Cool, thank you =D Hopefully the last commission I did won't need anything changing and my commissioner will get back to me with sP by the end of the weekend, but it's not like there is a rush, if people are ahead of me then they're ahead of me, I don't mind =3

Hopefully I got everything correct <3 [X]

: ...I only have a few complaints:

1. It's a bit too chunky. The ref shows him as slender, very much meant for running and climbing and moving quickly.
2. The peacock feathers-...don't really look like peacock feathers. I hate to nitpick, but there should be some orange in the eye spots on them, and they should be a solid tealish color (a bit like this: [x] ). And they should flow more, I suppose? They're tail feathers, not wing feathers, so they're very flexible and there for decoration.
3. There are a few discrepancy issues regarding markings/body features. His horns are a frill that circle his entire head; the backs of his ears aren't gray. (I believe I wrote that on the ref picture.) Also, he has a teal blaze on his stomach that was not included in the piece. Another thing, straight from the ref: "his nose is 'beaked', like a reptile's." The white there isn't just a marking. Also, his tail is solid black except for the underscales.

He also looks a bit too shy...Oliver's very outgoing and friendly, just wary around his father.

I hate to be so picky, but this is quite a load of sP I'm dropping, and I'd like it to be as like the ref as it possibly can. :c I almost wish you'd shown me lines so I could have tweaked them before you spent all that time coloring it! It's probably going to be very hard to fix now.

Oh well. Uh. I checked a few of those out and hopefully I fixed a few of them? Is there anything I missed here?? [X]

: He still looks a bit chunky; the legs are much better, but the feet are too ungainly with the thinner legs...and the backs of his ears are still grey on the image you gave me. :c And the feathers still aren't teal enough...they should be the same color as the streak on his stomach. They're also a bit too...stiff?

If you'd like to bag off on fixing it a third time, I'm happy to pay you a fee for your work and seek the overlay elsewhere. :c I'm happy to pay you for what you've done, and I can understand if you don't want to work on it anymore.

Yeah. I'm actually extremely busy and barely have time to fix up my mistakes that I undoubtedly left behind. I'm okay with knocking off about 6-8 million or something a long those lines if that is fine?

Could I claim one of those sP slots and sMail you the details? c: The art would be a gift for a friend, so I don't want them to see. xD;

Sorry if my pings screwed up.

Everything as of this post is open. I have [0/3] Sp and [0/5] USD.

I will do Humans and Animals (New examples on the front page if you have not seen)

Just fill out the form if you are interested and post it as soon as possible.

Yes you may! <3 I'll be awaiting your smail :33