really hope I don't miss this item lol. If you're taking slots already, please put me on the list! :D

I also second recolors of this dress in a deep purple and with a star. I know the original is moon-based and night-like, but purple (maybe even aurora) with stars instead of moons would be stunning.

new WIP in first page (and several old WIPs) Checking for interest before continuing them.

That's weird, I posted and it took me to that stupid locked profile thread again.

Anyway my comment was: I'm not into black but it looks like it has a lot of potential. I assume you're coming out with it for Morostide so I think it'll be popular for that. Also, I think it would look badass with a train.

Oooh yes - like the bat-ish body suit!

I love the batty looking bodice thingy (and also the first corset under the spoiler)

totally interested in the bat body suit! and that short brown wig in the spoiler

I really like the bat corset thingy. :) Very spooky looking.

The batsuit looks gorgeous~!

Why must you make amazing things when I'm broke? Lol