Much better now, thank you :)

Once again, I'm so sorry for that! I also check it on my bf's monitor, and it was WAY off D: I tried painting a free bg earlier as well, but it looked...terrible. Absolutely awful D: But if I was talented, he would be on a rock and she would be splashing in the water bounding over to him :)

That's perfectly ok. If you keep working at it you'll get there. It takes practice.

Thank you so much! :) Trade is up, offer whenever you're ready :)